Flash: Dissolve

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I am actually one of the people who saw someone dissolve in November ten years ago. Just out of high school, I was working a big retailer, the one with the blue words and the yellow asterisk, putting together the salt and shovel display right near the door when I saw this woman walking out. It was late at night about two weeks before Thanksgiving and the Black Friday sales so it was just me, Billy, and the store greeter.

I remember her. Normally I wouldn’t. Thousands of customer walk by me every day. Normally I wouldn’t have even been looking at her pushing the cart out the door, but the salt bags were heavy and I stood a moment to take a breather. The woman had stopped near the doors, but just short of activating them to automatically open. Outside the winter chill was conspiring with the breeze to steal people breaths. I had done cart wrangling earlier and agreed with her decision to stop and pull on her gloves. The vibrant red coat, jeans, and boots weren’t going to be enough. In fact, she should had been wearing a hat, but no one really starts wearing those until it actually snows.

I remember her because as I watched, her image unraveled. About three cart lengths from me, she dissolved into nothing, leaving behind a cart full of gifts and groceries. Her purse had been tucked under her arm, so that disappeared with her leaving us no way to trace who she was and let people know she wasn’t coming home ever again.

I gasped as had the greeter. I looked over at the old lady, and she stared back at me.

“Did you see…”

I don’t remember which one of us asked, but both of us nodded before turning to look toward the doors.

Billy looked up about then and noticed the overflowing abandoned cart and sighed. “Jeez, I hope she doesn’t expect us to load the car after she brings it around. It’s fuckin’ cold out.”

I shuttered, staring at where a human being used to exist.

The old lady proved experience sometimes is more useful than muscle. “Do you think it was caught on camera?”

“Yeah, maybe.” I replied still unable to move my eyes from the new void.

“Go get the manager Dave.”

I still couldn’t move.

“Now. Go get the manager, Dave,” she repeated. “I can’t walk that far.”

The store night manager was in the back of the store helping accounting prep tomorrow’s payday. I blinked before turning my head back to the greeter.

“Now, please,” she said firmly, nodding toward pickup and technology.

I shuffled a couple of steps, walked the next few, and before I knew it I was running faster than my gym coach had ever made me run to the back of the store away from the impossibility. The horrific impossible impossibility.

It had been caught on camera. One of the few, so you might have seen it in the internet newsreels.

Just under half a million people worldwide, according to the statisticians, disappeared in a two-hour window. That sounds like a lot until you realize 7.5 billion people lived on the planet at the time. Less than a tenth of one percent had dissolved. Less than 1 in 1,000.

So we had a bunch of conspiracy theories from the kook-branch of humanity. These people never existed, these people were abducted by aliens, the people had been picked up by the government, just to name the saner versions. My personal favorite is we went through a giant amoeba’ space fart and had a mass hallucination. The Christians, especially the Mormons, thought the Rapture had happened and wondered why they had been left behind. The Mormons settled down when the count went over 100,000 and the rest of the Protestants were willing to listen to the scientists for once.

The scientists looked to find commonality, but didn’t find any among the people they could prove were missing because of the dissolving. Statistically they were spread across the planet, for example only 16,000 people were missing from the good U. S. of A. To put that in perspective only about 400 people were missing from New York City. More people died during those two hours than disappeared. Skin color, religion, age, wealth, health, gender, location, locomotion – nothing was what the scientists called “statistically significant”.

Actually, there was one bit. No one was touching the people who disappeared. In fact, no one was within two feet of the Dissolvees. This likely saved a lot of passenger on buses and in cars, but a few people traveling solo left cars driverless. Accidents worldwide were attributed to the Dissolving.

For the first year, once the scientist figured out about the closeness rule, people held hands … a lot. And a lot of babies were born the second year because people stopped sleeping alone. Things have calmed down a bit from the extreme closeness, but I think the breaking down of the personal space barriers created by modern technology is the best unexpected benefit we had. That and the wedding business still is booming which helps the insurance business.

Now a decade later, my retail years building to me being an insurance salesman, we still don’t know what happened. Lots of speculation, but no one knows the real answer to the most important of the burning questions: will it happen again?

Which is why I am standing in my old store staring at the space where the woman had dissolved  … her name was Shelby Lowe. We found the receipt she had taken out to show the greeter and had left with her groceries and traced her back on her debit card. She left behind three children and a boyfriend.

