Flash: Twilight Hours

Photo 241261581 © Georgiy Georgiy | Dreamstime.com

The strip mall was typical, herb seller and cigarette store anchoring one end and pizza delivery anchoring the other. Packard remembered when the food anchor had been Chinese, but COVID chased the Panjins back across the ocean. In between drugs and food were a tax prep place, cursed vacations, and a title loan store. Darkness skittered away from the police spotlights, scattered furthered by the falling rain. Flipping the metal flask in her hand, Packard tucked it unopened back into raincoat’s deep pockets on the left side; the right pocket held her wand. The apple schnapps was getting low, and she would need a drink after seeing another damn dead body today.

Dashing from her compact, the contracted specialist ducked under the police tape and edged into the ten-by-ten shelter the cops had placed over the body. The drenched uniform who should have been by the tape nodded at her and stepped into the downpour to make room for her. They had met this morning shortly after dawn.

The camera kids were tucking their expensive equipment into bags, leaving only chalk marks behind. The rest of the parking lot was a wash, literally, as whatever evidence remained from the killer ran into the gutters. A detective had his badge clipped to the outside of his raincoat, trying, ineffectually, to keep the water dripping from his coat outside the chalk marks.

“About fucking time,” he muttered loudly to be heard over the rain hitting the plastic above them.

“Nice to see you too, Smithers,” Sabine Packard, Magik Consulting and Investigations sole employee, nodded at the detective. “Some of us haven’t slept yet.”

“Chief is pissed the Twilight killer is doing back-to-back days.”

“I’m too.” She walked around the body, belly open crotch to midchest on the young male, crouching down, quickly measuring the tear with her hands midair above the body. “It gets bigger each time.”

“By about six centimeters according to the lab geeks.”

She nodded, having heard this from Smithers day counterparts this morning. “What’s the bets for tomorrow’s morning location?” she asked standing in the space now clear of the forensic crew. The Twilight killer always killed one person at nightfall and another in the morning. The first death nearly four months ago. Nine days of her getting a call shortly after sunset and another just past dawn.

Eighteen, now nineteen bodies. Tomorrow, twenty, unless they figured out how to stop him or her or it.

“Monroe in statistics is improving the data and says West Side.” Smithers shrugged. “My guts says the Mall.”

Packard rotated the big onyx ring on her thumb she had inherited from her father. “Mall.” She did another rotation and then another, staring at the body. “But one of the strip areas like this one across the street.”

“Treebranch or Goody Goods?”

Packard shook her head. “Don’t know. Killer hasn’t decided … no, wait, the killer doesn’t decide.” Her eyes hazed over and Smithers pulled out his notebook and turned on his recorder.

“Doesn’t decide?” All the detectives in homicide and missing persons had been taught how to deal with a tranced clairvoyant.

Packard’s hard words softened, taking on a sing-song property. “Things escape where they wilt, crawling out into the time between. A killer feeds. A hand pets. Grow monster, growing yet. Feed me belly tum tum tum, swirling world come undone.” The consultant collapsed as though someone cut her strings.

“Oh shit,” said Detective Matt Smithers, dropping his notepad and rushing forward to keep her body from tipping over onto the dead man.

The woman looked up at the man holding her head above something stinky. “Joy,” she snarked, “something finally came through.”

“Yeah, some half-assed poetry.”

She let him move her until he laid her down, rain pouring down the edge of the tent onto her shoulder and back. Packard looked him a question and he nodded, indicating she was clear of the body and evidence contamination. “Sorry, only a quarter elf. My dad was capable of whole-ass poetry.” Placing her hands on the cement parking lot, Sabine pushed herself to standing. “Did you get it on tape?”

“Everything but ‘the killer doesn’t decide.'”

“Great, because my body tape ran out of juice sometime around noon.” Sabine wiped her hands on her raincoat. “I would have had nothing.” She nodded at the body, “Let’s have the body snatchers do their jobs, forensics must be getting bored, and you can drive me to the station.”

“Can’t you drive?” The detective asked as they walked away from the murder site through the rain, waving over the morticians and indicating the uniform had the scene until the higher levels who were canvassing the area came back.

