Flash: GoTime 2

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Word count achieved! And at the perfect finish point for the chapter.

Morgan closed the file, resaved it locally, to her USB stick, and to the cloud under draft thirty-four. She made a note on her outline and typed in the opening sentence to the next chapter.

“Fighting for what is right is never wrong.”

Too cliquish? Yeah, and in the entirely wrong voice for the POV character of this chapter. Good thing she had time to sleep on it before tackling the next chapter. All, she blinked her tired eyes to focus on the date-time in the bottom right corner of her laptop, three hours and fifteen minutes before getting up in time to get the kids off to school. Tomorrow will be a long day at the office.

Sharpie was doing the cat thing, staring at nothing and hissing. If Morgan didn’t know better, she would think their home was haunted, but it had only been built five years ago. No ghosts here.

She leaned down to pick up the family calico to take him and the laptop in for the night. Sharpie darted forward toward the laundry room, making Morgan overbalance reaching for her, falling flat, her hands saving her from a full face plant. The air sizzling over her head kept her down.

Morgan lifted her chin up. Shapie hovered midair, clinging to … something. Not a ghost. Ghost didn’t shake around while claws dug in.

She rolled to the side, landing against an oversized planter and reached into the waterproof holder beneath the orange tree for the revolver she kept there since finding the copperhead in the backyard last summer. Two shots to the torso, either side of Sharpie and two where she guessed the head should be. Since no drywall puffed up behind, she judged her target right. Hard to miss at this range.

She had gotten lucky in whoever they were missing her.

Sharpie rode the body down, until he hovered midair about a foot from the ground on the invisible being. The cat rocked back and forth, scratching and biting, indicating whatever was there was injured, not dead, and Sharpie was displeased with that status.

Standing, Morgan kept the handgun pointed at the danger. Two bullets left. Thank god she had trained to hit snakes to keep her children safe. She glanced at her laptop.

It was … partially missing. Not melted, just parts gone. Not broken. Nothing falling or blown back into the yard just beginning to become visible in the false dawn. Just missing.

She gulped.

Her eyes did one snap to the intact USB, breathing a silent breath of relief. Then made her way over to her cat imitating a rider on a bucking bronco.

A huge gun, more ridiculously complicated then her children’s bubble rifles for their water balloon wars, was visible to one side, its strap torn. She kicked it further away, wincing as soon as her foot made contact thinking: That was dumb. What if it went off?

She pointed the gun at the empty air. “Freeze motherfucker.”

Sharpie continued to bounce around on nothing, hissing.

Then Morgan heard the noise she was hoping she wouldn’t hear came.

“Mom,” Henry appeared at the other side of the laundry room, his ten-year scrawny body in front of his six and eight year old sisters,“what’s happening?”

“Don’t know yet Monster Man,” she nodded at Sharpie’s antics, “take your sisters and go next door to Fred’s. I’ll come get you when I can.”

“But–”

She sent Henry the Mom Look.

(words 592, first published 3/4/2023, Make the Mood Monday 500-word Expansion – one out of five of the FB group stories get expanded)

GoTime Series
GoTime (1/1/2023)
GoTime 2 (1/8/2023)
T is for Time (GoTime 3) (4/23/2023)

Flash: GoTime

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“Resolution complete. Matching timeline chronology.”

Go time, Monico thought as their eyes swept the darkened room, the green low-light goggles showing nothing on the infrared. Where is the target?

The AI embedded surgically into their head responded, “Target historically spent more time with their laptop on their back porch than in their bedroom.”

Of course they did.

Monico growled under their breath. They were not dressed to open doors conventionally, especially in this timeline with their stupid round doorknobs. They lifted one oversized glove off their dissolution transport and grasped the small metal at the side of the wooden plank, twisting carefully, having learned the right pressure during previous missions. Gently, after ordering the AI to scale back the pressure-response cycle throughout their mech suit, they pushed open the door.

Camouflage mode, stalking tread.

“Quiet as a mouse,” the AI assured them in a sing-song child voice, “fully activated.”

When did the computer in their head became more human than them?

“Merging-collapse of chronologics loops fifteen through nineteen. With related update 107.3.9.That’s when the magic happen.”

Joy. Four weeks subjective time. Monico slipped down the hallway through the twenty-first century open floor plan, monitoring their progress through the blueprints downloaded. The door in the laundry room, which doubled as a mudroom for the porch had the door open, letting in the crisp early Spring air for the backporch. This early in the season, at least in this timeline, bugs weren’t an issue yet.

Infrared signatures.

“Three heat sources. Laptop, cat, and linchpin.” The AI outlined the large shape marked linchpin, one of the dozen humans anchoring this timeline.

Monico raised their dissolution transporter to their shoulder to remove the human keeping the unwanted timeline functioning. Time to prune.

