Flash: Magic Menace Mode

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“Magic Menace Mode activated!” I whispered with force.

“What are you doing Jennie?” Deborah who sits in the seat next to me asked.

My palms tingled from holding my fists tightly. “Shh. I just want out of here,” I said as I opened them up and shook them out.

“Don’t we all?” Deborah used her stylist to scratch down the next day’s reading assignment, or to doodle. It really didn’t really matter which.

The class was bullshit, put together by the overlords of the odious. Whitewashed lies unusable in the futurescape of the blinking minutes of mankind. History, math, English, science. None of it matters when computers will read, think, and create for us. Even voting isn’t going to be a thing much longer. Everyone knew that.

But if Magic worked, the rules would change.  Imagine everyone with purple skin. Try to pick out people-of-color for target practice when colors vary for lilac to royal! Would light or dark became the new focus?

I recorded the three chapters to read tonight and the fifteen questions we were to turn in and flipped the notebook cover close on the flatscreen. Three minutes left in class before bell. Then I had newspaper, which no one read, lacrosse which no one came out for, and a musical practice, where no one sang on key but the parents will sing praises of. I could slip in the reading somewhere in there; my tablet had enough charge to pull that off.

I waited for the classroom to empty, the teacher darting out first to make it to the parent lines. Another stupidity. No buses to save tax money; instead all the parents left work early and waiting in long lines with engines running, angry at the wait. That wasn’t saving time, money, resources, or anyone’s sanity. Slinging my bag over my shoulder, I made my way to the newspaper room.

Bill was waiting for me; he lost his key the second day.

Him losing the key was a ritual. Every year since sixth grade all of us news nerds would get a key, he would lose his between the first and fifth day. As a freshman, he managed it without even leaving the room. Then Meghan would misplace hers sometimes around Christmas, and finally Chris sometime in March. I was the keykeeper for the group by default.

“S’up.” Bill followed me in the room, before bearing off to head toward the graphics computer to download the pictures he had taken today and see if any of the ones other kid emailed in were usable by administration rules. “Meg working today?”

“Fast food. She left last period.”

“It’s gonna hurt when she graduates this year.”

“Ain’t that the truth.” I booted up the ancient monster we use for article assembly and formatting, and did a quick scan of the articles Chris approved for Friday’s publication. It was his quarter as editor-in-chief, a job that bounced between him and me and one of the freshmen we were training up to take over when the Junior crew graduated; Meghan had pushed four years of schooling into three years by attending college courses over the summer. Chris did most of his work during lunch now that basketball season was at its height.

After twenty minutes of quiet clicking, me doing a lot of format tweaking, we both sighed. Mine was because of the ancient software which thought if you moved something one line it needed to pop it over fifteen points had finally agreed to fit everything but the last page into the space needed. It took a delicate hand and earned me the prize of grand wizard at the party before winter break. The group bought me a wand for my Hogwarts and Kane Chronicle obsessions. Bill’s sigh was because he had finished flipping through the pictures from the week and had flagged the ones for me to put in our “This Week at Washington Wigwam” back-page spread.

“Ten minutes until practice.” I said before I picked up the plastic monstrosity of a wand they had given me, with its humongous pale pink gem and silver foil decorations, and started waving it around randomly.

Bill rotated his neck, cracking it loud enough I worried he had broken his spine for a moment. “MUN wants to do an all-day special practice Saturday and my Boy Scout troop has a fundraiser and I can’t decide which to go to or would look better for the college applications I’m filling out.”

The newsroom was full of overachievers, from Bill’s Model United Nations, Eagle Scout, and track commitments to Meg three advanced college credit courses plus two part-time jobs. Some days I felt like the lost cause; my family didn’t have college funds, so unless someone would offer me a free ride including a way to get to university and back and housing and food, it was the salt trenches for me after graduation next year. My present virtual job editing (and writing, shh, if you pay enough) essays for high school students wasn’t much for resume fodder, especially with AI muscling into my territory so strongly this past year.

“Maybe I could wave this wand and you and I could get an extra $100.” I shook the plastic toy, the tinsel tassel shushing with movement.

“Make if five hundred and I will be able to dodge the fundraiser.”

