Flash: Gynock (Part 1)

One of the campaigns I ran used Vampire the Masquerade to power a superhero campaign. Gynock was a player character in the campaign and fell under an obsession. In a storyteller format-based game, I didn’t want a simple “oh, you double botched, that isn’t good” on the mind control, so I wrote up a story … 5,000 words … to translate the game mechanics into a narrative for the player.

Part 1 opens with Gynock waking up with his brain marbles still thoroughly shook.

He had been hearing beeps for a while before opening his eyes. He quickly closed them as the uncompromising white flooded his senses. The light was so bright that it hurt his eyes. He opened them more slowly this time, barely lifting them so that his eyelashes protected him from the worst of the glare. A voice from the brightness cheerfully welcomed him saying, “Oh good, you’re awake.”

He tried to see if he could speak. “Kind-of,” he croaked. He wasn’t certain if the sound made it past his lips.

“Have a little water” and he saw a bottle condense out of the white haze before him with a sipper straw attached. He greedily sucked the water into his too dry throat.

He flexed his hands discretely as he gulped the liquid; both were braced against something, as were his legs. His right hand had tape across the back. So he was restrained noted the combat portion deep within. The rest of his brain was fuzzy, not functioning. Something had happened.

“Good afternoon, I don’t believe we have met. My name is Dr. Reed.” The voice had changed to something deeper, more rolling. His inner self noted three people in the room and was disturbed because he couldn’t place the exact locations by sound alone, although he knew he should be capable of it. “What is yours?’

The question stumped him for a moment, then his tongue gave the answer before his brain could find it in the cotton wadding acting as his brain. “Gynock.”

“Good, good.” replied the doctor. “And what is your last name?”

Gynock thought a moment and “Pran” welled forth on his tongue and in his mind concurrently.

“And your birthday?”

Confused he answered, “I don’t know.”

“You don’t know,” replied the doctor in a noncommental tone.

“No, my wife keeps track of stuff like that.” He had a wife? Trying to search through the slush, he confirmed it. Closing his eyes completely, a small dark-haired woman formed behind the lids. The glare was getting worse the more awake he got.

“What’s her name?”

“Destinee.”

“Does she have a last name?”

“Yes, Pran, same as mine.”

“What is her maiden name?”

Gynock’s eyebrows knitted as he tried to think of it. His tongue didn’t seem to know the answer either. He wanted to answer, but he had none. Finally, compelled by the haze, he answered with a quip. “Don’t think she was ever a maiden.”

He heard the doctor sigh before the man continued. “How many children do you have?”

“One.” And the dam broke in his mind, all centered around his little girl. A rare smile touched his lips and he volunteered, “Melodie Pran.”

“You are her biological father?”

Annoyed at the intrusion as he sorted through his partially restored memory, he threw back, “Of course.”

“And the biological mother?”

“Destinee.”

“Good, good.” said the doctor. “Do you know where you are?”

“A hospital.” He had certainly spent enough time in them during his short life; the scent was unmistakable. This time Gynock opened his eyes slowly but all the way. He now remembered he was light sensitive. There were three men in the room, he was pleased to note. One was a nurse type hovering over the two suits, both with clipboards diligently taking notes. The closer man was asking the questions.

“What do you remember last?”

He thought back: the group had gone to Waco and arrived at the house. The target had come to the door. No wait, not the target … “Moonblossom,” Gynock whispered in reverent awe.

“Good, good. What else do you remember?”

“Is she all right?” That became of driving importance despite the haze and the need to answer the questions being asked. That her perfection should not be harmed was the most important thing in the world to him.

“What do you remember?” the doctor continued in his calm steady voice, not answering Gynock’s question.

Gynock glanced around the room again. No windows and one door. He was restrained. He could be at HQ, though he might not be. He didn’t recognize anything or anyone. He still felt the need to answer the questions, but something inside him was holding him back a second. It seemed to be the training his wife put him through long ago. The fuzz must be from drugs, not injury. He wiggled his right hand again; an IV was taped there. He had gone through that for months when he was a child recovering from the fire. Truth serum? Maybe, but not anything he had previously been exposed to.

“Not much.” He answered, tapping into the training. He still needed to answer and could only answer the truth, but he could sidestep a little. “Was I knocked out or something?”

