Book Review: Touch A Trilogy (Series)

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Touch: A Trilogy by A.G. Carpenter
Of Lips and Tongue: A Touch Trilogy Novella (Book 1) by A.G. Carpenter
Of Shade and Soul: Touch Trilogy Novella (Book 2) by A.G. Carpenter
Of Flesh and Bone: Touch Trilogy Novella (Book 3) by A.G. Carpenter

SERIES REVIEW

Unexpected. Awesome.

This Southern Gothic mixes together urban fantasy elements, a little bit of horror, and some of the police procedural/CSI/mystery genre. Sprinkle in a little romance. Mix together completely and the book stands on its own – gripping, entertaining, … loosing you a bit from the real world.

And as with all my highest ratings on Goodreads, the worldbuilding is spot on. The magic being integral is never explained. Everyone living here knows how it works; it isn’t something new because of a break in reality. And a reader learns about it as they sink into the bones of the story and world. It sneaks in the little crevices of the mind, like a cold air into a plank house. No need to build a bright info dump fire; the shadows in the corners hint at everything and reveal nothing.

Available as a collection (Touch: A Trilogy) or three novellas – Of Lips and Tongues; Of Shade and Soul; and Of Flesh and Bone. Each title perfectly fits the story. Also out in audiobook.

 

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Of Lips and Tongue: A Touch Trilogy Novella (Book 1) by A.G. Carpenter

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Delaney Green is one of them that don’t burn. Possessed of the Touch – with the ability to not only see the future but manipulate it – she’s been kept in an institution for most of her life. When the Salesman, a murderous entity with a connection to Delaney’s past, starts burning girls to death, FBI Agent Percival Cox gives her the chance to leave the asylum behind. But he presents an even greater threat and she must risk flesh and bone in order to keep him from becoming a Power more destructive than the Salesman.

MY REVIEW

Unexpected. Awesome.

This Southern Gothic has a little bit of urban fantasy elements (in that it has monster bumping about in the contemporary world – but the setting is about non-urban as you can get and still have people everywhere), a little bit of horror elements (people die in not nice ways), and bit of the police procedural/CSI/mystery elements. Mix together completely and the book stands on its own – gripping, entertaining, … loosing you a bit from the real world.

The characters each stand by themselves and in their relations to others, different motives, reasons, and goals. The language and descriptions are beautiful.

 

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Of Shade and Soul: Touch Trilogy Novella (Book 2) by A.G. Carpenter

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Delaney Green might be dead, but she don’t mean to stay that way. As she searches for a way back to the realm of the living, and the man she lay down flesh and bone for, Percival Cox and his team investigate a series of deaths and stolen souls. But Percy is not the man he used to be. If Del can’t find a way to stop him from waking his past, he could destroy everything, including himself.

MY REVIEW

Nice Southern Gothic to spook the corners of your mind.

Continuing the Touch Trilogy, this time the monster isn’t quite as bad, the world is a bit more unreal, and the voice of the story isn’t as strong. The “sagging” middle of a trilogy – cleaning up the ends of the last book and setting up for the cooking of the next meal, this snack satisfies but doesn’t fill.

On its own, a solid story but works much better within the trilogy. The CSI/mystery component is an appropriate investigation for the FBI group, but I miss the original community with the sheriff and cast of characters in the rural area. Suburbia has its share of eccentrics, but the constant pruning of rubbing shoulders with lots of people keep them from reaching the full heights found in the rural setting of the first book.

Jumping into the third book now because Delaney needs her Bones, ’cause she ain’t good at staying dead, and Percy could use some pruning before reaching the full heights of his Power.

 

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Of Flesh and Bone: Touch Trilogy Novella (Book 3) by A.G. Carpenter

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Delaney Green may have found her way back to the living, but her new body isn’t going to last. Without magic, and still separated from Percy, she is forced to rely on the tangled memory of what might be to find a way to reclaim her bones. With the help of an old ally, and the reluctant assistance of new enemies, Del must take the final steps down a long road home.

The Touch Trilogy is a series of Southern Gothic novellas, short novels with a lyrical style and eerie tone, perfect for fans of True Blood or Flannery O’Connor.

MY REVIEW

Tell me a story.

“Well, just set yourself down a spell,” says the author AG Carpenter, setting the rocking chair creaking on the old porch. 

I take up the painted blue rocker beside the writer and start sipping the sweet tea which has appeared in my hand. Outside in the darkness, the cicadas chirp and the mist start rolling in as the heat of the day dissipates. I hear the moths and bugs fling themselves at the overhead bulb, searching for a fiery death. In my other hand appears a book “Of Flesh and Bone”, the third of a series of novella and I get dragged into the Southern Gothic with a comfortable fearfulness.

Knowing the unknowable of those Touched. 

I try not to look sideways at the chair set in motion by the wind and assure myself that the voice I heard – still hear strongly from the story – is just a story.

Yeah, the book is exactly like that.

A comfortable fearfulness.

Book Review: The Elements of Style

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You know the authors’ names. You recognize the title. You’ve probably used this book yourself. This is The Elements of Style, the classic style manual, now in a fourth edition. A new Foreword by Roger Angell reminds readers that the advice of Strunk & White is as valuable today as when it was first offered. This book’s unique tone, wit and charm have conveyed the principles of English style to millions of readers. Use the fourth edition of “the little book” to make a big impact with writing.

MY REVIEW

(Review of Second Edition from 1972 – review done January 2020)
I recently ran across a recommendation to read “The Elements of Style” and discovered the book on my shelf; I must have inherited it from my parents.