I smiled at him, rotating the chair to face him. “Deal, you wish really hard now.”

He laughed and put both his hands alongside his head and scrunched his face, closing his eyes. “Go!”

“Abracadabra.” I circled the wand over the floor, and then flicked it over the center of the area I had delineated. “Bammo!”

I inhaled sharply.

“Did it work?” Bill asked jokingly, then opened his eyes to discover it had indeed worked.

Stacked on the floor were four neat bundles of five dollars, each strapped together in red bands indicating a hundred bills in each pack.

“I think that is a little more than we asked for,” he muttered.

“To be fair, all three of you bought me the wand, so I guess the extra two are for Meghan and Chris.”

“Want to try that again?” he glanced up at me. “Ten thousand would get me a car.”

“No, no.” I shook my head, staring down at the windfall. “Not today.”

(words 1,061; first published 1/25/2026)

Flash: Jacks and Sleds

Photo by Ivan Lopatin on Unsplash

Mason finished setting the new, undamaged piston rod in place, holding the half of the broken rod between his teeth and the rest of it behind one ear as he hung upside down in the engine. Reaching as far as he could, blood rushing to his head, he rotated the crankshaft with his fingertips, moving all four of the replaced rods smoothly.

One steam engine repaired.

Pushing up, backing out, and twisting sidewides, then stopping a moment to get unstuck from the broken rods catching on things and making sure nothing else broke on the vehicle, he finally escaped and landed on his feet in the good solid Midwest clay soil. A deep inhale reminded his lungs how they worked, and blood returned to his feet, making him lightheaded.

“All fixed, Fat Man.” Mason eyed the jackalopes chowing down a bison carcass before turning to his customer. Damn stupid, if you asked him to take those psychotic carnivorous bunnies with razor sharp antlers and teach them to fly, but he and Santa didn’t shoot the breeze much. “Try not to bounce her off any more buttes.”

“You are a good man, Mason Carter.” The large man approached his steampowered ride. He knocked his boots against it and climbed aboard.

Mason snorted. “Sure Nick, I believe that based on all the coal I got growing up.”

Picking up the reins tightened them. The jacks raised their bloody mouths from their feast and hissed. The man-in-red’s voice rumbled out, “You are a good man, but you were a very naughty boy.”

“That I was.” Mason tucked his thumbs into his Levi’s. “Still am according to Amy.”

“Your woman should know naughty.”

“That she should. But she is a good a girl as they come, now.”

Nick touched the brim of his straw hat. “Thanks again for coming out at midnight. Presents are under the tree and payment in the bin.”

“See ya around, Fat Man.”

“Tell your granddad I said hi.” Santa clicked his teeth and the jacks came to attention, two dozen of those crazies leaped together, once, twice, the steam engine screamed, and the sled took to the sky.

The bison blood and skeleton faded, as these thing were wont to do when the magic recedes from the word of modern man. Mason focused on the Fisher constellation as he moved back into the world he lived in most days. White glittering against the eye-burning black circled counter reality for a heady moment before wobbling rainbows trailed into his mundane world, a single moon visible in the December Christmas night sky.

After tossing the metal rods into a very particular pile for melting down later, he walked wearily from his clapboard workshop next to the railroad tracks to his adobe house. Slipping into the warm building, he checked the tree, noting the presents had doubled to eight, and tucked the stuffed coyote his grandfather had given him back into his son’s arms. His granddad was such a narcissist and was tickled pink his great-grandson looked so much like him.

Poor kid. Life isn’t easy for those of his bloodline that see through the veil, and little Lucas could see everything. Mason hovered over the crib, just breathing and watching the baby blowing bubbles into the fur of the stuffed toy, the little chest raising and lowering with each precious moment of life.

The mundane beat out magic any day.

When the chill air had thwarted the overheated cheeks from hanging upside down, Mason climbed under the wedding ring quilt his wife had been gifted from her ex-coworkers at the Last Ace Saloon. He pulled her back gently against his front, and she wiggled into place. Kissing her shoulder, he snuggled deep into their joint nest.

“Everything good,” Amy sighed, more asleep than awake.

“Yeah, I got Nick back on his way.”

“I hope you got paid this time.”