Those of us who were Witnesses all do this. Visit and stare. Not often, but my wife knows where to find me when I don’t come home from work on time.

(words 997; first published 12/15/2019)

Flash: Porter Gets Infravision

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“Why didn’t you wake me?” Porter hissed at Tik as she scrambled out of her bedroll.

The half-orc warrior shook her head in confusion as the warlock hastily stuffed her items into her backpack. Those touched by magic were a strange lot. Powerful. The arching lighting between the immovable warlock and the closing bugbear was etched into her eyeballs from the afternoon battle. Who knew their little oxen driver had that up her sleeves?

Tik angled her body away from the banked campfire to continue watch on the raccoon family trundling through the thicket where the small caravan was hiding. The small snaps and rustling from the raccoons and Porter interfered with her ability to hear further afield. While her party managed to clear out the nearby goblin lair, other creatures with ill intent may be nearby.

Porter stepped over the halfling and sideslipped past the half-elf before joining Tik at her post. “I can’t believe no one else is up yet. The dwarven chants usually get me up long before now.”

“I just started my shift.” Tik injected to cut the verbose teenager off. They may be the same age, but the human had a very different life experience.

“What?” Porter stage-whispered. “But you don’t usually start until mid…”

Tik watched as the dark-skinned girl looked up, her curls flowing down her back as her face turned skyward.

“That isn’t the sun.”

“Nope.” Tik responded to the bizarre statement.

“The moon.”

“Yep.”

“And stars.”

“Yep.”

“Really?” Porter threw out her arms, whispering loudly to the heavens. “Now you give me this?!”

Tik watched as she stomped softly through the group of sleeping bodies to get her pack. Words muttered under-breath carried strangely around the heat currents of the fire. “Of all the … omnipotent asshole … roulette of the mind … is everything …”

When the only full human in the party had returned, Porter stood in front of Tik on the side away from the fire and took a cleansing breath in and out before smiling the fakest smile Tik had ever seen outside of a merchant. “I will be going into the woods a little ways. Don’t worry if you see any lightning or hear any maniacal laughter. There may even be a little screaming.”

Tik shrugged. “I am not to worry if you die. Got it.”

A genuine smile split Porter’s beautiful face. “Exactly! Oh, I do like you.”

Later the half-elf joined Tik watching the minor dancing lights beyond the thicket. “What is up?”

“Porter.”

“That girl has issues.”

Tik grunted, wiping the dew from her weapon.

“Did she get enough sleep?”

“Not after what she has been doing for the last three hours.”

“Hmmm.” The half-elf tilted her head sideways. “Maybe I should help her.”

“I wouldn’t interrupt.” Tik sheathed her blades before standing. She was looking forward to a final catnap before dawn. In the predawn light, she noticed the dwarf rolling his bedroll for his morning prayers. “Besides the shrieks stopped a little while ago; she is nearly done.”

Shift change completed, Tik was asleep before her elbows made contact with the dirt. She only woke when the slight breeze blowing on her back was blocked. Porter liked sleeping near the two women fighters; her unique scent of roses, sand, and soot traveled on what was left of the breeze. Tik’s mind noted the change as nonthreatening and fell back to dreamless sleep. Come dawn, they were going to storm a castle and everyone needed to be sharp.

(Words 586; first published 12/8/2019)

Yes, it is from a D&D campaign. My Warlock character got infravision between battles after needing it as the only non-infrared vision character of the party. This is what I pictured her reaction to be. This is an attempt to align game mechanics with storytelling.

Flash: Glass Ceiling Policy

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The Angel Cassiel flowed through the reception area, nodding once to her gatekeeper before continuing to her roost, an office of steel-clear providing an uncompromising view of the Black surrounding the space station. Every turn of the station brought new stars to the loathsomely familiar constellations as ships arrived and left the busy port. She stared out the invisible wall, hungry to dive into the endless sky as soon as her tour as co-station master ended.

Behind her, at the standing desk shoved against the far wall, the gatekeeper who had followed her into the nearly empty office ripped the countdown calendar page indicating the start of a new day. The countdown calendar was a personal indulgence, technically a waste of material where every atom used by the fabricators had been transported distances measured in light years. Fourteen gave way to thirteen and she stretched out her cream-feathered wings, cracking her shoulders. The tips brushed both walls in the sixty-foot room and her alular quills tickled the twenty-foot ceiling. No other place on the station outside of the ship bays allowed her to fully stretch.