“After being up thirty-nine hours and having a trance?”

The officer looked down at her, as he opened up the passenger side of his unmarked. “You are going to be snoring before we pull out, aren’t you?”

“If you don’t like my snoring, stay out of my bed Matt.”

He closed the door and walked around the vehicle. Sabine was already snoring before the car even turned over. “I’m trying, girl. I’m trying.”

(words 856, first published 11/1/2023)

Flash: Thirst Trap

Turkish scimitar with scabbard, with ornaments and corals, 18-19th century,isolated

Photo 70495356 | Scimitar © Valeie | Dreamstime.com

Criella looked over at Dolph, remembering when she drafted the kid into her unit all those years ago. Was it only three? They were dealing with some bullshit pirate activity hitting the small ports along the southeast coast and needed locals to fill out the ranks of the recently dead. She hadn’t expected the blond fifteen-year-old to last, either dying or deserting before the month out. And here the kid was, waiting like the veteran he was for the goblins to come pouring over the hill. She waved the fisher boy over.

“What do you want, lieutenant?” the youngster asked the tiefling in heavily accented Draconic. “Captain.” He said nodding at Ghesh, the dragonborn leader of what was left of the duchy’s army. Dolph made Sergeant when he managed to learn Ghesh’s native tongue enough to run messages and sit in on the meetings.

“We got some magic shit from that last battle with the redcoats.” She offered him a sword. “It’s a scimitar. Don’t know what it does other than has a solid edge. The mage only had enough juice to detect, not identify. There’s not much use for a scimitar in the normal ranks behind the shield wall, but with your fucked-up fighting style, maybe it will be useful.”

The kid’s blue eyes grew round. “A magic sword, for me?”

“Yeah, here.” She thrust the ruby-jeweled hilted blade inside a beat-up leathered scabbard at him. “Don’t say I didn’t give you anything.”

“No sir, ma’am, sir.” The boy lifted the blade just far enough out of the scabbard to see the beaten waves of the special metal – a fractal pattern of silver and brown-rust leading to the curved shinning edge of the blade. “Thank you,” he breathed. Dolph glanced at the captain then at the lieutenant.

After they nodded permission, he moved off and unbuckled his belt, taking off the standard-issued longsword. He then threaded the belt through the scimitar’s scabbard, playing with how it fell against his leg, balancing it against his daggers, and the javelin on his back. Next he practiced drawing it and the dagger until satisfied. After dropping off the hated longword at supplies, he rejoined his light unit.

They asked him for news, and he watched their faces fall at the no change in orders. Sixty soldiers against a horde of goblin meant fewer would be gathering around the chow wagon come morning. It’s been one nonstop battle for a month since whatever happened at the capital happened leaving only a hole where the fortress and city above Mirror Port used to stand. Took two weeks for the news to sink in, now everyone and all their neighbors were vying for a land grown rich on trading from their many ports and solid roads the old duke and his son had insisted on building. All he, his unit, and his leaders could do was keep as many of the local alive until the big guys figure out who owned what.

Tonight that meant they would be fighting goblins.

Mini, Marcus, and Rovindell formed up on Dolph as they moved to the flank of the regulars they would be guarding and melted into the trees. Mini and Rovindell took to the trees like Dolph would take to water if there had been any. He moved to Marcus’ left side to guard the arm the man lost four days ago. If they hadn’t been protecting a convent against the redcoat army attacking all the religions their country’s monotheistic church hated, Marcus would still be laid up. Instead he was out here, untrained and off-balance for his new body structure. Dolph muttered a quick prayer to his distant sea god for mercy during this storm and safe harbor at the border fortress town just two days march away they were trying to reach, hoping for reinforcements.

The first horns of the goblins sounded in the next valley. Wolf howls echoed, and smoke rose against the twilight sky. Hollerhome burned, a sacrifice in the war of attrition, most of the citizens behind their limited military lines walking, running, and riding away with the clothes on their backs, dropping the precious possessions they could not leave behind but didn’t have the energy to carry if they wanted to move fast enough to escape.