His late-night customers rarely paid in coin or livestock, and the complicated trade of favors between supernaturals was beyond anything his woman needed knowing. She understood his grandfather made sure they would never go hungry, but in return for that wealth of support his grandson might need to crawl out of bed at midnight on a Christmas. That was enough for her. Food and safety for her and her littles. Mason’s hand drifted across her soft belly and kissed her shoulder again. “He dumped a load of coal into the bin for us. No worries about heat this winter.”

(words 750; first published 1/18/2026; written 1/14/2026 – Joined a new writer’s group this week (1/13/2026). The challenge given to each person in the group to bring to the next meeting was write a 750-word story based on a random roll. Mine was – character: A Man; plot: gets stuck in Santa’s sleigh; setting: in the Wild West.)

Flash: Ball of Choosing Part One

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Chapter One: Waiting in Line by Melanie

“Don’t disappointment me,” my brother whispered as we stood in the announcement line. We were toward the end though we had been in line over half an hour. Our crime was being from the Mountain Duchy; my brother’s fealty to crown and country temporally stripped after the assassination until he could reswear hand-to-sword. Normally, that would rush us to the front; the Crown always needing allies, especially along the trade routes to the Seaport Guild Cities on the other side of the Snowtops. But today was the first of the Balls of Choosing.

Couples closer to the capital and the seats of power who weren’t from a disgraced duchy and had ready cash and political capital slipped by us, guided by heralds to the proper precedence for entering the ball. Only two couples remained behind us, dressed simply, neither nobility, but then I wasn’t one either. Both women radiated witchy power. The one immediately behind us wore a black gown of the Dassa line, the death and earth witches. The gown did not have supporting layered skirts but did have enough cloth to fall all the way to the floor. The last in line had her city shoes visible below the skirt’s hem, her gown little more than a faded green working skirt and bodice, but clean and in good repair. Her green thumb of Ivie’s line proudly proclaimed by the bouquet of out-of-season flowers decorating her hair. The girl, and she was a girl, barely meeting the age restriction of fifteen, fidgeted beside her father.

All unmarried witches must attend the Balls of Choosing if it is within their powers to do so. Hence why my brother and I hopped on horses and rushed here as soon the invitation arrived at our manor-fort. The Crown’s Heir must marry a witch, and he had a week to do so. It had been a rush, arriving to our normal rental house with two other far-away landed already in residence. Though he and I were bunking together for the duration, in the last twenty-six hours since our arrival, neither of us had seen the inside of our sleeping quarters other than to drop off the saddle bags or get something out of them. Only my witchcraft kept us both standing.

I smirked up at my half-brother. “When have I ever not?

“Sissy…” his staid voice dropped in warning.

“Don’t worry.” I leaned gently against his muscled shield arm, crushing the dappled slightly oversized green bodice I managed to find in the picked over options left in the city when we arrived. “I know my place.”

“Oh dear.” We minced forward as those being admitted finally exceeded those arriving and jumping the line. “I hate to ask where you think that is.”

I looked ahead, at a new commotion. Two additional ballroom doors swung open and each had one of the heralds who had been sorting people move to announcing them instead. They must be done with the daughters of the Dukes and Counts. Things should move quickly now that it was just us women related poor Barons, Viscounts, and landed Lords left, plus one girl witch being raised outside the nobility and one death witch escorted by, I believed, a very fresh cadaver. The two behind us had to have interesting stories.

Slipping between the cracks of his stoic, responsible mind, I sent to my brother *I don’t think, I know. I threw bones right after breakfast on Brightday.* The messenger arrived at noon, my brother riding in with the Crown’s runner since they had met while Jase had been dealing with winter prep work at the low-route tollgate. I opened the invitation addressed to me, and we had been going non-stop ever since.

Fuck. Popped into his public mind where words are formed to say, but he managed not to have it come out of his mouth. His filter between thought-and-speech worked so much better than mine. I feel the tumble of words of him trying to figure how to respond, rejecting several including “of course the minx would wait until now” and “how far did she throw them this time” until what he felt worthy of sharing was put forth for official reading. It’s kind-of like watching a dozen expressions cross someone’s face until they decide what emotion they should be happening. What did you see?

