Editing Rant: No One Is Stealing Your Idea

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What a bundle of mess. No one is going to steal your idea – and even if they did, they can’t steal your story. Pirate it, sure, but only after it is written.

Okay, let’s just deal with some of the concepts and myths new writers and non-writers have.

If I share my idea, and you write with it, I get some of the money.

How many of you have been approached by someone with an idea for a story guaranteed to make a bundle? You do all the work, but the idea man gets half the cash in the deal. Writers don’t have a problem coming up with an idea – the problem is doing the work to bring the idea to fruition. If someone has an idea and wants someone else to write it and the idea man gets the money, that is call GHOSTWRITING. The Ghost Writer gets paid by the IDEA MAN who then owns the writing – usually the Ghost Writer is paid something up front and the balance on delivery.

So, no, if you are an Idea Man, you don’t get money for not working. I have several hundred ideas – some of which are partially fleshed out in flashes on this blog. And every writer I know is in the same boat with far more ideas than time to write them. We don’t need someone else’s idea, unless it comes with a paycheck.

I can’t share my idea; someone might steal it.

The bundle of irrational this myth has includes unwillingness to query an agent who might give the idea to one of their contracted authors and the unwillingness to bounce ideas off of people who might sit down and type out the seventy thousand words to make the idea a reality. Nope and nope. Again, all writers have ideas – no one needs to steal more, if they are a writer.

A writer, on the other hand, DOES need to bounce ideas off of people. So do this.

Now it may look like someone has “stolen your idea”. This is because there are times when certain ideas come to fruition in a society; the winner in the writing game in those cases is whomever writes those 70K words first and cleans them up for publication. Some of the books I’ve read have been like “dude, get out of my head”. I’ve never met the author, but they have taken one of the ideas that bounced around my head and wrote it out. I’ve seen at least four science-fiction military stories on school debt.

They all are different. That is the thing. No one can steal your idea, because even if everyone starts from the same point – you end up with different stories. With a writing group where several of the members were scared of someone stealing their ideas, I had everyone start from the same exact words: “He took to the list…” – the flashes ended up with a contemporary romance, a historical military fight, and a science fiction courtroom drama. Same exact starting point.

Pirating isn’t stealing.

Okay, this one someone really is stealing your story. Or maybe music or art. Fight it.

And you – you who goes “I don’t have the money to pay.” don’t do it! There is a TON of free stuff out there. Look at this blog – I have somewhere north of 600 posts about writing and free fiction. I’m making videos. I make memes to share. All I ask is my name to remain attached to the product if shared.

If you are a content creator and you pirate, shame on you.

The free stuff is free, but pay for the stuff that isn’t. Content creators need to eat. (Speaking of which, I got a patreon you can sign up for if you want to make sure I eat so I can continue making the free stuff. – https://www.patreon.com/ErinPenn)

Pirating is stealing. This is complete work, not an idea. Hundreds of hours. But this isn’t in the “someone will steal my idea if I share it” at all. Pirating is taking someone’s completed work and is a billion dollar CRIMINAL business. Criminals don’t like doing the thinking work, they just want the product to resell. So an idea – pheff – that is way too much effort.

Plagiarizing isn’t stealing.

This is another one where someone actually is stealing work. But again, the idea has been taken to fruition. The work has been done – they want to steal the WORK, not the idea.

And again, my fellow writers, don’t plagiarize. You think it would be obvious to grown ups, but noooo. 

And readers will find you out. Some of us read over a hundred books a year – someone is going to go … “wait a minute”.

Conclusion

At the end of the day, no one will ever steal an idea. Even people with similar ideas or starting points, when the WORK is put in, will create something completely different – because the creators are different.

There are CRIMINALS who will steal the WORK once it is complete, but ideas aren’t worth the paper they haven’t been printed on yet so the criminals don’t care.

In conclusion, bounce your ideas off of people to hash them out to the point you can do Butt In Chair, Hands On Keyboard (BICHOK). The WORK is what makes a writer.

Flash: Porter Gets Infravision

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“Why didn’t you wake me?” Porter hissed at Tik as she scrambled out of her bedroll.

