Flash: Long Loop

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I had been wanting to immigrate forever, but I have few saleable skills and even less money. While every planet needs workers – secretaries, assemblers, warehouse, retail – the chance to jump to the New Edens (as the advertising says) is limited by those that own the transportation and the land at the end of the trip. Most planets are bought by corporations or by corporations which masquerade as a rich family lines, and these businesses usually have things all sewn up. They have the special worker they want, the technician or scientist, and the related family needed to keep him or her happy fills all the other slots in the worker class.

Long Loop is an exception. Though having twelve hard-to-find mineral, as well as an amazing crop of flora and fauna for medical experiments, it has two major disadvantages. A long loop, creating long seasons, and a planet tilt that makes Earth’s tilt seem cute. This put the planet in the “discount bin”; too many other better, safer options were being found by exploration teams for the rich corporations to care even a little about Long Loop.

A coalition of small-time investors took advantage low cost; the exploration team just wanted to make back enough money so they could afford to go out again. And I took advantage of Long Loop Incorporated need for basic workers.

I am a stupid ass human being.

Today is day thirteen of the sun not rising at my latitude, on a planet for thirty-four hour days.

So flipping tired.

(words 262, first published 1/2/2022)

Writing Exercise: 50-Word Prompts 2021

WRITING EXERCISE

Okay. New tradition (three times makes it so). 50-word prompts as the December writing exercise. Since Writing Exercises are the third Thursday of the month, they tend to fall on or near the Christmas holidays. May as well have fun!

Quick reminder of the rules: Write two 50-word flashes. Aim for 50 words, give or take five extra words. Don’t read my attempts until after you do your own. Writing them directly in the comment section below will help you focus on the flash aspect – just getting words out.

TEXT PROMPT FOR 50-WORD FLASH: Elementary

VISUAL PROMPT FOR 50-WORD FLASH

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My Attempts

TEXT PROMPT: Elementary

It’s easy they said. Elementary. Basic. Simple. Bullshit.

Just get it started and everything will go from there. You know how.

Loki’s maternity saddle!

It’s easy-peasy, and I’m not going to let it conquer me. Everyone does it.

I tear everything apart and start over. Tape, wrapping paper, gift.

(first published 3/21/2022; 50 words)

VISUAL PROMPT

TITLE: R is for Robyn (Mom Eyes 1)

I look up. The eyes burning the back of my head made me look up. Fuckin’ superheroes. Her eyes burn down – not like Lazik, but Robyn had her own magic. They call her power “mom eyes”. You feel it, the expectation. She expects better of you, of everyone. The best humans can be.

I’m not even close.

I drop my gun, defeated before she even jumps off the roof.

(first published 3/21/2022; 69 words)

Series: Mom Eyes

  1. R is for Robyn (12/28/21)
  2. B is for Billy (4/3/22)
  3. H is for Hoot (4/10/22)
  4. N is for Natalie (4/17/22)

Series: 50-word Prompts

  1. Prompts 1& 5 (2/19/2017)
  2. Prompts 6 & 12 (2/26/2017)
  3. Prompts 7, 8, 10, 11 (3/19/2017)
  4. Prompts (The Mouse Roars) (3/26/2017)
  5. 50-word prompts 2018 (12/25/2018)
  6. 50-word prompts 2019 (8/27/2019)
  7. 50-word prompts 2020 (12/22/2020)
  8. 50-word prompts 2021 (12/28/2021)
  9. 50-word prompts 2022 (12/17/2022) – forthcoming

Flash: Jingle Balls

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“Jingle my balls,” Karen muttered carrying the metal red globe like a meteor hammer, wrapping the ribbon around her right hand. “Jingle my balls. I’ll jingle your balls alright. Enough is enough big guy.”

The office party was talked about for years to come.

(words 44, first published 9/14/2022  – from a picture prompt for a Facebook writing group. Aim is about 50 words)

Flash: Energy Alignment

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“Enya,” Cressida ran her hand down the energy super’s back, “have you been visiting your family again?” A tense of muscle answered the question without words. Cressida pressed firmly on the bunched flesh. “We’ve talked about this.”

“It’s the holidays. They are family.”

“They are toxic. Half your chakras are spinning too fast and the rest, too slow.” Cressida drew her hands down either side of Enya’s spine. “You can’t pass your energy if your Chakras are not aligned properly. You will burn up.”

(words 84; first published 11/25/2023)

Flash: A Chilled Reception

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“Are you sure you want the windows open Mr. Gladman?” The receptionist cranked open the third window while the presenters set up the workspace for the meeting, pulling in her charm. The company president hired her for her looks but didn’t appreciate being influenced by them. “We are fifty stories up. The wind is cold.”

“The brisk will keep us all awake.” The silver headed COO rubbed his hands together gleefully as the temperature dropped.

The woman, finished with the task, turned off the thermostat before leaving the meeting room and closing the door, grateful Mr. Gladman didn’t need her to take notes.

Marvin, Angela, and Mr. Wickin from the Power-ful Answers eyes lingered on the door, partially in a daze from her heady charm ability, and partially longing for the heat on the other side of the door.

The presentation they had would take nearly an hour.

Unfortunately for Power-ful Answers, while they had done extensive research on Mercy & Glad in relation to the marketing project they had been hired to prep, they hadn’t looked into the shell companies the company leads shuffled their money through. Mr. Gladman owned two of their competitors.

Like all supers, Mr. Gladman’s powers carried an obvious tell. In his case, victims felt cold as he drained their lifeforce. Once the annoyingly successful entrepreneurial team had collapsed, he called his adjuster to make them more open to a takeover. The mentalist never failed to give Mercy & Glad the inside advantage.

(words 248; first published 11/28/2023)