Full dark was three hours past when the first screams rose from the ranks closest to the rise on the other flank. The clear field stopped reflecting the silvered harvest stubble as the goblins poured in. Within moments Dolph knew there was no flank to guard against a surrounding maneuver. Hundreds of goblin broke as a wave against the shield wall.

“I would tell you to run…” he muttered to his fellow soldier.

“If there was any place to run to.” Marcus finished the thought. “Well, every death here might save someone in a port town.” He adjusted the shield strapped against his body, drew his sword, and rushed in.

Dolph just a step behind him, dagger and new scimitar at ready. A cut one side, then the other, the scimitar not fighting his two-weapon style, but not being overly helpful. Still much better than the overlong sword forced on him when he enlisted. He could feel the weapon’s joy at the bite into goblin flesh and the sing at the end of the slash, blooddrops flying.

Dolph did not notice the blooddrops flying back into the sword a moment later, the battle overwhelming in sound and darkness.

More slashes, a few dagger thrusts, his avoiding pikes and knives, some enemy attacks skidding along his leather armor, bolts bouncing off his helm. A bite here and there, but Dolph paid more attention when Marcus went down, the older soldier’s longsword gripped by a goblin so he couldn’t withdraw it to protect him from three pikers on his right. Blood flew as Dolph made his way to his fallen private, not caring about killing blows to protect his back from survivors as much as clearing space between where he was and where he needed to be.

Anger ate at him. The never-ending battles. The useless fight. Friends dying. And goblins, so many goblins. He let his rage take him.

Criella found Dolph’s body on the left flank by following the path of desiccated goblin dead, shriveled, drained of blood, dozens if not scores piled around his form at the end of the path. Her tail flicked with surprise when his chest rose and fell. The kid was sleeping. In his hand, the magic sword she gave him was gripped tight, and not a drop of blood on him. The fractal pattern in the metal a wet red. His armor needed replacement, but he looked remarkably healthy considering the amount and placement of the holes in the leather.

Well, that gift worked better than she hoped.

She hunkered down to study the curved blade closer. Damn, a thirst sword. Sorry about that kid. Still, Dolphin was breathing, which exceeded the state of half their army at the moment. And likely they had that much because of blondie and the blood blade. The goblin shamans had taken the mage the redcoats and the pearls left them before she and Ghesh could break away from the hobgoblin allies the goblins brought with them. Now their army had no magic except her small skills.

Dolph and that sword would be getting a workout.

After tucking the thirst blade back into the mangled scabbard, his right hand still wrapped around the hilt making it difficult as shit, she let out a shrill whistle. A nearby dragonborn corpsman responded and picked up the six-foot soldier to take him back to the wounded tent.

She pushed aside the question of whether to warm Dolphin about the curse effects. People got really fucking weird when she reminded them how close her bloodline was to actual demons. Dolph hadn’t yet but she hadn’t really, really rubbed his face in it. Once they made a full count of the living, she would bounce the issues off the captain.

(words 1342; first published 9/27/2023)

Flash: Birthday Dances (Cursed to Marry Part 1)

Tourmaline: rubellite, Madagascar (36.85), Brazil (13.16, 17.13 // 16.73, 10.26, 23.56). Photo © Joel E. Arem, PhD, FGA. – from https://www.gemsociety.org/article/rubellite-jewelry-and-gemstone-information/

David turned his bored gaze from beyond the thick fabric hanging he had tweaked aside to see the visitors to where Izzabella bustled in, shedding retainers and servants doing last minute twitches to her hair, makeup, and white frosted pink gown, a confection of silks, gaze, and crinoline. “Well, now, don’t you clean up fine, nursery.”

The young woman’s flashing blue eyes met the matching blue of her oldest brother, while she shooed away the woman smoothing her elbow-length embroidered lace gloves into place. Staring at him, she pinched her soft pink lips into a firm line, the lipstick not budging a testament to her entourage.