The half-orc warrior shook her head in confusion as the warlock hastily stuffed her items into her backpack. Those touched by magic were a strange lot. Powerful. The arching lighting between the immovable warlock and the closing bugbear was etched into her eyeballs from the afternoon battle. Who knew their little oxen driver had that up her sleeves?

Tik angled her body away from the banked campfire to continue watch on the raccoon family trundling through the thicket where the small caravan was hiding. The small snaps and rustling from the raccoons and Porter interfered with her ability to hear further afield. While her party managed to clear out the nearby goblin lair, other creatures with ill intent may be nearby.

Porter stepped over the halfling and sideslipped past the half-elf before joining Tik at her post. “I can’t believe no one else is up yet. The dwarven chants usually get me up long before now.”

“I just started my shift.” Tik injected to cut the verbose teenager off. They may be the same age, but the human had a very different life experience.

“What?” Porter stage-whispered. “But you don’t usually start until mid…”

Tik watched as the dark-skinned girl looked up, her curls flowing down her back as her face turned skyward.

“That isn’t the sun.”

“Nope.” Tik responded to the bizarre statement.

“The moon.”

“Yep.”

“And stars.”

“Yep.”

“Really?” Porter threw out her arms, whispering loudly to the heavens. “Now you give me this?!”

Tik watched as she stomped softly through the group of sleeping bodies to get her pack. Words muttered under-breath carried strangely around the heat currents of the fire. “Of all the … omnipotent asshole … roulette of the mind … is everything …”

When the only full human in the party had returned, Porter stood in front of Tik on the side away from the fire and took a cleansing breath in and out before smiling the fakest smile Tik had ever seen outside of a merchant. “I will be going into the woods a little ways. Don’t worry if you see any lightning or hear any maniacal laughter. There may even be a little screaming.”

Tik shrugged. “I am not to worry if you die. Got it.”

A genuine smile split Porter’s beautiful face. “Exactly! Oh, I do like you.”

Later the half-elf joined Tik watching the minor dancing lights beyond the thicket. “What is up?”

“Porter.”

“That girl has issues.”

Tik grunted, wiping the dew from her weapon.

“Did she get enough sleep?”

“Not after what she has been doing for the last three hours.”

“Hmmm.” The half-elf tilted her head sideways. “Maybe I should help her.”

“I wouldn’t interrupt.” Tik sheathed her blades before standing. She was looking forward to a final catnap before dawn. In the predawn light, she noticed the dwarf rolling his bedroll for his morning prayers. “Besides the shrieks stopped a little while ago; she is nearly done.”

Shift change completed, Tik was asleep before her elbows made contact with the dirt. She only woke when the slight breeze blowing on her back was blocked. Porter liked sleeping near the two women fighters; her unique scent of roses, sand, and soot traveled on what was left of the breeze. Tik’s mind noted the change as nonthreatening and fell back to dreamless sleep. Come dawn, they were going to storm a castle and everyone needed to be sharp.

(Words 586; first published 12/8/2019)

Yes, it is from a D&D campaign. My Warlock character got infravision between battles after needing it as the only non-infrared vision character of the party. This is what I pictured her reaction to be. This is an attempt to align game mechanics with storytelling.

Other Cool Blogs: Magical Words 5/14/2010

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I’ve got a confession to make: I like running Monty Hall campaigns. I just love giving out magic items when I DM (dungeon master). I like making them and passing them out like candy … and I tend to introduce gods to a campaign way too early.

Too Much Power syndrome.

But it’s so much fun. Strangely, this doesn’t translate over to my writing much. I mean, sure, in flashes where there isn’t going to be a day-in day-out, multi-sequel build – hit god-level all I want (which, again, isn’t often – the I am Prophecy series being the exception which proves the rule). I also prefer science fiction in my writing and avoid fantasy, but when I roleplay I like the fantasy games and not the science fiction. 

Anyway, I would like to focus on the Too Much Power issue today – which A.J. Hartley (a living embodiment of TMP in real life as a NY Times best-selling writer and the Robinson Distinguished Professor of Shakespeare at UNC Charlotte) talks about in Wrestling the TMP on Magical Words.

In my present campaign, I have let the warlock have his demon be a mouse he carries around in his pocket during the initial session. TMP from the get-go. I used it to bring a character back from the dead during the third or fourth session. The party was second level at that point. Do you have a headache yet – because I’ve just set up a huge issue with TMP in the campaign.