Pulling her wings back in, she felt them brush the boy behind her, annoying her. He knew better than to follow her in until she completed her morning stretch. “This had better be important, Gate.”

“Station-Master, I have a woman waiting for you.” She saw his quick bow reflected in the window. No human eye would be able to pick it out; steel-clear did not reflect in the human spectrum, but Angels eyes dive higher and lower though they don’t share this fact with their outdated ancestors. They could encourage their scientists to make steel-clear completely non-reflective but being able to see your opponents when they did not know you could was an advantage worth keeping.

Turning to face the male, Cassiel crossed her arms across her bare torso. “I have no appointments.”

“That is true, Your Imminence. But I do believe you will wish to speak with her.” The gatekeeper kept his eyes lowered to her soft boots, like they had never drunk in the beauty of her fully outstretched wings.

Cassiel cocked her head to the side and down, looking at him through her left eye more than her right. “A precarious supposition.”

He flinched, not enough for anyone but an Angel to notice, and kept his eyes firmly on the split-toe end of her boots. “Indeed.”

“Could you expand on your hypothesis, Gate?”

“The woman is a rat, a Pure rat. Terror clings to her.” Gate’s voice carried no more inflection than reporting incoming cargo load. Less, as she had raised him up to direct service during this unwelcomed but required assignment specifically for his interest in the boring, the orderly, and the procedural. That and his unusual insights, so she listened carefully to his not-quite advice. “Only something she believes would interest you would bring her to the upper-levels.”

“I care nothing about what she believes.”

“Ah, but it would not be enough for it to just interest you. Terror would have kept the rat in her hole otherwise.” A slight tinge of disdain shaded his final words. “What she has is valuable.”

Cassiel closed the diving membrane on her eyes, narrowing them in thought. Relaxing her arms and wings, she nodded in the human fashion, “Bring her.”

***

Moving swiftly to the reception area, Company then bent under his standing desk to find the waif still curled into the furthest, darkest corner where he had left her moments before. She hadn’t run out on him, thank the Stars.

His blue-black curls fell forward as he crouched as far down as his six foot ten frame allowed. “She will see you now,” he spoke gently, tentatively reaching out a hand just a couple inches. This time the girl did not scoot further back, but jerked a nod before crawling out.

He moved back as she emerged. Slouching his broad shoulders to appear less threatening to the little female, who was the shortest full adult he had ever seen, maybe five foot under light gravity, he asked, “I will need your name.”

Hugging herself with bony hands over threadworn, patched clothing, the woman nodded again. “Yes, Spanner.” Her voice barely a whisper.

Company felt reassured. He had done a quick DNA search on the female when he had found her under his desk this morning and the name Spanner Clave Solonandra showed up as a match. How she managed to hide her existence on the station to only be recorded five times in a place where most people have DNA tested that many times in a single day, and how she managed to get into his office without setting off any of the alarms remained a mystery, but he had uncovered the correct name.

Looking into her eyes, as humans do, Company gave her a couple quick instructions. “Speak clearly. Keep your eyes lowered. Answer all questions, but do not speak unless spoken to.” He smiled as her lips pressed together. A bit of fire lit her brown eyes, smoldering behind the terror. For a moment he could see why his siblings found Pure-breds and Light-Mods attractive; he had always found them a bit dull, in wit as well as being. “The proper address for the Angel is Your Imminence or Station-Master.”

He bowed and waved his hand to the doorless entrance to the Station Master’s personal office. The airlock seal guarded the reception area. If the window went  in the oversized room, everyone in reception would die too. Not that many people came to the barren reception area. Since Angels had been created to lead ships through gravity folds between the stars, the only being at risk with the large stretch of steel-clear was whomever sat Gate. In his case, the risk was minimal, his mod-genes gave him nearly five minutes without efficiency loss to make it to an outside lock. The little one before him, though, would be dead.

She inhaled sharply entering the room. Stunned, like so many before her, she froze; her eyes drinking in the unending Black and Stars. Company gave Spanner a gentle push between the shoulders, feeling the thin, delicate bones under the loose clothing. She stumbled forward into the presence of the Angel.

He whispered, “Eyes.” knowing full well Cassiel heard him but would choose to ignore it. Unlike many of the Highest Soarers, Cassiel didn’t place much weight on obeisance. It’s one of the things he liked most about her. She didn’t need to ground others to soar.