“Still not speaking to me, hmmm?” He ran a critical gaze over her outfit, noting the family jewels at her ears, neck, wrists, and fingers, frowning at the little finger on her left hand missing lace, the area at the bottom where the glove encased her hand frayed as though she cut it, and the ugly muddy-colored small gem stuck on an antique gold pinky ring she never took off which didn’t match a thing she wore. Not a battle for today, however warranted.  “Do you plan to keep this up all night?” David raised his left eyebrow.

Izzabella crossed her arms over her sweetheart neckline and sniffed, lifting her slightly pointed chin.

“At least you know how to dress,” David turned toward the fabric hanging and offered her his arm. “I wasn’t sure your little protest would have you showing up in the trousers of a horse-crazed tom-boy or a simple shift of a socially inept bookworm geek girl.”

“I know my duty,” she hissed quietly enough only the male servant waiting beside them. Placing her hands on the crook of her arm, Izzy edged her right hand to cover her pinky ring and so the Ezmerelda rubellite ring displayed prominently against David’s dark wool jacket, a relic from the only woman of their line who sat on the throne in her own name. Many Rowanwoods debutants wore the fuchsia pink set for the solstice ball, since summer limited unmarried females to whites and pastels, but Izzy chose it for many reasons beyond simple color.

“If you say so, though I haven’t seen it in over a year.” David, nodded to the servant. “Announce us.”

Izzabella couldn’t keep her hands from tightening in anger at his words. He always had to have the last word. She shouldn’t have bothered speaking at all. Keeping her eyes straight ahead, while ignoring her brother’s smirk as she released the tension in her hands, she waited while the servant stepped into the larger room. Beyond it, a signal crossed from herald to herald, then the curtains in front of them parted letting the quieted gathering see them. To their right, their father sat beside his latest wife.

“Crown Prince David Ramiro Hamlet Sancho Andwarder Colin of Rowanwood, Duke of Ravineruin, Count of Southern Seaport, Lord Constance of the Greenfields, Heir of Chormatica.” The male servant drew a deep breath, his red and black wool suit expanding. “Princess Izzabella Theresa Brooklet of Rowanwood, Lady Providence of the Heavygrain.”

The two climbed down the shallow stairs to circle around the thrones in the process changing positions until they in front of the king and queen with David before the king and Izzabella before the queen. The formal guards either side stepped toward them, hands on their hilts. Further back, along the walls, the real guards hands lay on their guns. Together the prince and princess sunk down on the large heavily embroidered pillow displaying the stag and wolf supporting a berried rowan tree in front of the gilded rowan wood seats, and in unison, they bowed until their hands touched their hands on the riser in front of the pillow. Out of the corner of her eye, Izzy watched her father’s feet as he stood. He motioned, and the sounds of boots scuffled back. Bent over as she was, releasing the breath she held seemed to echo between her hands; she would have been embarrassed if she hadn’t heard a similar exhale from her brother. The pillow and the risers, despite the best efforts of the restorers still carried bloodstains. No crown had dropped a hand in a century, and only once on an heir in the entire double millennium-long history of the kingdom, but their father had a new wife and could want to clear space in line for the offspring in her swollen belly. And he loved spectacle.

“Son. Daughter. Please rise.” The king of Chromatica’s voice rolled over them, to the audience and the cameras beyond.

Rising together, like they drilled for years, she and her three brothers, singly, together, and any combination of the four, the crown heir and the sole daughter of the Rowanwood house stood before their father. The older man stepped forward and kissed David on both cheeks, saying “You look well,” as though he hadn’t seen him in a while, though Izzy knew full well they had spent the morning like normal dealing with briefings and planning politics while she had been buried deep in stylists and seamstresses.

Personally, Izzy thought her brother looked haggard. She did pity him dealing with their extremist and incendiary father, but she squashed the sympathy, reminding herself she was still angry with him going along with the king and the cabinet of ministers on their approval of the Ravineruin Repurpose plan.

After the prince muttered his thanks, the king moved to her, kissing both her cheeks, his hands squeezing her shoulders tightly enough she had to clench her teeth to keep from crying out. There would be bruises in the morning. “My favorite daughter, happy birthday,” his words and her silence easily picked up on the directional microphones. “It has been an amazing eighteen years watching your grow into the fine young woman you are. I can’t wait to see what the future brings.”

