Writing Exercise: Plot-Driven or Character-Driven story?

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This year I started using Storygraph as well as Goodreads for book reviews.

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One of the questions Storygraph always ask is “is this book character-driven or plot-driven?” with an option of “it’s complicated” and “N/A” (the not-applicable is useful for non-fiction reads). And while I’ve been answering the question, each time I see it, I think, what is the EXACT definitions of each. Well, Webster isn’t going to come to the rescue on this one.

DEFINE THE DIFFERENCE BETWEEN STORY AND PLOT

A “story” is a sequence of events that are linked together in a meaningful way to create a narrative. … A story may include characters, settings, themes, conflicts, and emotions. (McGregor)

A plot isn’t much different, referring to the specific sequence of events. Plot is how the author reveals the narrative – sometimes as a straight line, sometimes involving twists and turns.

We all have had friends tell a story, but lose the plot in the telling. There is a structure to a plot, which a story might lack. Plot is a map, how to get from here to there, with side quests, backups, and a dozen other elements to move “the story forward and create tension, conflict, and resolution.” (McGregor)

CHARACTERS

Characters are also part of the story. Several aspects of character consideration were covered in last month’s writing exercise, “Main Character, Protaganoist, Narrator, Hero, Oh My Murderbot.” We talk a lot about characters and the importance of making them real through the story’s dialog and narrative in this blog.

CHARACTER-DRIVEN VS. PLOT-DRIVEN

So what is the difference between a character-driven story or a plot-driven story. That is simple: with character-driven, the story is centered on the character and is driven forward by the INTERNAL CHOICES of the character; and with plot-driven, the story is driven forward by the EXTERNAL EVENTS of the world until a Goal is reached. Clear?

Clear as mud. Obviously character-driven will focus more on characters, while plot-driven will focus more on plot. And since nearly every fictional story out there has both characters and a plot, there will be a mix of both “drives” within the writing. But how does this impact writing?

That is the real question isn’t it, “How does this impact writing?” How can I use this to make MY WRITING better?

Let’s do a deeper dive into each.

CHARACTER-DRIVEN

Genre writing leans into plot and literary writing leans into character. A story will lean more one way or the other, but character-driven leans into the “internal” conflict of the character, exploring motives, personality, thoughts, and relationships. Internal development and transformation (or no transformation despite everything the world throws at them) are key aspects to a character-driven story.

Everyone talks about CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT; this is essential to a character-driven story. Golden storylines include when the character’s internal goals are in conflict with each other.

In Exit Strategy (Murderbot book 4) by Martha Wells, SecUnit thinks, “The last thing I wanted was to ask the company gunship for help. The last thing I wanted was for GrayCris to catch us. These two last things are incompatible.” This is the perfect example of internal goals in conflict with each other. By the way, the Murderbot SERIES is character-driven, but the storylines of the individual BOOKS are plot-driven. We see SecUnit grow and change over the length of the series, developing personality and relationships, but within each book, events are pushing it forward to an end-goal.

If you want to create a more character-driven story, make the beginning about the protagonist – you might need to go light on the plot for the first little bit. Throughout the book, lots of character description is essential. Don’t just fix “white rooms,” giving the story a setting. Describe the people, how they dress and move, how they think about each other. What are their wants, needs, and goals?

The story itself should be built around the character. If you put a different character in the story, it would be a different story. And it’s not like changing out a marine for a civilian-type change, it THIS MARINE – HIM! that the story is built around. The hayseed from Ohio who dreamed of being an astronaut and studied the skies each night and memorized sky charts, he is essential to getting his unit back to Earth after aliens kidnap them out of the desert. Internally, he struggles to point them home because this will be his only chance to be out here. Without him, the story would be completely different.

And it is not just the protagonist in a character-driven story who is layered, nearly every character has a BACKSTORY. People are complex and nuanced. Each changing as they interact with the others.

Readers finish the story because they want to know what happens to the characters. This will happen despite there often being no clear end-point to the story. Internal changes do not wrap up in neat bows. Thought-provoking choices drive the character; conflict is changed by the character decisions.

PLOT-DRIVEN

At the other end of the question, genre-commercial writing is plot-driven. Clearest are thrillers and mysteries, but also horror, action-adventure, fantasy, science-fiction, and westerns. You would think Romances would be character-driven, but like most of the fantasy-leaning genres, they are plot-driven.

External conflict is the key to the plot. The world impact on the characters and they must interact with it. Starting the book with the action already happening is very popular with plot-driven stories. Where character-driven stories, we first meet the characters; with plot-driven, we first meet the plot and it may be some time before things slow down enough for us to learn the protagonist’s name and motives (if they ever slow down).