“Alright then, please tell us what you do remember.”

Were they enemy, friend or some normal hospital just going through the normal tests of establishing identity after a head injury? “Like I said, not much. Moonblossom answered the door.” And filled it spectacularly, as thoughts of her now filled his mind. She had been in danger. He remembered trying to make certain no one hurt her, then his memories just stopped.

“Good, good. And after Moonblossom answered the door, what happened?”

The compulsion to answer built, but he was able to trump it with a programmed response. “I need to see my wife.” Gynock wanted to ask for anyone else other than the evil that had brainwashed him in childhood, but this was a safe harbor they had formed in his mind when she had molded him.

“That is not advisable until we make sure you are up to it.”

He snorted in derision. “She has seen me worse.”

“Mr. Pran, we are trying to do what is best for you.”

“What is best for me is knowing she is nearby.”

(Words 978; first published 5/10/2020)

Flash: Armfield

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Summertime in Armfield is what heaven wished it could be. The sun shines a little more gently than Sol, the air contains a bit more oxygen, the sky cloudless except for two hours in the afternoon bringing gentle rains, and the most amazing bit, not a single terraform engine in sight constantly forcing the planet back into the pattern for human existence with an entire industry dedicated to keeping it going. Armfield welcomed the first scouts to the last load of refuges from Earth before the Unified Planets collapsed back in 2914 without us needed to change a single thing.

We don’t know how many planets are still out there with people. The terraform engines had an expected lifespan of fifty years, and it’s been a hundred since the collapse. I brushed the melancholy thoughts away as I walk from my farm to the Mating Fair celebrating the day humans first set foot on Armfield. Crowds drawn from plantations from miles around push me to the edge of the ceramic-clay road. I lack the exuberance of youth to run in packs and the hereditary wealth of the first settlers giving them room as people parted to avoid being stepped on or run over by large horses and hovercarts.

My mother had been on the last ship out of Earth; I was lucky to be farming my own land.

A few of my neighbors waved greetings as they moved by. Jackson and Limer brought their hovercart alongside and offered me a ride, which I politely turned down. If I had to listen to them pitch to buy my property one more time, someone wouldn’t be making it back to their roofs tonight.

My favorite offer from them so far was becoming their mutual concubine and letting any of my children keep the money of the sale. By favorite, I mean I managed not to stab them through the eye.

(words 318, first published 9/30/22)

Market Day Series

  1. Market (8/27/2019)
  2. Armfield (5/30/2020)Not canon. Sometimes you start down a path and the story is just wrong. I kept at it and it didn’t get better. Going to try again though.
  3. Market Day Purchase (11/1/2020)This one worked MUCH better, expanding the original.

Flash: The Ancient Vitz Tree

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Green leaves peeled away from a timepiece, then the metal-seeming object broke from the stem to fall into Damonia’s waiting hands. “Thank you, great one.”

The next child stepped forward for their gift from the town tree while Damonia walked away, completing the adulthood ceremony. Most supplicants receive an edible fruit from the Vitz.

Once away from the crowd, the newly fruited adult eyed the watch.

Ungood. That is what this was. Beautiful, breathtaking, but ungood.

(words 76, first published 3/28/2022, from a FB visual prompt for a writing group I belong to – aiming for 50 words)

The Ancient Vitz Tree Series
The Ancient Vitz Tree (4/26/2020)
The Ancient Vitz Tree 2 (2/5/2023)

Flash: These Things Don’t Just Happen

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“Really, really? How the …” Julia sputtered to a stop. “These things don’t just happen.”

Onighgah shook her head and turned away. “Maybe in your world.”

“What do you mean ‘my world’?” Confusion infused the words.

Running a quick hand over her headwrap, the black woman considered how to respond to her white friend. Nearly friend, someone from work who she lunched with when they sat in the cafeteria since they always were on break together and the room only had two tables. It would have been noticeably rude to sit at the other one. Unfortunately today she got a phone call to bail her brother out of jail which Julia had overheard and one thing led to another.

“In your world, walking down the street doesn’t end with someone questioning why you are in the neighborhood.”

Julia rolled her eyes.

“White privilege is a thing. A real thing, girl.” Onighgah continued.