A lifetime habit dropped the rat’s gaze to the floor as he knew it would. She spasmized something between a bow and a curtsy and moved to press her back against the wall. Seeing her sidling toward a corner, Company stood close to her, herding her to the proper distance to stand in front of an Angel.

The woman wasn’t just scared, fear had replaced her bone marrow. What had brought her here? The terror, or something beyond?

“My Gatekeeper says you have something of value for me.”

The woman jumped. Brown eyes snapped to Company, curiosity questioning, before dropping them back down to the floor at her feet.

“If I give it to you, I want to be put into a zoo.” The half-starved girl stated firmly.

“A zoo?”

Company watched the Angel’s shadow on the floor expand as the wings spread slightly. Out of the corner of his eye he observed the woman.

“Below they say you got zoos for pure. I want to go to one.”

The wings spread slightly and closed like a human breathing deep, or a bird about to pounce. Company stilled.

“Preserves have been created for Unmodified Humans of exceptional qualities. You do not have such.”

“Are you sure? I got info no one else got.” Desperation lanced through the confidence tones of the girl’s reply.

“Gate, it bores me. Remove the female and yourself. Faction shall replace you.”

Wincing at the instruction, Company turned toward the woman who just may have cost him his life.

“Wait!” Spanner took several steps toward the angel. “Please I can’t stay here. I can’t. Can’t.” Her shadow showed her looking upwards and holding something out. “Here, take this.”

Castiel’s shadow moved not at all.

Spinning around, the girl took several quick steps away from the Stationmaster and shoved a small data clip into Company’s hands. “Please, just gimme something.” He felt her hand shivering during the exchange. “Whatever it’s worth to you.”

“I’ll reward you appropriately.”

Taking the angelic proclamation as consent to proceed, Company manipulated the object around discovering the most unusual reproducer he had ever seen. Someone had taken a recorder and jury-rigged a small reproduction cube. None of the tiny buttons indicated their function. Stepping closer to the woman, he held it out to her. “Could you activate what you want to show us?”

She quickly pressed a series of buttons. A palm-sized image, amazingly crisp for the apparent quality of the recorder, started in motion of a dark room with some small gleaming items – pipes, clear containers, metal surfaces. Company squinted to make sense of what appeared.

Behind him the angel cooed thoughtfully, the human equivalent of “hmm”, before asking “Is the date stamp correct?”

“Yes,” came a firm reply.

Glancing at the girl, Company watched as her face filled with assurance. This was what was valuable, and the angel just acknowledged the fact.

“What sector?”

Not seeing the interest on the small screen, Company watched the fox-like face instead. It gave so much away. “I-i-i don’t know.” The girl shook her head, clearing the momentary confusion. No one but maintenance and the high upper levels use the original sector designations. She rubbed her leg. “I guess level three, Schwepps nest.”

“Gate.”

Of the five Orcian nests located on the station, the Schwepps were the biggest and most productive. Also the most viscous for controlling the levels assigned to their patrol. “I will be able to find it.”

“Very good. Do it and report back in three hours.”

“It’s good stuff, right? You said I get something.”

“True. Your goal coming here is never return to the lower levels?”

“I guess. And food – the zoo they feed you and keep you safe.”

“Very well. Gate, add this appliance to your request and I will sign it. The restriction will be to leave it’s mind functional, I might need it later.”

(Words 1,743; first published 12/1/2019)

Family Business Series:
Flash 1: Open Door Policy (12/31/2017)
Flash 2: Glass Ceiling Policy (12/1/2019)

Writing Exercise: Flashback

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Providing backstory is a constant challenge to writers. Sometimes the bits in pieces dropped in during dialog and narrative are not enough. How can one deliver a huge chunk of backstory without bogging the story down? Because that is usually what happens, a huge exposition dump of the “history” is delivered in a tell-not-show fashion killing momentum.

One of the ways to work around this is deliver the backstory in an action-narrative format similar to the rest of the manuscript via a flashback. The problem with that is the transitions between the flashback and narrative aren’t smooth.

WRITING EXERCISE: Attempt to create the transition for a flashback, including the transition back into the story. Don’t write the flashback or the story, just the transition bits.

***

My attempt

“Oh, you want to know what happened.” She drew her foot back and forth on the ground looking pensive. “It all started at the library…”

***

Darkness swallowed the library entrance. Yeah, going in was stupid, but I was fifteen, the definition of stupid.