This classic book, though the initial material is over 100 years old at this point, is still relevant today (with a bit of care as the language continues to evolve). The central point of The Elements of Style, writing brief, specific, powerful, and active, is as relevant today in genre fiction as when this short book was a self-published pamphlet Professor Strunk shared with his classes.

If you don’t want to slog through the Chicago Manual of Style, pick up this short book (74-pages in the version I got). It’s still a gold standard.

Book Review: The Rules of Supervillainy

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The Rules of Supervillainy by C.T. Phipps

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Gary Karkofsky is an ordinary guy with an ordinary life living in an extraordinary world. Supervillains, heroes, and monsters are a common part of the world he inhabits. Yet, after the death of his hometown’s resident superhero, he gains the amazing gift of the late champion’s magical cloak. Deciding he prefers to be rich rather than good, Gary embarks on a career as Merciless: The Supervillain Without Mercy.

But is he evil enough to be a villain in America’s most crime-ridden city?

Gary soon finds himself surrounded by a host of the worst of Falconcrest City’s toughest criminals. Supported by his long-suffering wife, his ex-girlfriend turned professional henchwoman, and a has-been evil mastermind, Gary may end up being not the hero they want but the villain they need.

 

MY REVIEW

A solid entry into the superhero prose genre. A couple deus-ex-machina moments help save the day, but I think those sudden saves are going to bite the character hard later and are totally within the genre being written. I’ll be upset during book two if things don’t have fallout, but every indication is someone on a frying pan suddenly getting the ability to jump and when coming down just starts to see the fire (to be continued in book 2).

Love the amoral character’s relationship with his wife and two ex-girlfriends. Some very mature (and immature) relationship dynamics going on with the story.

Falconcrest is an awesome city within the superhero world and is a worthy character in its own right like most great cities of story, reality & myth: Gotham and Chicago are two examples. With only one book read, Falconcrest City is about the Central City and Atlanta level, but I have hopes it might grown into a New Orleans level personality.

Final comment: When Death LIKES you, you may want to question your life choices.

Book Review: Strange Practice

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Strange Practice by Vivian Shaw

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The first book in a delightfully witty fantasy series in which Dr. Greta Helsing, doctor to the undead, must defend London from both supernatural ailments and a bloodthirsty cult

Greta Helsing inherited her family’s highly specialized and highly peculiar medical practice. In her consulting rooms, Dr. Helsing treats the undead for a host of ills: vocal strain in banshees, arthritis in barrow-wights, and entropy in mummies. Although she barely makes ends meet, this is just the quiet, supernatural-adjacent life Greta’s been groomed for since childhood.

Until a sect of murderous monks emerges, killing human and undead Londoners alike. As terror takes hold of the city, Greta must use her unusual skills to stop the cult if she hopes to save her practice and her life.

 

MY REVIEW

My book club came across this gem: a bright urban fantasy with medical overtones. I’ve always enjoyed science fictions stories with medical woven in (See the Sector General series by James White and Stardoc by S.L. Viehl), so I looked forward to this one.

Dr. Greta Helsing works in a specialized General Practitioner area, helping the undead and monsters of her community. A housecall ends up with an emergency surgery for an allergic reaction to an embedded object. Investigation into the allergen to see if it could be a problem to her service community reveals an ancient medieval society reorganized and determined to solve the “unclean” problem once and for all – among monsters AND normal humans. And Dr. Helsing is first on their list, because they don’t need the monsters healed.

Good solid story. Everything I hoped for.

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For those interested in editing and writing continue here – note lots of spoilers as this concentrates on the end of the story – which has some great writing lessons: (1) By the book Climax of Action bringing all the heroes to their knees at the same time after carefully separating then into smaller chunks. Perfect killing them in isolation. (2) After the heroes “win”, we face the Dark Night of Soul moment – giving a wonderful pain in the emotional journey of the primary heroine. (3) Then falling action ties up the lose end for an emotionally satisfying ending in the final chapter and epilogue. … A very formulaic ending hitting everything perfectly brought out how good the book is throughout the story at meeting the readers expectations of an Urban Fantasy story. If you want to know how to write a story or help someone with development, use this book as an instruction manual. 

Book Review: Storm Lake

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Storm Lake by Val Tobin

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If you go down to the woods tonight — don’t.

This gripping horror story is no teddy bears’ picnic.

Thirteen-year-old Rachel and her little brother are looking forward to a weekend of canoeing and spending time with their friends up at the family cottage on Storm Lake in Ontario, Canada. But something terrifying has birthed itself from the trees, and the kids find themselves trapped in an isolated marina fighting for their lives…

 

MY REVIEW

I don’t read horror and did not realize that was what I was getting when I picked up this short story while it was free on Kindle.

That being said the story totally sucked me in the whole way. I curled further and further into a ball while reading it as each of the children’s protectors failed. I was scared, terrified, and ready to put a metal room on my house by the end of the forty-one pages.

Then the writer in me started analyzing how the story was built. Classic start of normality so you care about the character and the introduction of the sinister without it being sinister – then danger is hinted at, then observed, then shown, then brutally thrust into the characters lives. A moment of slow to capture your breath and reestablish caring for these characters (far deeper than you should for a short story), then it gets worse and worse. They do everything right, but this is a horror story. Each time you think the stakes can’t get any higher, they do. 

If you want to figure out how to write a good horror story, this would be a wonderful one to study. Well done, Ms. Tobin. Very well done.

Note that since I read this short story, Ms. Tobin created a full-length novel followup. This short story works fine as a stand-alone.