Flash: Worth the Heartache

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“It’s time for you to go.”  Astrid leaned her head against Saad’s forehead, as they paused at the bottom of the steps leading to the starport’s embarking entrance.

He pressed his hands tighter against her waist. “Say the word and I will stay. I will slay dragons. I will defy the Star Council. Anything, just for another day with you.”

She chuckled through her tears, being well aware of his love of hyperbole after the year they spent together. “I cannot go, and you cannot stay. That is the nature of Compromise.”

“I will think of you always,” he urgently whispered before lightly kissing her lips.

“You lie so pretty.” Astrid stroked his cheek. “But, do, please, think of me fondly once you are back home.”

The Talal’ii prince stepped back, causing people to dodge him as they rushed to make the once-a-day trip offworld. He gave her a slight bow. “If that is all you require, my heart, I shall do so with all my being.”

“It is all I am worthy to ask.” She sunk at her knees, a poor curtsy, a throw-back to before he dragged her to all the parties, but more genuine for all that. “I shall remember you forever.”

He reached toward her, before crushing his palm into a fist just shy of touching her again. “I am not worthy of forever, and you are worthy of so much more. I hope …” Black eyes stared into her purple.

“One year. That is all visitors are allowed here. It is all we can have.” She wiped her tears, stealing one last clear vision of him, before turning on her heel and heading back to her taxi. He stared after her, she felt his eyes, but she never turned around. Once in her vehicle, she pulled away, refusing to see if he still stood there in the reverse camera.

“No, the heartache isn’t worth the game, bastard.” Astrid whispered in answer to a question asked just a local Compromise year ago in this very vehicle. Switching the active mode off, she couldn’t handle a customer today, Astrid joined the traffic leaving the planet’s only spaceport.

(words 360; first published 9/6/2023)

Book Review: A Study in Honor

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A Study in Honor by Claire O’Dell

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Set in a near future Washington, D.C., a clever, incisive, and fresh feminist twist on a classic literary icon—Sherlock Holmes—in which Dr. Janet Watson and covert agent Sara Holmes will use espionage, advanced technology, and the power of deduction to unmask a murderer targeting Civil War veterans.

Dr. Janet Watson knows firsthand the horrifying cost of a divided nation. While treating broken soldiers on the battlefields of the New Civil War, a sniper’s bullet shattered her arm and ended her career. Honorably discharged and struggling with the semi-functional mechanical arm that replaced the limb she lost, she returns to the nation’s capital, a bleak, edgy city in the throes of a fraught presidential election. Homeless and jobless, Watson is uncertain of the future when she meets another black and queer woman, Sara Holmes, a mysterious yet playfully challenging covert agent who offers the doctor a place to stay.

Watson’s readjustment to civilian life is complicated by the infuriating antics of her strange new roommate. But the tensions between them dissolve when Watson discovers that soldiers from the New Civil War have begun dying one by one—and that the deaths may be the tip of something far more dangerous, involving the pharmaceutical industry and even the looming election. Joining forces, Watson and Holmes embark on a thrilling investigation to solve the mystery—and secure justice for these fallen soldiers.

 

MY REVIEW

More of a homage than a recreation of Holmes and Watson. Whenever possible Ms. O’Dell ties pieces back to Sir Doyle’s Sherlock Holmes – Holmes’ music and causal use of sedatives to control (her) racing mind and others; Watson’s need to write everything out and the Janet Watson arm loss matches up to John Watson shoulder wound; their apartment has the two armchairs and the “B” on the door.

But Ms. O’Dell doesn’t capture Sherlock Holmes deductive reasoning from clues presented for near mythical insightful problem-solving. The mystery is unfolded by things happening in reaction to action. A spy-thriller instead of procedural.

The dynamics between Watson and Holmes remain. Holmes needs someone to keep grounded in the world and Watson needs distraction from the horror of war brought back from the front. This author takes Watson’s PTSD further, instead of just hinting at the darkness and nightmare the constant writing and focusing on Holmes provides distraction from, but then this Watson just came back from the front in a dystonian world unlike Victorian England … which, admittedly was fairly dystonian.

Reading this I realize yet again what a total donkey-rear Holmes is. There is a reason why Sir Doyle had Watson be the POV character – s/he is the everyman. Despite being a surgeon and as close to anti-social and god-like arrogance as a human can get because of profession, Watson is the lesser intelligence of the pair. We need Watson to see Holmes. In many ways, Holmes is Watson’s adversary – the true opponent – the foil to strike steel against. They are like two wolves sharing a den. Sherlock may be the Alpha of the pack, but knows one push too far and Watson will turn around and jump for the jugular. And they both love it.

