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Editing Rant: Slow Sex

February 8, 2022March 21, 2025 Erin Penn Editing Rant

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Reading sex scenes for an edit is weird.

Slowing down the pace enough to actually work out grammar and choreography and language repeats – ugh.

Worse than the fight scenes. These scenes should not be read slowly with the brain completely activated.

(business) Editing Romance (general)

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