“Thank you father.” Izzy dipped in a short curtsey getting her father’s hands off her shoulders, her movement causing them to drop naturally to his sides as if he hadn’t been punishing her. She debated continuing on or off script, but decide to continue her silent protest.

The king waited a beat or two for something more from her. His blue eyes darkened when she didn’t spout nonsense about her hopes and dreams of the future. “Please, my children, sit.” He waved at the empty seat beside him for David, and the closest of the three empty seats beside the queen. The two empty seats holding small coronets for the twins while they performed the military service. Making a second of eye contact with David, he gave the slightest movement and they moved apart to their respective seats.

Sitting beside the empty seats, Izzabella considered if her next duty would be university or military. Should she do Navy like Mike or Air Force like Sammy? David had done Army, like all Crown Heirs. That is, if her father didn’t seal a treaty with marriage. Not that happened much in the modern world, but little countries like theirs sometimes pulled that historic treasure out of their dusty misogynist texts. While she arranged her skirts, the king released the crowd to return to their music and merriment.

Some merriment. More like dealmaking, gossip, and appearance during the annual solstice ball. Everyone here paid a premium for the ticket, or the invite, going into the crown coffers to keep up appearances of royalty during an age of internet and television, though officially the event was a charity fundraiser. Looking at the queen, Izzy tried to make eye contact, trying once again to reach the woman. With the queen only four years her elder, she thought maybe they could be friends. The princess had a lot she could share with the noblewoman about how the ends and outs of their particular small pond worked, but Jennifer was determined to keep her distance.

Izzabella began to regret her silent protest. Normally she would have nattered about wanting to dance, and her father giving her permission to do so, at which point the gala would turn into a ball with her and David opening the first dance of the night. Stubborn pride kept her seated, despite several younger folks making eye contact, nearly begging her to bring the party to a start. But most of them know her protest, and some even agreed the Ravineruin River being dammed was ecologically unsound. Not exactly her reason for the protest, the actual reason being a state secret, but still the public reason satisfied even older decision-makers as an acceptable action for a young woman.

A woman worthy of putting in silks and fluff and calling Princess.

Izzy twisted her pinky ring around.

David said something quietly to the king before standing, making a small bow to their father, then crossing over to her and holding out a hand. “A dance for the birthday girl?”

She looked at it considering. It was her birthday and she could protest if she wanted to. She was a princess and she had a duty. Her shoulders were bruised and her stomach was still recovering from being on bread and water last month for refusing to attend the ground breaking ceremonies of the parks being built along the new Ravineruin Reservoir. The teens and youth attending expected some fun. The elders didn’t take her seriously.

David narrowed his eyes. Izzabella stood quickly, taking his hand silently, before hand-in-hand they walked down the last of the steps and crossed to the temporary wooden dance floor laid atop the fifteenth century Spanish marble work an ancestor had ordered for his Catalonia queen when she redecorated Breakercliff Castle to her tastes. While they walked through the crowd, the musicians morphed their tune to the Prince’s Advance. Camera people rush around while the younger people in attendance, plus a couple older couples who loved to dance, gathered at the edges of the dance floor. They would join the royal couple at the start of the second verse. David swirled her around, raising her right hand to his shoulder sending pink sparkles spinning off the huge emerald-cut Ezmeralda ring covering a finger completely between knuckle and the joint on her middle finger, the rest of the Ezmeralda summer set on her wrists, hanging on her ears, and in the choker at her neck took on new life as the silver and gemstones were hit by the flashes from cameras.

Two light taps barely could be heard over the press-core chaos, but the musicians came in with the song agreed upon and David and Izzabella swept into a modified waltz, retaining a few folk hand movements from Chromatica heritage when one or the other of the brother-sister pair let their hands swing out from their partner during the spins. A wrist twist for long summer days, a hand dip meaning blessing on the crops, providence, constance, bounty, health. Modern and history. Precision and lore.

The older couples and some of the younger ones followed suit, not exactly matching the royals as it wasn’t a formal, structured dance like the Spear and Scythe, but the harmony between the hands elevated the dance from a simple modern gathering from anywhere the rich gather in the world to something uniquely Chromatic.