Twists happen in the series-of-events, changing the character’s goals, moving them from one scene to another. They enter the scene going in one direction, but need to go in a different direction when leaving. Characters are devices used to advance the plot.

The tricky thing with a plot-driven story is to make sure the character has agency; with the world shoving them around willy-nilly, how can the character show they are making their own choices? This is where a writer borrows tools from a character-driven story to keep agency with the character.

Serial-style stories are always plot-driven. Mysteries where the main character solves a murder each time and the series books can be read in any order (mostly), these are plot-driven. No character-development means not character-driven. Yes, Mrs. Polifax and Miss Marple do change over their long series, somewhat, and their characters are what makes the story interesting, but the PLOT – the murder mystery or political action thriller – is what is driving the story. James Bond is just the car getting the story down the road.

A story-arc series, duology, trilogy, or longer, can also be plot-driven, but the character reset at the start of each book is a CLEAR indication of a plot-driven story. Some of the vlogs and blogs I read preparing this post called these “static characters.” The Simpsons television show is an excellent example of characters always returning to a “null state” despite everything impacting their lives – an alien invasion happens in one story leaving not a single building standing, even Moe’s bar is demolished, and in the next episode, Springfield is back to normal.

An external Goal being reached is another hallmark of a plot-driven story. The reader finishes this type of story to see what happens. The endpoint is usually clearly marked. Here is where the Romance is defined as plot-driven. The plot is to fall-in-love; a happily ever after must be delivered to the reader. Sometimes the characters make choices that just don’t make sense in service to the plot; as a writer, you want to avoid this, but with a plot-driven story it is easier to tell yourself, “They have to make this choice for us to get to the end.”  If that happens, as a good writer, you need to go back and add something to the backstory, seeding things to help explain the forced choice.

Fables and other stories with morals are also plot-driven. The goal is to share an EXTERNAL lesson on how the world works, not how the internal thoughts of a person or animal adjusted because of the narrative.

In a character-driven story, changing out the protagonist for someone else will cause the story to disintegrate, but any plot might actually result with the same character development. Going to work or going to the moon doesn’t matter, the thought changes while traveling is the important part of the narrative. With the plot-driven story, you might substitute out a different Marine, or Elf, or shopper in a grocery story and have no change in the story. On one hand, the linchpin holding everything together is the character and in the other, it is the plot.

The previous example of Ohio-Marine, as a character-driven story, the narrative actually focused on the choice whether to return home or explore space. The conflict was internal. If plot-driven, the story would have been about overcoming the aliens and figuring out the equipment; external factors to overcome. The goal of going home was never really in question. Any Marine or even a grocery shopper could be the protagonist. The trip to get to the end might be slightly different, but the end goal is still the same. The structure of the narrative remains unchanged.

When initially writing the story, authors often think of either a plot element or a character first. This will lean a story more to being character-driven or plot-driven. Was the plot built to fit the characters strengths and weaknesses, or did the plot create the character with flaws and assets tailor-made to resolve the conflict and challenges of the stories?

HOW TO TELL THE DIFFERENCES

As an editor, I need to figure if a story is plot-driven or character-driven. For my particular publisher, we are action-oriented. We love starting “in medias res” with someone running and shooting. And while we say we want interesting characters, and we do, at the end of the day we are a plot-driven genre publisher.

So how can I help writers to shape their story to be even more “plot-driven” without leaving eccentric characters by the wayside. First look at what is introduced first: Plot or Main Character? Second, is the story about “why is something happening” (choices made) or “what is happening “(actions taken)? Third, chip, shape, and polish as needed.

MAKE SURE BOTH CHARACTERS AND PLOTS ARE DEVELOPED

Remember to develop both characters or plot, although one will have more impact on the narrative than the other.

One of the ways to do this is when outlining, outline all the plot points and along-side the plot points mark any internal changes the character has. Another way is be sure the character has AGENCY against the plot, while also making sure some of the world is outside the character’s control and they have to react to this EXTERNAL impact on their life.

Internal and external / thoughts and action / all control and no control. Find the balance between each of these which best serves the story you are trying to tell.

LOVE WORLDBUILDING

While reading other people articles on character-driven vs. plot-driven, most were of the opinion world-building, when mentioned at all in relation to this topic, is part of the plot. This opinion reduces the fantastic and amazing aspects of fantasy and science-fiction, removing them from consideration in a character-driven plot.

I consider the world not just a setting, but another character impacting and interacting with the characters. And as a character, you just don’t drop world’s backstory in one infodump anymore than you would the love interest of the protagonist. Be sure to enhance the world with purpose; what are the goals of the culture, the flaws of the society, the strength of its nature.