(words 288, first published 3/4/2023, from a FB visual prompt for a writing group I belong to – aiming for 50 words)

GoTime Series
GoTime (1/1/2023)
GoTime 2 (1/8/2023)
T is for Time (GoTime 3) (4/23/2023)

Book Review: On Basilisk Station

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On Basilisk Station: Honor Harrington Book 1 by David Weber

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Having made him look a fool, she’s been exiled to Basilisk Station in disgrace and set up for ruin by a superior who hates her.

Her demoralized crew blames her for their ship’s humiliating posting to an out-of-the-way picket station.

The aborigines of the system’s only habitable planet are smoking homicide-inducing hallucinogens.

Parliament isn’t sure it wants to keep the place; the major local industry is smuggling; the merchant cartels want her head; the star-conquering, so-called “Republic” of Haven is Up To Something; and Honor Harrington has a single, over-age light cruiser with an armament that doesn’t work to police the entire star system.

But the people out to get her have made one mistake. They’ve made her mad.

 

MY REVIEW

This book is my favorite David Weber. As indicated in other reviews, I love good sociology as part of my science fiction.

Don’t look at me like that, sociology is a science!

And David Weber is not only the master of military sci-fi, but also political sci-fi with a good bit of sociology thrown in.

Love this book. One of the few David Weber has written with a truly alien species – and what would happen to younger culture meeting a space faring one.

I have snapped it up for free on the Amazon kindle so I can continue to read it without destroying my (1) hard copy and (2) soft copy of the book. I have also given this as a gift to three people – two of which have cursed my name because they have needed to buy the rest of the series and that is no small investment.

(10/30/2015 – Reread book yet again on the Kindle. Noticed the kindle version I picked up has some formatting issues – doesn’t have clear POV breaks in many places which created some confusion until I realized the scene had changed. Never had that issue with the printed copies)

(E is for Elliott Kay) Book Review: Poor Man’s Fight (Series)

Poor Man’s Fight: Poor Man’s Fight Book 1 by Elliott Kay
Rich Man’s War: Poor Man’s Fight Book 2 by Elliott Kay
Dead Man’s Debt : Poor Man’s Fight Book 3 by Elliott Kay

SERIES REVIEW

Wide-spread school debt permeates this science-fiction world, as it does, sadly, our own.

I love the basic conceit of school debt, since I personally own about a car payment a month myself for the next ten years (on top of a car payment, rent, and oh stuff like food). This is one of the what-if scenarios I’ve bounced around in my head, but Elliott Kay has taken it to the end, completely playing out the intellectual exercise. Thank you for that – I got the picture – making people pay for childhood bad. 

In the modern world, we  are asking our problem-solving & most creative children to mortgage their future with school debt. Should we have the weight of the debt drag down their hopes and dreams? Does it drive them to higher creativity (and our economy to greater growth) or leaves them locked in their parents homes, in dead-end jobs?

All the people in this imaginary world who do not come from money face either military (killing many of the most driven (the entrepreneurs)), crippling debt of additional schooling locking people into limited job choices (the intellectuals), or working with their parents (the loyal and constant). These choices limit growth of a nation or world, and cause a slow slide back because no one can get ahead. This universe has locked everything into status quo for 200 years because the corporations have rigged the game.

Someone is about to lift the shrouds of sails and show the rigging.

I wonder when that will happen in our world and what the solution here will be. In the meantime, watching this intellectual exercise masquerading as an AMAZING MILITARY SPACE OPERA, can provide possible clue of America’s immediate future.

So cool when something is thought-provoking and pleasure reading at the same time.

Side Note: The author has other works in different genres. Be careful you get the path you want. Kind of like Piers Anthony – people who are expecting Mr. Anthony style to be the same for fantasy and sci-fi are in for a rude awakening. Mr. Kay’s “Good Intentions” erotica-level fantasy is not like his military sci-fi.

 

Poor Man’s Fight: Poor Man’s Fight Book 1 by Elliott Kay

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Quick-witted Tanner Malone has bombed the Test, an all-important exam that establishes how much he owes for his corporate-funded education. With his future plans crushed under a mountain of debt, Tanner enlists in the navy of his home star system of Archangel. But he hasn’t factored in the bullying shipmates, the civil war brewing on the border, or the space pirates.

As Tanner begins basic training, the government ramps up its forces to confront the vicious raiders wreaking havoc throughout human space. Led by the complex and charismatic Captain Casey, the outlaws never let their egalitarian and democratic ideals get in the way of a little murder or mayhem.

Assigned to the front lines, Tanner learns there’s only one way to deal with his ruthless foes, cruel comrades, and the unforgiving void of space. He’ll have to get up close and personal.

MY REVIEW

Military Sci-Fi at its best – taken from the grunts standpoint. You know the person that makes all the officers look good on a military ship. Sure the lone-man save-things at the end kills the non-officer vibe, but by that time you are so rocking the space opera you don’t care.