A newly widowed countess, the highest-ranking single woman present, introduced the new Boliva ambassador to David and Izzabella, before claiming the next dance with the heir, leaving Izzy with the bureaucrat who Izzy discovered by the second cord had no business being on the dance floor. Thank goodness for big skirts to protect feet.

Next partner switch was with a gangly teen worth more than Chromatic, if one didn’t count the mining. She did have to firmly remind him that etiquette didn’t allow her to repeat partners.

“Unless you fell in love and eloped,” he grinned down at her in an unsettling manner, while continuing to hold her hand. “Maybe a turn outside after dark when you tire of the game.”

Struggling to remember his actual age, Izzy decided it didn’t matter. This one needed to learn the meaning of no. “I’m sorry, but I really can’t,” she said while yanking her hand away, then checking to make sure all the rings were still on her fingers before offering her hand to the man coming to her from the right side. Martin, Count of Northern Hills and Speaker of the Council, who had been trying to corner her for close to a year. Unmarried and his late forties, he wanted to speak to her for several reasons.

A better choice politically then the businessman living on his father’s bank account.

“My dear child, you looked parched after all that dancing. Would you like some hazelnut water?” The Speaker tucked her hand into the crook of his arm.

“I can get it for her.” The youth stepped closer to them.

The balding man looked the teen up and down. “I don’t doubt you could, sir. But I do need a moment with the princess. State business you understand.”

“Really?” The other male sneered. “Or you just butting into none-of-your-business, old man?”

“Arnold, I really do have business with him.” Izzy interrupted, drawing the eyes of both men, “I’ve been getting ready for the party all day, you know, and I just haven’t been able to get back to him. Please excuse us.” The brunette turned her face toward the Count. “And the hazelnut sounds perfect.”

They managed to move away without Arnold following.

Slipping into the obscure Chromatic dialect variation on Spanish, the politician said, “Well done girl, I hate that we can’t just color his skin like he deserves, but his father is investing heavily in Seaport shipyard.” Closing on the servers at the edge of the room, Martin signaled for two drinks. One with the royal baldric came over in a moment with two glasses.

“Alfonso,” Izzy smiled at him and waited for him to take a sip from one glass before passing it to her. He passed the Speaker the other drink untested. Once they both had taken sips from their drinks, the princess asked, “Count North, did you come over to rescue me, for which I am grateful, or did you have some other darker stone reason?”

“I only do bright stones, you know that child.”

Not with the way you can lead my father around by his nose, but you are better than the last Speaker who set off his temper every single gathering. Izzy kept her thoughts to herself while taking another sip.

“But I did have a reason or three.”

“Of course.”

“First, it’s time to end your strike against appearances. You no longer have school studies to delay them.”

Izzy lifted her right hand and gazed at the large rock on the ring and then did a quick glance at his face and then returned to contemplating the rock before dropping her hand.

The count took a swallow of the sweetened hazelnut water, looking like he swallowed something sour. “Second, unified front.”

She rolled her eyes around the gala and raised her eyebrows, twisting a hand in the dance symbol for completion.

“Crumbling stone, girl, you know what I mean.”

“I am not a girl, and you know what,” she stopped for emphasis before continuing, “I mean. And let me answer the third – or whatever number you have it on your list, but I figured you will hit it at some point, no, I am not interested in marrying you.”

“Direct, but I like that about you.”

“No, that is very much one of the things you dislike about me and Sammy.” Izzy smiled at him. “The fact we know how to handle directness as a tool and you have never figure out how to come at anything except sideways.” She finished her drink. “Not that you aren’t very, very good at that and I do admire you for your skill, but you and I aren’t suited.” She held out her left hand with the drink, frowning when light caught her pinky ring.

“You are too young to see it, but we would be great together.”

A server took her drink away, but Izzy kept staring at the gem, bringing it closer. The gem swirled with shimmering colors over its cabochon surface. Speaking towards it, she said, “No, we wouldn’t. You really should look closer to home.”

“What?” the Count reached for her hand, “What is it?”