*Marriage. Well, connection, legal, binding were where things fell. Plus hope, future, male, female. I believe that is a good landing for marriage.*

Sounds about right. Formed instantly and he decided to let it stand while shoring up the wall between his public and private minds.

Good, he would need that in a place full of witches. I wished I had access to some plants to put some real barriers in place for him. I squeezed his arm with reassurance as a very late arriving couple was guided by us. I noted the woman’s gown, at least two foot wider than mine and three times the cost, was colored a bright red for the fiery Christina line, making my brown skirts look dim in comparison. Beggars can’t be choosers and arriving late to the party, in our case a three-day hard ride and in Lady Christina-Line case likely fixing some burns caused in the excitement of Crown Prince hunting, we are both beggars.

The herald sorting the lines into the three announcements groups indicated we should move to the leftmost line. The necromancer and the flower child are shifted to the rightmost line. Looking through the entry gates, I can see the thrones were against the left wall. *I think them mean you to swear fealty immediately. *

One can only hope.

We stepped parallel to the herald. Jase passed the invitation with our names and describers for announcing us carefully written below.

*Yes, because then we can work on finding your wife.*

My half-brother head snapped to look down at me in horror, his public mind blanking as dozens of thoughts boil beneath the surface. My wife, struggles to gasp at the surface before being dragged back down.

I let him feel me exit his public place, closing the door gently behind me and sealing it as best I could. Outside of the white witches of thought, no one should be able to get in.

“Hedge Witch Melanie, of the line Barabara, Olive, and Berry of the fifth generation thereafter, escorted by His Lordship, Viscount of the Snowtops, Lord of First Leg, Low Switchback, and Trees End, Jase Douglas Pherson Rofile.”

***

Chapter Two: Swearing Fealty by Jace

Behind us the doors close, louder than the announcement of our coming, echoed by the closing of the other two sets of doors. Officially we were among the last to arrive despite our prompt actual arrival. I debate whether I would avenge the slight, or let the avalanche of chaos my half-sister leaves in her wake be enough.

In the meantime, we followed the herald cutting a path for me directly to the throne where a shrunken king sat with an empty throne whose armrest was close enough he could have reached out to cover the hand of the queen who should have been sitting there. His recently deceased wife.

A wife. “My wife is here?” I asked softly, confident my sharp-eared sister would hear me, knowing she would not answer. Too many other sharp-eared witches around, just three in the Hedge Witch combination of green top and brown skirts, but a gaggle in the fur of the fauna witches, and the ever-favorite and prolific line of the Whites, air, thought, and secret things depending on what secondary line their split after Bridget followed.

Mel’s laughter pealed, her happiness at getting under my skin once again lightening the air and making several male heads turn our way. While overtly, the ball is to get the newly named Heir his consort as soon as possible to fill in the holes left in succession by the successful assassination of his second oldest brother and his wife two months ago; the fall of Mayford, the previous third in line, on the battlefield just at the end of summer; and his oldest brother, the previous Heir, succumbing to a heart failure from his over indulgence of all things except his childless witchwife just three weeks ago, the truth of the Ball of Choosing was gathering all the unmarried nobleborn women of power in one place making it a grand matchmaking opportunity for all the unmarried nobleborn men, many of whom are escorting their sisters and nieces here.

Like me. Though few, if any, would hold their full titles making me a preferred target for those who wouldn’t catch the young prince’s eye even with the uncertainty of my status.

Father, as a good vassal should, joined the call-to-arms by the Duke of the Mountains, taking my older brothers with him, to challenge the weakening Rocksquarry line. The summer battlefield claimed them cleanly, all three in the line before me, as it did many lords and knights on both sides, then Samin, may his name be forgotten in a single generation, decided to go beyond treason to pure evil with a poisoning of those who stood in the way to the power he thought he deserved. The queen had been dining with her favorite son and his wife, eating bedeviled food unknowingly while her husband had worked late in settling the taxes and death records with his council following the deadly summer campaign. Now I and Crown Heir Baryon had positions we never thought to hold.

My responsibilities included a byblow by my father with a widow who lived in my mother’s rooms while my mother moved into the Snowcloud Manor in Trees End. Not Mel’s fault, but something I could never forget either. The weakness of love leaves too much blood upon the snow.

