Flash: The Back Room

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The inn’s Back Room cracked windows released the some of the excessive heat created from the afternoon sun beating down on the building just mere hours ago, but soon the keeper or one of his sons would need to come into the well-appointed space and close them to keep the temperature necessary for sleeping against growing the late autumn chill as the sun dipped below the mountain range. In the meantime, a young nobleman paced while an older man sprawled on the settee, a book dangling between fingers to mark his place while he waited for Nigel to wind down.

“Have you made the decision to run?” Matthews asked. “I can have a ship ready for you before you make it back to Seaport.”

“I can’t do that, you know I can’t do that.” Nigel turned on the knotted wool rug to walk the other direction. “If I was going to do that, I wouldn’t have come this far. I would have run while in Kylar.”

“Then tomorrow morning we go through the pass.”

“Gods.” Nigel threw his head back in frustration, before executing another turn. “It’s so stupid. I thought I was safe.”

The old solider chuckled. “I know I taught you better than that.”

“There is no safety in war.”

“And?”

“The crown is either at war or preventing it, and therefore they are always in a state of war.” Nigel crossed the carpet again. “But Jackel has two children already. It should be one of them.”

“They are too young, considering.”

“Exactly.” Nigel ran both hands through his top-cut before throwing them out at his old mentor. “Thirty-two! ‘Considering.’ How is this even a consideration?”

“Treaties are made.” Matthews gave up waiting for the twenty-four-year-old to calm. Picking up his bookmark, he slid it between the pages and tucked the leather-bound treatise on horse breeding back into its velvet bag for storage with the other two books he had brought on this trip. “The merchant trade alone is worth a princely reward.”

The glare Nigel shot glanced off Matthews careless manner without effect. He hardened its steel and stared. Knocking on the door to the Back Room, startled him and drew both their eyes to the wooden barrier as it opened and the noise of the main room flooded in.

“My pardon, your Grace, your …,” the innkeeper coughed, cutting off his speech for a moment, as Nigel raised his eyebrows, “Sir.” He entered, a veiled lady traveler on his arm. “This good lady arrived seeking succor, and, as you know, with the harvest holiday, things are … hectic in the front rooms. May she share the Back with you?”

Rarely did anything trump Matthews station as Duke of Seaport. But a quick glance at the woman’s silk veil indicated crafting, if not necessarily nobility, the lacework being minimal around the eyes, then at least high merchant class, the delicate thinness of the fabric while retaining opaqueness was beyond the reach of all but the deepest purses, and as Nigel’s present dilemma revealed, accommodations needed to be made for those who ruled the trade routes. The duke stood, indicating with a hand sweep to the keep to install the woman the best seat of the room. She sunk, carefully arranging layers of green and teal skirts around her, heavy red clay clinging around the hems. She untucked the edges of her veil from the laces holding her bodice and blouse together so the bottom foot of fabric pooled in her lap.

Once settled, she turned her head toward the keep and nodded. “My Lords, it is my pleasure to make Mistress Zeriff’shazeriff known to you.” He stumbled over the foreign name. “Mistress, these are his Grace, my own Duke of Seaport,” Matthews ruled the land between the pass and the port and bowed acknowledgement of the introduction, the woman tilted her head slightly in return “and … Nigel, Knight of the Order of the Icey Pansy, Lord of … Ground-swell?” The keep looked toward the two noblemen for confirmation.

Matthews nodded, impressed the man had pulled one of Nigel’s lesser noble titles from the heated air, while his old squire grabbed his hat where he had thrown it hours ago and bowed excessively and said, “A pleasure.” The woman veil had puffed out when Nigel was introduced, but her head moved not at all after his obeisance.

“Your meal should be here shortly,” the plainfolk bowed to the men before turning to the woman and saying in a nervous rush, “and Mistress, I will have that foot bath ready for you straight away.”

The two soldiers shared a glance, Nigel giving a quick finger signal they used to exchange when he was squired to the duke to indicate troublesome officers with delusions of grandeur. The innkeeper hadn’t batted an eye having Matthews stay in the Climb’s Start for a week while the letter he sent ahead found Nigel and brought the young man back home from his most recent escapade, nor had he cared when Nigel finally arrived other than delivering the wanderer directly to his old mentor, yet this woman had already managed to get into the Back without a title and had the man rushing to meet her demands over the nobles. What kind of harridan was now ensconced with them for the evening and how soon could they extract themselves from the situation?

(words 899, first published 2/5/2025)

The Back Room series

  1. The Back Room (1/19/2025)
  2. The Back Room Part 2 (2/2/2025)
  3. The Back Room Part 3 (2/9/2025)

Writing Exercise: 50-Word Prompts 2024

Days are getting longer, finally, not that we are past the 21st. The deep winter celebrations have appeased the deities once again. Now to celebrate the birth of a child and the end of a calendar year. As I have done in years pass, we are working on two 50-word prompts: one text prompt from a single word and one visual prompt.

Have fun. Remember this is to be a quick flash or scene. See if you can tell a full story, but it isn’t required. Aim for only 50 words, give or take five extra (or fewer). Don’t read my attempts until after you do your own. Write them directly into the comment section to focus on the one-and-done aspect of flashes, just typing things out.