Izzabella dropped her hand, “Nothing that concerns you, but, might I recommend, consider Lady Elena as a possible spouse. She often works with the Council on transportation legislation with the Guild House and you have a lot in common … politically.” This time Izzy managed to raise one eyebrow, she didn’t have control over it like her father and brother did, but sometimes it came worked.

Martin looked down at her with his black eyes.

Yes, I know who you are have affairs with and I will not accept that in a spouse. Her eyes did not waver as she stared back at him.

He broke off the eye contact, looking to the side slightly.

“Really, Lady Elena would be a good match.” Izzy placed a gentle hand on his wrist, deciding to offer an olive branch. “Her whole family is amazing. If I decide on university before military, I likely will be in the same year as her youngest sister, maybe even having her as a roommate.”

Martin turned his head back, tilting it to the side. “The Red Guards would like that. Especially if I follow your advice. Her family would need a detail if I get voted Speaker again in the fall and follow your recommendation courting Elena. Having all the ores in one vein, so to speak, would make them happy.”

I guess I am going to Unie first then.

“Could you escort me back to my father? I would like to sit a moment.” And figure out why the Ravineruin ring changed color. Or, more accurately based on legend, who has arrived.

(words 3,030; first published 10/27/2023)

Cursed to Marry a Fairy Tale Prince Series

  1. Birthday Dances (1/3/2021)

Flash: Following a Lead

Photo by Valentin Salja on Unsplash

The dog led the way, as it had from the time it crossed Ebenezer’s path six days ago. It led him to shelter the first night, and the next day it led him to berries to fill his starving belly. The near week in the winter hellscape, his boon companion brought him to a hot spring and recent animal kills, tree shelters and caves. Ebenezer never had a dog before, and wasn’t sure if the relationship was more reversed. Seeing the structure break over the hill, the lost hiker became even more uncertain about their relationship but at this point he was too tired, too desperate, too dependent to question. He followed where the animal led.

(words 116; first published July 10, 2022 – from a picture prompt for a Facebook writing group. Aim is about 50 words)

Writing Exercise: 50-Word Prompts 2020

WRITING EXERCISE

Package season is kicking my tuchus, so we are going to do the 50-word prompts again.

Write two 50-word flashes. Aim for 50 words, give or take five extra words. Don’t read my attempts until after you do your own. Writing them directly in the comment section below will help you focus on the flash aspect – just getting words out.

How does this exercise help you as a writer: (1) just write things out quickly; (2) learn to work from prompts (important for the anthology world); (3) practice writing to a word count.

WORD PROMPT FOR 50-WORD FLASH: Light

VISUAL PROMPT FOR 50-WORD FLASH

Photo by Kyle Johnson on Unsplash

My Attempts

TEXT PROMPT: Light

The packages were stacked tall in the pumpkin, all sorts of sizes and weights. Light thin Amazon packages, large packages from toy stores, squishy clothing packages, weird ones with a hard bit that must be bed-slippers. And dog food. I HATE dog food. Forty pounds moving like a dead body. (first published 3/21/2022; 50 words)

VISUAL PROMPT

Seaweed clung to the tip of the knife. Something expected when gutting fish in the muck passing for water these days. Leonyd went to close the shelter door as the first rays of dawn skittered across landscape, burning everything they touched like molten sparks from a forge. Damn climate change. (first published 3/21/2022; 50 words)

Series: 50-word Prompts

  1. Prompts 1& 5 (2/19/2017)
  2. Prompts 6 & 12 (2/26/2017)
  3. Prompts 7, 8, 10, 11 (3/19/2017)
  4. Prompts (The Mouse Roars) (3/26/2017)
  5. 50-word prompts 2018 (12/25/2018)
  6. 50-word prompts 2019 (8/27/2019)
  7. 50-word prompts 2020 (12/22/2020)
  8. 50-word prompts 2021 (12/28/2021)
  9. 50-word prompts 2022 (12/17/2022)
  10. 50-word prompts 2023 (12/26/2023)
  11. 50-word prompts 2024 (12/24/2024)
  12. 50-word prompts 2025 (12/25/2025)