“Your Majesty, Jase of Snowtop.”

I bow at the introduction and kneel on the carpet at the base on the steps. Only the protocol father beat into me so I would be able to keep my brothers in line as their keykeeper, whichever of the twins ended up surviving father, kept me from wincing at the lack of the full title of my House.

“And Melanie of Snowtop, his sister.”

Beside me, my sister sinks into a curtsey billowing out her brown skirts perfectly, far better than I expected for the rush in sizing we had to deal with, but hedge magic was the most versatile of all the disciplines and my baby sister was exceptionally gifted for a backwater, untrained brat who rather lead the maple syrup gathering during spring melt in woolies than a sewing circle in high summer in silks.

We wait, patiently on my part and impatiently on my sister’s half, for the Crown to speak.

“Your father We knew.”

He spoke faster than I expected, but he was hosting a party. Now we would discover if we would survive the night.

“We thought him loyal.”

I don’t wince. I don’t inhale. I don’t breathe.

“The only good thing We can say about him is he wasn’t an oathbreaker. Did he teach you the same?”

“He taught me the only magic of man is true oaths.” I responded.

“Then We will have your oath to Us and no other. You may approach.”

I stood and looked him in the eye, knowing protocol well. “You may have my oath with two exceptions. One to the infinite, for it will always be the keeper of our souls and the other will be the oath I give to a wife, should one choose to accept me.”

“These conditions are true and good, We accept them.” He pushed himself up, taking on the mantle of authority offered in the ceremony to force aside the fatigue of the many losses which had befallen him this year. The Knight of the Sword, a one-armed man, the famous Baron Norsescar who had had fought beside Mayford in his last battle and the hero had broken the Duke’s line when his Prince had fallen in battle, held out the Sword of State to be drawn. The short plain iron blade curved out like death, jarring against the gleaming ballgowns, music, and jewels shining behind me. Elaine, the first of the witches, had created it for her husband, the first of the Rocksquary line.

I climb the steps. At the top, I loosen my gloves by pulling them off a little with my teeth, then completely remove them by hand before carefully grasping the sword. If the king wanted, a quick twist would slice tendons and leave me maimed of hand for the rest of my life, beyond the skills of the Purple for the cursed sword wounds did not respond to healing magic, a different twitch would behead me.

“We will have your oath now.”

“I, Jace of Snowtop, do swear to be your man, to hold your lands, to rule with your people as a just and faithful leader in your name, to follow you in battle in times of trouble and give grace in times of plenty. This I do by my oath, by my word, and by my honor.”

“These words We hear. You shall be Our man, hold Our Lands, rule with Justice and Faith, be at Our side in times of battle and in Our ears advising us in times of peace. Know that we will honor oaths kept and bring vengeance to oaths betrayed. By Elaine.”

I responded. “And the Thirteen Daughters.” I lifted my hands off the sword and take a step back paying careful attention to where the steps behind me start.

“We thank you for your oath Lord of the Snowtops. Tomorrow, Our Keeper of Lands will inform you where your oversight will best serve Us.”

“Your Majesty.” I step backward down one step, then another. The count of five steps up to swear fealty means five steps back down. I managed it without a stumble. At the bottom, my sister was still a flower of chocolate linen and woolen skirts. I wonder what she would have done if the sword had swung for my neck instead of rested under my hands, for Sissy loved me far more than I loved her. While I adored my little sister, for every one of her nineteen head-strong years, I was a man of nearly twenty-eight years and the hardness of time had taught me to weigh my emotions and actions.

I would kill for her but not publicly. I believe she would have turned the room red if she lost the last member of her family before she succumbed to the loss of her Corded.

At the bottom of the stairs, I hold out my hand and my sister uses it to rise as gracefully as she folded. I see several young men note her skill. Together we turn toward the Crown. And wait.

Longer than we should.

But eventually a man in a loose brown tunic wearing a baldric with a twisted rainbow steps past the herald. “You are expected at the Amelia Gate at the third bell of the day and will be escorted to your appointment. You are dismissed.”