TEXT PROMPT: Angle

VISUAL PROMPT:

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My Attempts

Text Prompt: Angle

Kenton hesitated. Checking the laser guideline, remeasuring the angle, doublechecking the saw’s user guide for compatibility with wood fibers. He had never seen wood outside of pictures. Hauled over 100,000 AUs, this piece of wood was irreplaceable but needed shaping to repair something equally irreplaceable. He breathed deeply and pushed the button. (words 52; first published 12/30/2025)

Visual Prompt

“Everything in place?” At Robert’s nod, Desma dropped her breasts onto the clockwork half-corset support. Together they stuffed, tucked, and plumped the display within the linen overfabric and buckled straps before spraying gold glitter across her dark cleavage.

“I love you for this,” he said, meaning a dozen different things, his eyes sparkling. (words 53; first published 12/30/2025)

 

Series: 50-word Prompts

  1. Prompts 1& 5 (2/19/2017)
  2. Prompts 6 & 12 (2/26/2017)
  3. Prompts 7, 8, 10, 11 (3/19/2017)
  4. Prompts (The Mouse Roars) (3/26/2017)
  5. 50-word prompts 2018 (12/25/2018)
  6. 50-word prompts 2019 (8/27/2019)
  7. 50-word prompts 2020 (12/22/2020)
  8. 50-word prompts 2021 (12/28/2021)
  9. 50-word prompts 2022 (12/17/2022)
  10. 50-word prompts 2023 (12/26/2023)
  11. 50-word prompts 2024 (12/24/2024)
  12. 50-word prompts 2025 (12/25/2025)

 

Flash: Remembering the Reason for the Season

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The rocking chair creaked. Looking up and down the street, Douglas moved in the seat where he was wrapped in blankets. We should be inside, the weather was, well, December weather for the Northern United States. “Do you remember Christmas Lights?” he asked, the first words he had spoken to me in close to three days other than “whose cooking?”

What a question. “Of course I remember Christmas Lights.” I responded from the patio swing where I likewise was wrapped in blankets. Even if we weren’t inside, we should have been huddled together for warmth, but, well, he and I were in a spat so here we sat shivering separately like idiots. I took the olive branch. “I remember the green and red stage flooding the streets with surreal colors. Then the icicle stage where everyone though white was it and color was gaudy. McDonalds went into its gray corporate phase and visiting it with the sign-in kiosks made you feel like just a number. Then we got the inflatables with all those ridiculous overboard displays covering the lawns plus the projectors of scenes on houses with their swirling snowflakes and nativity scenes. It’s weird to think that Christmas decorations had a fashion, but they did.”

“What I wouldn’t give to have a kilowatt of that energy we wasted with all those displays.”

I pursed my chapped lips and gave a light whistle of agreement. “We were such wastrels. Why save anything? Untangling the lights wasn’t worth the trouble, into the trash bin.”

“Pine tree bought each year and put to the curb, not burned for cooking.” He bit back a chuckle-sob.

“Not that pine is worth a lick for cooking, the way it burns.”

“True.”

“We could do a Christmas wreath if you want.” I pointed out. “Hang it on the front of the fence here.”

“Nah, who has time for Christmas anymore?” He smiled sadly at me. “It isn’t like it is a Feast Day.”

We get three Feast Days a year by law. One to celebrate the breakaway of the Northern United States from the former USA. One determined locally for when the majority of the harvest is in and the excess cattle are killed. And one in the summer, because, well, we could rub in the fact we had reasonable temperatures up here to the relatives who remained in the Real USA Trademarked and the Reclaimed Lands to the west. We haven’t heard if the West Coast Mavericks have formed a union or just remained their crazy anarchist selves. Likely they have formed enough stability to have some sort of government as new movies are being released again.

“Speaking of food.” I shivered obviously under the blankets. “Do you want to help me prep some potatoes? We got an onion to use up. I was thinking potato soup with a bit of salted ham.”

“Sounds good. I’ll get some water out of the cistern,” He rocked forward to stand. “Do you think we got enough battery today or will it be firewood?”

I look at the cloudless sky but shake my head. “Solar isn’t going to be enough, not with how short the days are. Grab a bit of firewood for the stove.”

We folded the blankets and placed them inside our door. Before he went out with the bucket for the water, Douglas kissed my cheek.

(Words 561; first published 12/12/2024)

Flash: God Preserves

ID 74521121 © Jessie Eldora Robertson | Dreamstime.com

“Let us pray that God preserves us.” The woman lowered her head.

I knew I shouldn’t but I had to ask. “Are you sure you want to do that?”

“Of course. The almighty saves and preserves his favorites.”

“Okay, just checking language because my aunt saves and preserves her favorite foods all the time, and I am fairly certain I don’t want to be chopped, boiled, and canned.”

(words 68; first published 3/10/2026)

Flash: Turn Around Don’t Drown

ID 216511405 © Kirsty Nadine | Dreamstime.com

I grip and release the steering wheel again, the plastic-leather-wrap creaking just loud enough for me to hear it over the old F150 engine. Keeping my eyes firmly on the road barely visible through the sheets of rain blowing sideways, I allow a corner of my awareness to confirm my boyfriend still had his gun pointed at me from the passenger seat. Anger burns in my belly.