That dynamic makes it to the book. Right now Watson is broken from the war and still trying to find her place in the world – but it’s the first book of the series. I have no doubt she will find her feet and be a surgeon again – and Holmes will remain her best friend, if constant thorn in the side.

A good homage, a fun book. Not much of a mystery, but the spy thriller aspects give a nice tweak.

Book Review: A Big Ship at the Edge of the Universe

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A Big Ship at the Edge of the Universe by Alex White

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A crew of outcasts tries to find a legendary ship before it falls into the hands of those who would use it as a weapon in this science fiction adventure series for fans of The Expanse and Firefly.

A washed-up treasure hunter, a hotshot racer, and a deadly secret society.

They’re all on a race against time to hunt down the greatest warship ever built. Some think the ship is lost forever, some think it’s been destroyed, and some think it’s only a legend, but one thing’s for certain: whoever finds it will hold the fate of the universe in their hands. And treasure that valuable can never stay hidden for long. . .

 

MY REVIEW

Book club read.

The last time I read a science fiction story with racing done this well is Piers Anthony’s “Hard Sell”. “A Big Ship” certainly is NOT the pod race from star wars inserted for coolness of the visuals.

One of the focal character is a race car driver with all the selfishness combined with team spirit regularly seen in NASCAR and other racing styles. I love her developing out of a childhood-celebrity isolation into adulthood. Best character development arc I’ve seen in a while.

The other POV (point of view) characters is a washed-up up ex-military who landed on the wrong side of the war. The juxtaposition between their two value systems and life experiences provides tension in-and-of itself. (Adding the Illuminati level bad guys takes the tension to galaxy-spanning levels.)

I also really enjoyed the science-fiction magic world. Everyone is born with one magic gift – some at high levels and some at low levels. The high-level rare types are sought out just like specialized high intelligences in this futuristic tech/magic base.

Great characters, with development, great plot, and great worldbuilding.

Book Review: The Last Volunteer

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The Last Volunteer by Steven Wetherell

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The fate of the world lies with one man: Bip Plunkerton.

Talentless psyentist and frequent drinker at The Empty Goat, young Bip Plunkerton will follow in his father’s footsteps as a Volunteer…footsteps that have yet to return from the wilds of the wide world outside.

Traverse the harsh weather of the formidable Ice Plains, navigate the Boiling Sea, and suffer the ravaging heat of the Bone Desert. Bip’s impossible task, continually thwarted by the semi-corporeal Mr. Random, is to warn the rest of the world of the coming doom of the Massive Ball of Death hurtling through space.

Will the last volunteer be any more successful than the first? Will Bip save planet Bersch from a fate set into motion millennia before? Probably not, but we can likely drag these questions out for a couple more books, though.

 

MY REVIEW

Steve Wetherell presents an excellent yarn for the Comedic Science Fiction genre, a genre woefully underrepresented in the fictional field, except for a few standouts like Isaac Asimov’s short stories filled with puns and, the giant whale in the field, Douglas Adams Hitchhiker’s Guide to the Galaxy.

The story satires gaming (both computer games and roleplaying), politics, criminal activity, education, the job market, weather, travel, and anything else which strikes Wetherell’s fancy, while providing laugh-out-loud descriptions of people and places. Following our heroic hero Bip, and an anti-hero adventuring alien Hostility Advisor Haden, and a semi-sentient Massive Ball of Death, and the truly-sentient Answer to Everything, the Universal Theory, or just Ted to friends, and the rest of the erratic group of point-of-view characters, creates a kaleidoscope of improbabilities that become probable in their collective existence.

As an editing note: I am impressed with Wetherell’s ability to blend three (or more) different timelines into a coherent narrative, using each of the POV characters to reveal more of the world/universe, develop characters, and drive the plot forward. All the while being funny.

Flash: Amount to Something

I ran across this prompt when I was doing AtoZ in April 2019:

You’ve just narrowly survived an attack. This random person came out of nowhere with some sort of weapon. It seemed as if they wanted to kill you. But why? You’ve done nothing to them. There’s no reason why someone would want you dead.

What if you found out that this would-be assassin traveled from the future with the intent to kill you?

My answer:

The bad guy, girl, not exactly sure with all the future junk hanging off of them, laid there sparking and twitching.

“What the tarnation was that about?” I scream in their slightly burned face.

“You. You changed everything.”

“Good, bad?”

“Changed.” They whisper fading. I mean really fading – they just fade from view.

“Well, that is just dandy. No hints.” I stop and look around to see if anyone had showed up yet from all that noise, when I realize something. “Hey, I’m famous in the future. Guess I got that going for me. And the teachers said I would never amount to anything.”

(words 105, first published 4/24/2019)