“Finally.” My sister said a little too loud. Those on the podium heard as well as several in the nearby audience. “Come on, I caught a glimpse of her not a moment ago.” She jerks me after her through the crowd.

“Who?”

“Who do you think?”

Book Review (SERIES): The Kane Chronicles

You likely have heard about Rick Riordan and his Percy Jackson series (I even reviewed Percy Jackson and the Olympians series back in November 2024).  But what you may not know is Mr. Riordan has written several other series set in other mythologies. Today I’m going to review the core books of the Kane Chronicles (books 1-3). I have loved Egyptian mythology since watching The Secrets of Isis as a child (on television 1975-1976 plus reruns thereafter – come, on, of course I watched the first regular superhero-type show to star a female lead), so I jumped on reading this middle-grade series once I knew it existed.

The Kane Chronicles
Book 1: The Red Pyramid
Book 2: The Throne of Fire
Book 3: The Serpent’s Shadow

All books checked out and read through my local library system. These are extremely popular and are likely in your local library too.

 

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BOOK BLURB ON AMAZON for THE RED PYRAMID

The bestselling author of Percy Jackson and the Olympians takes on ancient Egypt in the first book of a trilogy that offers a modern-day portal into a rich fantastical world of ancient myth.

Since their mother’s death, Carter and Sadie have become near strangers. While Sadie has lived with her grandparents in London, her brother has traveled the world with their father, the brilliant Egyptologist, Dr. Julius Kane.

One night, Dr. Kane brings the siblings together for a “research experiment” at the British Museum, where he hopes to set things right for his family. Instead, he unleashes the Egyptian god Set, who banishes him to oblivion and forces the children to flee for their lives.

Soon, Sadie and Carter discover that the gods of Egypt are waking, and the worst of them–Set–has his sights on the Kanes. To stop him, the siblings embark on a dangerous journey across the globe — a quest that brings them ever closer to the truth about their family, and their links to a secret order that has existed since the time of the pharaohs.

MY REVIEW for THE RED PYRAMID

The Kane Chronicles is no Percy Jackson and the Olympiads, and that is just fine.

What is the same:
Children between the ages of 10 and 14 doing their best to survive in a world where parents (apparently – but, not really) have made bad choices.
Parent bad choices are based on tradition and history and complications of relationships – where sometimes the choices they faced were bad or worse. The parents choose the horrible ones that would at least let their children grow up.
A historical mythology is taken, obviously well-researched, and adjusted by worldbuilding to a rare tightly woven tapestry.

What is different:
Egyptian mythology (instead of Greek) with its layers of dynasties and changes over the millenniums; and Mr. Riordan integrates the fabric of multiple dynasties into a coherent whole.
Sibling dynamics instead of friendship dynamics.
More female power roles. – Not to say Annabeth isn’t a powerhouse on her own, but in the end she is the Main Character’s (Percy Jackson’s) girlfriend. Sadie, sharing the title of “The Kane Chronicles,” is even more important to the story, standing equal to her brother. Their “chaperone” isn’t a satyr (male), centaur (male), or camp head-god (male), but female (cat-goddess). Their strongest ally in the enemy camp is also female.
Parent bonds are with the Father instead of the Mother.

Overall, the pacing is slower than the breakneck speed of Percy, but I appreciated the time to breathe between attacks. (The monsters are JUST as fascinating.) The humor is dialed back a notch, but then both Carter’s and Sadie’s upbringing were more restrictive than Percy’s. Meanwhile the world-hopping wonder we previously experienced in Percy is cranked up to eleven here, with the entire globe a playground for the Egyptian magicians. I look forward to what other connections Mr. Riordan make between Egyptian architecture linking locations around the sphere we call Earth, or Geb’s rolling landscape.

Not the same, because that would be boring. But not too different either.

Bonus diversity points – (1) stronger women characters; (2) the melanin and cultural differences of the world stage play a stronger role than the more USA-centric focus of Percy.

 

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BOOK BLURB ON AMAZON for THE THRONE OF FIRE

Ever since the gods of ancient Egypt were unleashed in the modern world, Carter Kane and his sister, Sadie, have been in trouble.

As descendants of the House of Life, the Kanes have some powers at their command, but the devious gods haven’t given them time to master their skills at Brooklyn House, a training ground for young magicians.