(fill in the blank)

The bodies dissolved and the smoke settled as we sisters looked at each other in our living room, gasping for breath.

***

“…and fortunately the blood washed out of the carpet before the parents got home from their date night.” She smiled. “Everyone was in bed, teeth brushed, so no harm, no foul, right?”

(first published 10/24/2015; republished new blog format 11/26/2019)

Flash: An Infidelity of Hearts

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“Hit me,” the brunette said after adding her last three gold coins to the pot, leaning on the table holding her cards in one hand and her fingers lingering on her wine glass, keeping track of it at all times. A wise choice in this dark casino where beautiful women were known to lose, not only at cards, but their virtue and even their lives.

The dealer slid the next card from his deck to her to replace the deuce she had discarded.

Around the table, others either folded or tossed in markers to match the raise and asked for cards. All the others were male and bought their lady luck. Fat cats content to let young things either rented at the door, or purchased elsewhere, drip diamonds advertising the status of their owners. A few of the females scattered around the vice den wore matching rings to their men, indicating a marriage contract, but none of the females at this high-roller table existed except for the value of their temporary beauty.

The brunette wore neither rings nor diamonds. Her simple sheathe clung to everything below her shoulders until it ended just over her knees, leaving nothing to the imagination, but also nothing completely known except the gown had been tailored to her person indicating money. The shoes didn’t scream any famous designer’s name; those who measure a person’s wealth by such things could not tell who made them, only the creator was neither famous nor an off-the-rack factory worker. Her hair, makeup, nails, and manners were all likewise unique, making the security and the grifters nervous.

Her money spent well. The transfer for the casino markers unquestioned, and since she didn’t play against the house, her slow winning throughout the afternoon and into the deep night had not removed her from contention as she moved up the food chain to the highest of the card tables.

No one raised her before the dealer returned to her seat, the pot already exceeding what most people outside the club’s doors would earn in a year, and had emptied the pockets of several of those sitting. This would be the end of their night’s entertainment, unless they asked for a credit extension from the house. Only the desperate or addicted were so foolhardy considering the temperament of the owners, yet every night someone did.

“Last bets.” The dealer called. No one added anything, though the grifter fingered his remaining twelve coins before passing. Starting on the woman’s right, people started flipping over their cards, pairs, triples, and even a full house.

The prize grifter at the table, the one the high-rollers come to beat each night turned over a four-of-a-kind in aces with the one king which hadn’t been part of the full house, a heart. “Sorry, hon. Maybe you can earn back your winnings in trade.”

Smiling at the professional, she laid down her cards one-by-one. Nine, ten, page, jack, and finally queen high. All of the same suit, as red as her gown. Nicknamed an Infidelity of Hearts on this planet, as the king had been replaced by the jack and page in the queen’s chambers, spread before her. Turning her attention to the dealer, she said, “I’m cashing out.”

Around the table, protests started.

“Sorry, gentlemen. But an Infidelity always is followed by bad luck. I must cash out.”

“Fair enough,” the grifter’s agreement silenced the protests. “Maybe another day.”

“I look forward to it.” The unknown woman drained her drink and took the slip the dealer passed her, looking to confirm the amount won before walking away.

***

The cage transferred her winnings back to the account where the money started, after Carin told them which tips to give to the tables she had worked that night. The dealers would know who tipped them as she was only one of three women betting their own money. While she didn’t plan on ever returning, certain traditions needed to be followed, otherwise the house wouldn’t let her walk out the door.

Securing her ID wand, she exited into the early morning hours, before the street lights raised to morning brightness on the tide-locked world, wondering how far she would get before something happened. The Torquatus mafia kept the area around the casino under tight surveillance. Carin gave it two blocks, when she officially left their territory.

Turns out, she underestimated their greed. Pity, she liked thinking about the romance of the mob.

Her kidnappers were pissed off when the wand’s firewalls eventually fell, revealing empty accounts. The money had bounced off-world before she had even stepped foot outside the Sloth’s doors.

But the night hadn’t been about her walking out with enough money to purchase a private asteroid.

She was bait for the slave trafficking. Torquantus had been too greedy, too often, and Carin and the mercenary unit she belonged to had been hired to bring it down completely. Waking up slightly bruised and very disoriented from the drugs, Carin felt a deep satisfaction to find herself naked and collared.

(Words 813; First published 11/29/2019)