The only way to reign things in was limit the power. The resurrected character paid dearly for being brought back – with some interesting bonuses thrown in, but he won’t be risking his life on another round trip anytime soon. And the warlock also is unsure about the cost he had to pay to survive the consequences of bothering his patreon. 

The comment section of the Magical Word post goes on about Costs and Limitations when a TMP is introduced. (Be sure to read it.) Maybe I can’t back out of my Monty Hall actions, but the TMP benefits can be modified.

The ability to modify is something to keep in mind should I ever write an Urban Fantasy serial. So many expand beyond reasonable too quickly, increasing the costs of the TMP may the way to go. And it can add some interesting plot twists as well. I can’t (or at least shouldn’t) change cannon, but what isn’t discussed yet is open season.

Again, the link for Dr. Hartley’s post and related comments is:

READING EXERCISE: Think about a television show, movie, or book – even your own work-in-progress – which has a TMP person or object. How did the writers work around it? Did they randomly shut it down (like the example Dr. Hartley provided) or was there a “leash” built into the power? How did the TMP help or hinder the storyline?

(Additional comment: Superhero stories are rife with the TMP syndrome, but for the villains and the heroes.)

Book Review: A Hero By Any Other Name

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A Hero By Any Other Name, an anthology by Silence in the Library publishing company

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What does a sidekick do after retirement? What does a super villain do when he meets an evil greater than himself? Is it power that defines a hero, or something else? All of these questions and more are answered in A Hero By Any Other Name, a collection of stories by some of today’s best-known science fiction and fantasy authors. These riveting adventures delve into the lives of some not-so-conventional superheroes, sidekicks, and villains. This isn’t all tights-and-fights, but a look at heroes that will forever alter your perspective on those who choose to live behind a mask. Includes stories from Aaron Allston, Michael A. Stackpole, Janine K. Spendlove, Maxwell Alexander Drake, Bryan Young, Jean Rabe, R.T. Kaelin, Maggie Allen, and Ron Garner.

 

MY REVIEW

As with most anthologies, some unevenness in the caliber of the writers and stories exists. The first of the nine stories “Retreads” (by Aaron Allston) is 60 pages long and represents 25% of the book and is an excellent story. If you like hero stories in prose, this particular gem is worth the entrance price.

The stories about someone other than the “main” hero – the sidekick, the villain, someone nearly ready to be a hero, someone retired from heroing. The best of the stories are those with mystery and thriller overtones: the aforementioned Retread and “Mortar’s Ovation” (by Jean Rabe). The comic book geek in me loved “A Marvelous New World” (by Maggie Allen) where con-geeks prevent an alien invasion – and “Stupendous Sparkle” (by Janine K. Spendlove) a surface superhero story which is also a very good character study in the difference between people who change the world and people who will follow others. Of the 259 pages, I really, really enjoyed 128 – so about half.

The other five stories had various things I didn’t like about them. “The Kid” (by Maxwell Alexander Drake) and “Changing the Game” (by Bryan Young) both had endings offending my American pre-disposition to happily-ever-after – doesn’t make them bad stories – and maybe having them included made the short stories when the good guys win all the better, because sometimes they don’t win. “Need to Know” (by Michael A. Stackpole) was derivative – I think it was either a homage to vintage stories or a sarcastic commentary. I didn’t get it in either vein; those that do will like this story. “All-Star” (by R. T. Kaelin) and “Hero Today, Gone Tomorrow” (by Ron Garner) were okay, but neither was thought-provoking like the thrillers or amusing like the geek nods.

Overall, a solid anthology with some excellent stories. The Con-geeks stopping the alien invasion, a sidekick who follows a true hero, the steam-punk era detective investigating a transvestite murder (yes, really!), and an invulnerable, but broken hero, soldiering on. These stories should find a place on your shelf if you like heroes by any other name.

Flash: Glass Ceiling Policy

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The Angel Cassiel flowed through the reception area, nodding once to her gatekeeper before continuing to her roost, an office of steel-clear providing an uncompromising view of the Black surrounding the space station. Every turn of the station brought new stars to the loathsomely familiar constellations as ships arrived and left the busy port. She stared out the invisible wall, hungry to dive into the endless sky as soon as her tour as co-station master ended.