WRITER EXERCISE

Which way to you lean when writing? What tools can you take from plot-driven stories and character-driven stories to make your present work-in-progress (WIP) better? Comment below about two aspects of your WIP that are character-driven and two aspects of the story that are plot-driven?

READING EXERCISE

What stories to you read and enjoy the most? While you might say you read stories for characters, would you say those stories are plot-driven or character-driven primarily? Taking your present read-in-progress, can you break out the parts that make it a plot-driven narrative and the parts that make it a character-driven narrative? Write about what you discover in the comment below.

 

Bibliography

Emmons, Abbie. “Plot Driven vs. Character Driven Stories.” YouTube. 2020 (says five years ago). https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k68tf-Nut2I – last viewed 8/10/2025. – Note: This vlogger is completely character-driven focused; does not believe plot-driven stories have value. I watched it as part of the research, and I think the vlogger might have some good insights into character creation, given personal preferences, but grains of salt are needed with this one – like BIG grains.

McGregor, Lewis. “Character vs. Plot-Driven: Know the Difference.” IndieTips. 2023 February 23. https://indietips.com/character-driven-vs-plot-driven/ – last viewed 8/10/2025.

Pen and Sword. “Plot Driven VS Character Driven Stories.” YouTube. 2016 (says nine years ago). https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jp6ARuDzw8o – last viewed 8/10/2025.

Reedsy. “Character vs. Plot-Driven Stories.” YouTube. 2021 (says four years ago). https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RqspVy5zIxo – last viewed 8/10/2025.

Writing Mastery. “Plot-Driven vs. Character-Driven stories: What’s the Difference?” 2023 January 12. https://www.writingmastery.com/blog/plot-driven-versus-character-driven-what-s-the-difference – last viewed 8/10/2025.

Editing Rant: Tied up or only tidied up

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“Tie up all the loose ends.” Conventional wisdom for completing a story, right?

Nope, do not do this. Yes, a plotline, or book, or even a series is ending, but life is messy. Fiction, being a mirror of life, also is messy. Tie up MOST of the loose ends, but leave room. Leave room for fanfic, for “what happens next,” for short stories and “what ifs?“. Maybe even another series.

Tidied up the loose ends, but don’t tie them up.

Have a climax, then ease your reader out of the story by hinting life continues on. Just like at the beginning of the story, when “the normal” is established. The ending has the new normal, just a bit. Maybe a chapter.

But don’t go – this person got a job, and this person had a baby, and this weapon was lost to time, but this weapon is passed down for generations.

Not every question needs answering. Clear out the gore and emotions. Tidied up the tears, and show life continues.

But do NOT tie up everything like a Christmas Turkey complete with a bow. Don’t cook the ending until every last bit of juice is out of the meat of the story.

Don’t tie up all the loose ends.

Editing Rant: Build on the Reveals

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Don’t keep repeating information. Your reader likely caught it the first time. EXPAND on it each time, either adding additional information or showing how the character perspective is changing.

So many edits I do keep on having the SAME info drop. Yes, it takes three times to make something real, so you need to keep reminding people of an important piece of information. But it shouldn’t.be.the.same.thing.each.time.

OMG.

For a recent edit, one of the romantic interests had been abused by their ex, physical, emotional, magical…the most important part of the abuse for the plot was gaslighting and holding back information, because the other romantic interest, the NEW and “GOOD” love interest (I will call them MC) is holding back some serious information on the magical side. And the magical THREE times to make it real, when the MC trips across the problem, EACH time they go “I really need to tell them or they will be angry.” Same level of emotion, same level of processing, same level of balance in the relationship. The fourth time, the trip-wire problem is tripped, and guess what? The person who wasn’t told by the MC was angry.

Because no building happened, no transformation of the character happened, the reader response is “dumb-ass, you knew better and had half the book to address it.”

INSTEAD OF a simple three-to-be-real:

One) This secret that would make her angry based on how her last spouse treated her.

Two) Dang, I can’t believe the secret is still my secret. I need to keep it from her or she will be angry based on how her ex used to manipulate her.

Three) She hates stuff like that, I need to keep my secret or she will react badly based on her last relationship.

Result) Secret’s out and she reacted in anger as expected based on her last husband.