After a quick puff of exasperation, Julia shook her head. “Blah, blah. Slavery. Oppression. Come on. That is ages ago. Get over it. This is America.” Julie swept her hand around the small room where the large store retail employees were required to take their breaks. “If you are failing, it is on you.”

Onighgah’s teeth ground.

“Whatever your brother did, he shouldn’t have been doing it.”

“He.was.walking.to.his.class.” Each word bit the air with frost. “The.one.he.teaches.at.the.high.school.”

“If that is all he was doing, the cops wouldn’t have bothered him.”

“You—“ The black woman cut herself off as her voice raised. “No, not going there.” After packing the balance of her lunch up in the brown paper bag she brought today, she stood. She crushed it between her hands, back and forth, kneading it like a baseball. “Come with me to bail him out.” She finally spat.

“What?”

“Tonight, after work, come with me to bail him out. We’ll do a little makeup, you got a dark Italian coloring, it won’t take much. Wrap one of my extra scarfs around your head.”

“Are you crazy?” Julia stared up at her co-worker.

“I dare you.”

(words 346; first published 4/19/2020)

 

 

P is for prejudice

Flash: Rafella de Sable (Part 4)

So with her family history and her personal history established, I needed to give the DM pieces to play with – story for him to weave into what was happening but far enough in advance he can take it in a completely different direction if he wanted. As it turned out the game fell apart after two sessions – the first to make the characters and the second was the first adventure.

Even though I never really got a chance to fully explore Rafella, I really like her and her family. They have gone through a lot. I wonder what happened next in her life.

*** Rafella de Sable (Part 4) – The Groomspeaker arrives soon

The wedding contract is to be finalized on her twenty-fifth birthday, which will double as the engagement party should the groomspeaker be pleased with the final product. Nearly immediately after the wedding is to take place. Which is good, since the family is nearly out of money again. Paying for the dowries of her two sisters, arranging for her brothers marriage, and maintaining the house for three families (grandfather, brother and sister), as well as her own training, consumed the initial payment. The final payment is scheduled for delivery after the wedding night. Then that Rafaela will leave with her husband and never have to see her family again. A prospect she eagerly awaits. She respects the old man as much as she hates him. Her sister is a prig and her husband an overweight wannabe. And her brother is a sniveling, self-centered jerk and his wife is a worthless ditz. Her other two sisters are long gone and never understood her. She will be able to finish her obligations to the family that raised her and start paying her obligation to the person that paid for her to learn magic.

Rafaela is curious about the next few weeks. She has never been certain if the groomspeaker arranged for the contract for himself, his son or his benefactor. The man is at least twenty years her senior, which means he is over forty-five; if he is meant to be her husband, she just might break him on the wedding night. In under nine days she will walk into her engagement ball and officially meet her fiancée the first time. Her grandfather has arranged everything; she hasn’t even talked directly to the groomspeaker since her sister’s wedding sixteen years ago. Sometimes she would be called into the office and paraded in front of him with them asking questions around her but never to her, but that is it. One month after that the wedding is scheduled, enough time to do the final planning, while not making the families make two trips. She has started saying goodbye to her true friends, the thieves’ guild. A handful of the higher-ups even know who she is in real life and have been invited to the party (some of them are high enough in the social structure that it was automatic, but others should raise a few eyebrows).

Her life is going to totally change when she walks down the main staircase from the Gallery of Elders and places her gloved hand in the hand of the man standing at the bottom of the steps. She plans to look long and hard at the person she will be vowing to spend the rest of her life with. Because of obligations owed, she won’t try to run if she doesn’t like what she sees, but she is hoping to have the change of luck that comes to her family when they change their name.

NOTES TO DM:

  • The curse to the line may actual or just perceived.
  • The story the old woman told her may be actual or a malicious lie.
  • The old thief may still be alive somewhere and they meet him outside.
  • The sister’s wedding could have been in the local kingdom or out-of-kingdom so her paramour could come from a different set of traditions (including slavery).
  • Don’t know anything about her husband, where he is from, what he is like, etc other than he knows people that have access to money and want him to marry a mage.
  • Don’t know where they will be going after the wedding.
  • The engagement party is to take place in SEVEN TO NINE DAYS game time.

(Words 600, first written for game 9/23/2005; first published 3/8/2020)