Behind her, at the standing desk shoved against the far wall, the gatekeeper who had followed her into the nearly empty office ripped the countdown calendar page indicating the start of a new day. The countdown calendar was a personal indulgence, technically a waste of material where every atom used by the fabricators had been transported distances measured in light years. Fourteen gave way to thirteen and she stretched out her cream-feathered wings, cracking her shoulders. The tips brushed both walls in the sixty-foot room and her alular quills tickled the twenty-foot ceiling. No other place on the station outside of the ship bays allowed her to fully stretch.

Pulling her wings back in, she felt them brush the boy behind her, annoying her. He knew better than to follow her in until she completed her morning stretch. “This had better be important, Gate.”

“Station-Master, I have a woman waiting for you.” She saw his quick bow reflected in the window. No human eye would be able to pick it out; steel-clear did not reflect in the human spectrum, but Angels eyes dive higher and lower though they don’t share this fact with their outdated ancestors. They could encourage their scientists to make steel-clear completely non-reflective but being able to see your opponents when they did not know you could was an advantage worth keeping.

Turning to face the male, Cassiel crossed her arms across her bare torso. “I have no appointments.”

“That is true, Your Imminence. But I do believe you will wish to speak with her.” The gatekeeper kept his eyes lowered to her soft boots, like they had never drunk in the beauty of her fully outstretched wings.

Cassiel cocked her head to the side and down, looking at him through her left eye more than her right. “A precarious supposition.”

He flinched, not enough for anyone but an Angel to notice, and kept his eyes firmly on the split-toe end of her boots. “Indeed.”

“Could you expand on your hypothesis, Gate?”

“The woman is a rat, a Pure rat. Terror clings to her.” Gate’s voice carried no more inflection than reporting incoming cargo load. Less, as she had raised him up to direct service during this unwelcomed but required assignment specifically for his interest in the boring, the orderly, and the procedural. That and his unusual insights, so she listened carefully to his not-quite advice. “Only something she believes would interest you would bring her to the upper-levels.”

“I care nothing about what she believes.”

“Ah, but it would not be enough for it to just interest you. Terror would have kept the rat in her hole otherwise.” A slight tinge of disdain shaded his final words. “What she has is valuable.”

Cassiel closed the diving membrane on her eyes, narrowing them in thought. Relaxing her arms and wings, she nodded in the human fashion, “Bring her.”

***

Moving swiftly to the reception area, Company then bent under his standing desk to find the waif still curled into the furthest, darkest corner where he had left her moments before. She hadn’t run out on him, thank the Stars.

His blue-black curls fell forward as he crouched as far down as his six foot ten frame allowed. “She will see you now,” he spoke gently, tentatively reaching out a hand just a couple inches. This time the girl did not scoot further back, but jerked a nod before crawling out.

He moved back as she emerged. Slouching his broad shoulders to appear less threatening to the little female, who was the shortest full adult he had ever seen, maybe five foot under light gravity, he asked, “I will need your name.”

Hugging herself with bony hands over threadworn, patched clothing, the woman nodded again. “Yes, Spanner.” Her voice barely a whisper.

Company felt reassured. He had done a quick DNA search on the female when he had found her under his desk this morning and the name Spanner Clave Solonandra showed up as a match. How she managed to hide her existence on the station to only be recorded five times in a place where most people have DNA tested that many times in a single day, and how she managed to get into his office without setting off any of the alarms remained a mystery, but he had uncovered the correct name.

Looking into her eyes, as humans do, Company gave her a couple quick instructions. “Speak clearly. Keep your eyes lowered. Answer all questions, but do not speak unless spoken to.” He smiled as her lips pressed together. A bit of fire lit her brown eyes, smoldering behind the terror. For a moment he could see why his siblings found Pure-breds and Light-Mods attractive; he had always found them a bit dull, in wit as well as being. “The proper address for the Angel is Your Imminence or Station-Master.”

He bowed and waved his hand to the doorless entrance to the Station Master’s personal office. The airlock seal guarded the reception area. If the window went  in the oversized room, everyone in reception would die too. Not that many people came to the barren reception area. Since Angels had been created to lead ships through gravity folds between the stars, the only being at risk with the large stretch of steel-clear was whomever sat Gate. In his case, the risk was minimal, his mod-genes gave him nearly five minutes without efficiency loss to make it to an outside lock. The little one before him, though, would be dead.