THE BUILD COULD HAVE BEEN:

I have a secret that would make her angry based on how her last spouse treated her. (focus on her past)

Dang, I can’t believe the secret is still my secret. I know she will be angry, rightly so, for me keeping it this long. Can I let it out? I don’t want to lose her friendship. (focus on self)

She hates stuff like that. I am shit for not telling her about my secret and I dare not tell her now because she will break up with me for the betrayal. (focus on the interaction between them)

Secret’s out, and she reacted in anger expected based on her last husband AND my betrayal of not telling her things. (focus on both their actions, but his taking responsibility for his choices)

ANOTHER EXAMPLE OF BUILDING

Another recent edit kept having the same description of how attractive the male found his love interest. The description was the same each time, something along the lines of “her eyes mesmerized me”, then a couple chapters later “I was mesmerized by her eyes”, a couple chapter later “I fell into her mesmerizing eyes.”

Don’t just describe. Build the description, show how the relationship is changing. In the next four examples, each time the description of “blue eyes” changes, becoming more emotionally connected.

She had blue eyes.

Her blue eyes looked like home, like where I wished home had been, like the lake we visited every year growing up.

Her eyes flashed in anger, sparkling like sapphires. Her lips pressed white in rage, but still reminded me of rubies. She is my treasure. … And I really needed to stop being in awe that she loves me, before she kills me.

Tears rimmed the lakes of her eyes, and I fell in downing with her, drawing her into my arms as we wept.

Don’t worry about these fixes during the first draft. “BUILDING ON THE REVEAL” ARE FIXES – which means they need to FIX something. The first draft has to be written in order to fix something. But once you are done writing, and you made sure the plot is plotting (Second draft), then create the characters, seed the builds, show – don’t tell – us the emotional development of the relationships (Third draft). Have fun.

Building on the Reveal is all about the first rule of writing fiction: Don’t be boring.

And repeating information is boring. If you have to talk about it three times because it is important, then don’t REPEAT what you are talking about.

Chekhov’s gun is on the wall in the first act. The characters’ comment on the history, who owned it, in the second act. Third act at the start, they notice the maid had dusted it. End of the third act, it goes off. If it just sat on the wall, mentioned three different times in the book when characters walked in the room as being on the dang wall, well, that is snooze-worthy boring. (And thus finishes the third example of building on the reveal.)

Don’t be boring.

Build on the reveal.

Magical Words: Endings

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When does a story end? At the climax, when all is revealed? Not usually.

Readers want cuddle time after a climax. Just a little longer between the covers, one more chapter to tie up lose ends, whisper sweet nothings, and leave everyone fully satisfied. If the happening is one of a series, book the next date by hinting what the next story is about before letting the reader leave the covers.

Kalayna Price gives two examples of poor endings in a Magical Word post from April 26, 2012 entitled “Endings”; in one, the story was bam-slam-thank-you-ma’am, and the other keep going-and-going long after the happy climax feeling was done. The comment section continues the endings discussion with various published writers giving examples from their own experience, definitely worth hanging around for breakfast to meet the whole family.

Again the URL is: http://www.magicalwords.net/kalayna-price/on-writing-endings/

Magical Words: Therefore

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What path does a book follow? Is it one step after another, haphazardly finding its way to an conclusion, or is it driven down the inevitable street until it reaches the only ending possible?

Carrie Ryan write about plotting using “therefore” and “but” rather than “and then” in her Magical Words post from August 22, 2012, “Therefore”. The post gives a method to plot more strongly.

If you line up every scene or plot beat in your book, and the only words that connect them are “and then,” you have a problem; instead, each scene needs to be connected with either “therefore” or “but.”

Put simply, your book should go something like: “A therefore B therefore C but D therefore E but F.”  Rather than “A and then B and then C and then D…”

It sounds easy, but the point is to make things flow because they connect. The difference between all the cars on a road going the same direction, and a train with interconnected carts. If you disconnect a train, things fall apart. On the road, a car could take an exit and you might never notice it is now missing from the story.

Boy meets girl. (and then) Girl flirts with boy. (and then) Boy and girl argue. (and then) Boy and girl make up.

We all have read this story. But how about…

Boy meet girl. But girl flirts with best friend. Therefore boy and best friend argue. But girl doesn’t want to come between them and leave. Therefore the males must talk things out. Meanwhile, girl runs into trouble outside and screams. Therefore both males run outside to rescue her.  …

Now every scene escalates. The energy moves.

Ms. Ryan does mention

“Yeah, but I could just as easily replace each ‘therefore’ and ‘but’ with “and then,’” and you’d be right.  But that’s not the issue — the problem comes when you can’t replace an “and then” with a “therefore” or “but.”

Be aware of the connections of your plots, whether at the outlining, first draft, or editing stage. Make sure that every scene and plot beat, when you move from one car to the next is a “therefore/but” and not “and then” – you want a train car, not an automobile.

Again the URL is: http://www.magicalwords.net/really-i-mean-it/therefore/ (The post may not be there. It looks like they finally took the website down.)