And now their most threatening enemy yet—the Chaos snake, Apophis—is rising. If they don’t prevent him from breaking free in a few days’ time, the world will end. In other words, it’s a typical week for the Kane family.

To have any chance of battling the forces of Chaos, the Kanes must revive the sun god, Ra. But that would be a feat more difficult than any magician has ever accomplished. First they have to search the world for the Book of Ra, then they have to learn how to chant its spells. Oh, and did we mention that no one knows where Ra is, exactly?

Narrated by two different wisecracking voices, featuring a large cast of new and unforgettable characters, and with adventures spanning the globe, this second installment of the Kane Chronicles is nothing short of a thrill ride.

MY REVIEW for THE THRONE OF FIRE

I continue to love the worldbuilding of all the places Egyptian relics have been moved or copied throughout the world. If I had the money, I would LOVE to do a trip to hit everything in the Kane Chronicles in America and around the world.

This is a fun world-spanning adventure. The tension is diffused often, keeping the “scary” down to middle-grade levels (in fact, it could be much higher without a problem) – for example the “ticking” clock keeps fast forwarding, stopping, and going backward. A thriller ticking clock should be clear and as you go through a book, tightening from days to hours to seconds. This book begs this mechanism from the first moment of the countdown to the end of the world, but never really delivers on it.

Other than that, great character, great adventures, great battles, creative magic use, worldbuilding galore. Perfect in every way (aside from the thriller not being allowed its timebomb tension).

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He’s b-a-a-ack! Despite their best efforts, Carter and Sadie Kane can’t seem to keep Apophis, the chaos snake, down.

Now Apophis is threatening to plunge the world into eternal darkness, and the Kanes are faced with the impossible task of having to destroy him once and for all.

Unfortunately, the magicians of the House of Life are on the brink of civil war, the gods are divided, and the young initiates of Brooklyn House stand almost alone against the forces of chaos.

The Kanes’ only hope is an ancient spell that might turn the serpent’s own shadow into a weapon, but the magic has been lost for a millennia. To find the answer they need, the Kanes must rely on the murderous ghost of a powerful magician who might be able to lead them to the serpent’s shadow . . . or might lead them to their deaths in the depths of the underworld.

Nothing less than the mortal world is at stake when the Kane family fulfills its destiny in this thrilling conclusion to the Kane Chronicles.

MY REVIEW for THE SERPENT’S SHADOW

The exciting conclusion of the Kane Chronicles delivers in The Serpent’s Shadow. Complicated teenage love, stealing the shadow of chaos, and the sun being swallowed all add layers to the exploits of our favorite Egyptian magicians. This is what middle-grade books should be like. Real children problem-solving to the edge of reality and beyond.

While not as fun as the Percy Jackson storyline, the Kane Chronicles have their own hieroglyphic charm. Times two, because of the sister-brother team.

(Also enjoy the Easter Eggs as House Aphrodite participate in the school dance.)

Flash: Bleeding Stones

Picture from the Interwebs

So you are merrily scrolling through the Facebook feed and run across a prompt and you just have to reply. Below are the results. It is all in one block because I wrote it as a comment.

“Hey Jill, I just moved here. What is this pamphlet about? Is it something I should hit up?” Amy set the pamphlet on the table as she sat down for their weekly lunch together at an outside cafe. … “Oh, right. So we got a winter fae community out by the rocks, and the mayor – back when women could be mayor – made an agreement of a sacrifice every ten years if they leave the rest of us alone – a blessing on the crops for ten stadiums distance for every extra sacrifice. (Don’t ask me what a stadium distance is,) Their family has kept the contract going and own the farmland closest to the stones. We put out the pamphlet, telling guys that single, young “women” about to finish school will be there. The creepers show up, they feed the stones, and we get good crops and a few less creepers for a couple years.” … “What is to keep teenagers from going out there.” …. “The pamphlet is made from paper from wood from the nearest tree to the circle. It will find its way into the hands of the proper people.” … “Then why did I get it?” …Just then a breeze picked up the pamphlet and blew it down the street. “Because you needed to get in on the secret, and it needed to be passed on to the right person.”

(words 237; first published 7/27/2026)