She inhaled sharply entering the room. Stunned, like so many before her, she froze; her eyes drinking in the unending Black and Stars. Company gave Spanner a gentle push between the shoulders, feeling the thin, delicate bones under the loose clothing. She stumbled forward into the presence of the Angel.

He whispered, “Eyes.” knowing full well Cassiel heard him but would choose to ignore it. Unlike many of the Highest Soarers, Cassiel didn’t place much weight on obeisance. It’s one of the things he liked most about her. She didn’t need to ground others to soar.

A lifetime habit dropped the rat’s gaze to the floor as he knew it would. She spasmized something between a bow and a curtsy and moved to press her back against the wall. Seeing her sidling toward a corner, Company stood close to her, herding her to the proper distance to stand in front of an Angel.

The woman wasn’t just scared, fear had replaced her bone marrow. What had brought her here? The terror, or something beyond?

“My Gatekeeper says you have something of value for me.”

The woman jumped. Brown eyes snapped to Company, curiosity questioning, before dropping them back down to the floor at her feet.

“If I give it to you, I want to be put into a zoo.” The half-starved girl stated firmly.

“A zoo?”

Company watched the Angel’s shadow on the floor expand as the wings spread slightly. Out of the corner of his eye he observed the woman.

“Below they say you got zoos for pure. I want to go to one.”

The wings spread slightly and closed like a human breathing deep, or a bird about to pounce. Company stilled.

“Preserves have been created for Unmodified Humans of exceptional qualities. You do not have such.”

“Are you sure? I got info no one else got.” Desperation lanced through the confidence tones of the girl’s reply.

“Gate, it bores me. Remove the female and yourself. Faction shall replace you.”

Wincing at the instruction, Company turned toward the woman who just may have cost him his life.

“Wait!” Spanner took several steps toward the angel. “Please I can’t stay here. I can’t. Can’t.” Her shadow showed her looking upwards and holding something out. “Here, take this.”

Castiel’s shadow moved not at all.

Spinning around, the girl took several quick steps away from the Stationmaster and shoved a small data clip into Company’s hands. “Please, just gimme something.” He felt her hand shivering during the exchange. “Whatever it’s worth to you.”

“I’ll reward you appropriately.”

Taking the angelic proclamation as consent to proceed, Company manipulated the object around discovering the most unusual reproducer he had ever seen. Someone had taken a recorder and jury-rigged a small reproduction cube. None of the tiny buttons indicated their function. Stepping closer to the woman, he held it out to her. “Could you activate what you want to show us?”

She quickly pressed a series of buttons. A palm-sized image, amazingly crisp for the apparent quality of the recorder, started in motion of a dark room with some small gleaming items – pipes, clear containers, metal surfaces. Company squinted to make sense of what appeared.

Behind him the angel cooed thoughtfully, the human equivalent of “hmm”, before asking “Is the date stamp correct?”

“Yes,” came a firm reply.

Glancing at the girl, Company watched as her face filled with assurance. This was what was valuable, and the angel just acknowledged the fact.

“What sector?”

Not seeing the interest on the small screen, Company watched the fox-like face instead. It gave so much away. “I-i-i don’t know.” The girl shook her head, clearing the momentary confusion. No one but maintenance and the high upper levels use the original sector designations. She rubbed her leg. “I guess level three, Schwepps nest.”

“Gate.”

Of the five Orcian nests located on the station, the Schwepps were the biggest and most productive. Also the most viscous for controlling the levels assigned to their patrol. “I will be able to find it.”

“Very good. Do it and report back in three hours.”

“It’s good stuff, right? You said I get something.”

“True. Your goal coming here is never return to the lower levels?”

“I guess. And food – the zoo they feed you and keep you safe.”

“Very well. Gate, add this appliance to your request and I will sign it. The restriction will be to leave it’s mind functional, I might need it later.”

(Words 1,743; first published 12/1/2019)

Family Business Series:
Flash 1: Open Door Policy (12/31/2017)
Flash 2: Glass Ceiling Policy (12/1/2019)