“Just a little further,” he said. “The boys can take care of you.”

He loves me. I told my mom. If we are to have a future, I must let him know.

She is gonna get a decade of I-told-you-sos out of this.

If I get out of this.

“You don’t have to do this.” I say to the windshield, puzzling out a rise ahead. One headlight is out, I meant to get it fixed for the past month, always something if you know what I mean, but the one that did work was coming through the storm like a camp. Something is gleaming to the side of the road on a pole. RR inside a circle. A railroad crossing.

“Yeah I do. Things like you are poison.” Jason shook his head. “I can’t believe I let you touch me. Kiss me.”

Feeling is mutual, pig. Feeling is now very, very mutual.

I slow as my truck climbs the embankment. Living in Texas as long as I have, my trust of the roads during heavy rains rivals my present trust of relationships. For good reason. The other side of the long division between cotton fields caused by the embankment reveals a churning vista of water.

“Keep going.” He waves the pistol like an idiot.

Pressing firmly on the brake, I crack a smile and say. “Nope.”

“Fuck, you. No. Get moving.”

A chuckle escapes. “Turn around, don’t drown.” I indicate the water ahead, previously blocked from our side of reality by the three-foot high embankment acting like a dam. “Not happening.”

“You drive a god-damn truck, keep moving.”

“It ain’t a tall truck. The spark plugs could get wet. Pretty sure the water is above my running boards.”

“Deal with it.”

I shrug. “Your funeral.”

“No, it will be yours. Keep moving.”

“I like this truck.”

“It’s a piece of shit.”

“But it is my piece of shit and paid off.”

He pokes me with the gun. “Drive.”

I could grab the gun. Probably. The new moon had me at the lowest of my powers. Even so, I still move faster than most humans.

It likely didn’t have silver bullets. Except, maybe.

I release the brake and go down into the flood waters.

The truck lifts and moves sideways as soon as we get off the embankment. There is no river nearby, but we are effectively in a river.

“What the fuck are you doing?” He raises the gun for a head shot while bracing himself for the recoil against the passenger side door.

“Me, nothing. Just doing what you told me.”

The truck is floating, I have no control. I take my hands off the steering and release my seatbelt.

I can smell the sudden change of his emotions and slam myself forward into the steering wheel. The driver’s side window shatters, and the back of my head burns. The ringing in my ears makes me want to howl. I twist into him, the hot muzzle blistering my hand as I grab for it. I feel the blood free-flowing down the back of my head. Or it could be the pouring rain. Nope, the rain is making the injury burn. I wish I could call my claws, but a palm slam into his nose will have to do.

The crunch is satisfying.

The truck tilts to his side with the change of occupant positions and continues to tilt, sliding us both along the bench and increasing the instability of the vehicle. At least his window is whole and the seal is holding for now. The engine sputters to a stop as water gets into the compartment.

The gun goes off again. Idiot. He takes out the back window since I had twisted the muzzle away from me, and water, real water, not just rain, starts flooding in. I yank the gun hand into the waterfall; hopefully the powder will stop working. Not sure modern guns have that weakness, but here’s hoping. The blisters heal under the flow of water; the back of the head does not.

Silver bullets. Bastard.

The steering wheel and gear shift had interfered with my grappling, but the slide takes me beyond them and I am now on top of him. With my free hand, I grab his throat and hold him under the stream of water. He fights like a drowning man.

I don’t have size or strength on him. Not when Luna is napping. But gravity and position are on my side.

Plus I have fought before. Fought for my life before.

Jason’s last fight likely was on a school playground.

Instinct has him change his grip on the gun, and I yank it away and toss it out the back window.

Pulling up my legs, I climb on top of him. His seatbelt holds him in place, water up to his neck.

“Help me!” he begs.

I don’t bother answering as I stand to get out the driver’s side window. I wasn’t up to fighting the flood waters coming in the back window, not with a head injury. I may have deliberately stepped on his face, pushing him underwater, as I climbed up and out of Old Sally.

Standing on the driver’s side of my truck, I look out into the storm as the vehicle rotates around in the flood. I can’t make out where the railroad embankment is, any trees, houses, anything.

Wait.

God bless America’s thirst for oil.

A crude oil pump is in the direction my truck is traveling. When the truck is as close as it is going to get, I jump as close as I can to the scaffolding. The flood grabs me like a riptide, but I manage to grasp the metal structure.

Only three days a month when I can’t shift and Jason had to choose today. The River Wolf in me, descended from generations of wetland canines, bolsters my strength as best she can. I pull out of the waters enough to wrap limbs around the metal bars. The back of the head still burns, but I am safe.

Well, safer.

Stable?

The water will subside at some point.

After catching my breath, I wiggle out my cell phone from my back pocket to see if survived.

Maybe a bag of rice could save it. I shove it back into the pocket.

It was going to be a long night.

(words 1,133; written 9/28/2024; first published 11/17/2024)