(See additional comments about the political commentary above under the Series Review.)

Very nice military story and can’t wait to see more. If you like solid space opera, you got it here.

 

Rich Man’s War: Poor Man’s Fight Book 2 by Elliott Kay

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No one walks away from business with the three biggest corporations in the Union of Humanity. Cutthroat trade deals and bloody covert operations make that clear as the star system of Archangel tries to break free. Yet despite all their power, the Big Three are more vulnerable than anyone knows—leaving them desperate to make an example of Archangel.

Tanner Malone would gladly avoid such struggles. He’d rather run out the clock on his enlistment in the Archangel Navy. Instead, he’s been ordered back into the front lines of a cold war that quickly grows hot. He doesn’t know about his government’s shady deals, or about the old enemies lurking in the shadows. All he knows is that the sky is falling—and he’ll have to fight harder than ever if he doesn’t want to be crushed beneath it.

MY REVIEW

SHORT VERSION – Space Opera, escalating battles, prerequisite training sessions (which is also standard for real-world navy), mild love interests, likable & identifiable main character, and final HUGE big battle with multiple ships taking up at least a quarter of the book, making the book impossible to put down. A wide ride.

LONG VERSION

Second in the Poor Man’s Fight series and still pretty awesome. A lot more profanity on this one and some editing issues which hopefully will get ironed out as a publisher has picked up his series and is now republishing them. Even the profanity may get adjusted as it is being published under a New Adult imprint. Look to reviews after mid-2016 for more up-to-date details on if the editing is improved; I read this Sept 2015.

Again a rocking space opera, and Tanner Malone still is a grunt – a well-known person for the antics in the last book, but a naval grunt (I know, every military reader just winced – sorry, but I don’t know the term for the lowest-level, should-just-follow-orders guy of the naval variety). And he now needs to learn how to operate with a team behind him. Every now and again he flashes back to being all alone and the only one able to do anything to save a boatload of people. And his trainers and supervisors go “and you were thinking….”, at which point he blinks and realizes he actually has people beside him who expect him to follow a chain of command and he relaxes. Boy has some Post-Traumatic issues but thanks to modern pysch is functioning fairly well.

I really, really like the fact in this book everyone in the military – marine and navy – truly does need everyone else on the team; they are a FORCE, not just “an army of one”.

The layers of the world haven’t gotten more complicated than the last book and that disappoints a little. On the other hand, Tanner Malone’s home system found out about the rigging of the school debt education system, and Archangel is opting out. With the whole system disintegrating, people are freaked not knowing what the new world will look like. Will the debt remain, will the corporations survive, heck … will they live through the war?

The world-building done in the first book makes the fall-outs in the second book lovely from a sociological standpoint. And you are are not as into intellectual exercises about what happens if… as I am, this still is an awesome, kickin’ space opera about 19-20 year old man in the navy.

 

Dead Man’s Debt : Poor Man’s Fight Book 3 by Elliott Kay

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“WE REQUIRE A DIFFERENT BATTLEFIELD.”

Nobody expected the war to last three hours, let alone three years. The star system of Archangel holds the line against invading corporate fleets, but a quarter of its territory is already lost. The navy can’t hang on much longer. Faced with this grim truth, Archangel’s leaders shift their strategy to diplomacy and espionage. For both arenas, they call upon a reluctant weapon: a frontline grunt named Tanner Malone.

These days, Tanner doesn’t aspire to win the war. He merely wants to survive it. Now he’ll be thrust into the center of events once again, pulled back and forth from covert missions to the media spotlight. Yet with every battle, he gets closer to the old enemy hidden in the shadows, and the ugly truth about the war that could unravel everything Archangel might hope to win.

MY REVIEW

I’ve not had time to read this book yet, but I didn’t want to hold back from sharing this gem of a series anymore.

Book Review: In Perpetuity

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In Perpetuity by Jake Bible

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IN PERPETUITY WE LIVE!

IN PERPETUITY WE FIGHT!

IN PERPETUITY WE DIE!!

For two thousand years, Earth and her many colonies across the galaxy have fought against the Estelian menace. Having faced overwhelming losses, the CSC has instituted the largest military draft ever, conscripting millions into the battle against the aliens. Major Bartram North, Chief Training Officer on the CSC Training Station Perpetuity, has been tasked with the unenviable task of coordinating the military education of hundreds of thousands of recruits and turning them into troops ready to fight and die for the cause.

As Major North struggles to maintain a training pace that the CSC insists upon, he realizes something isn’t right on the Perpetuity. But before he can investigate, the station dissolves into madness brought on by the physical booster known as pharma. Unfortunately for Major North, that is not the only nightmare he faces- an armada of Estelian warships is on the edge of the solar system and headed right for Earth!

Major North has one chance to find out the truth, rescue the Perpetuity from its madness, and defend the Earth from attack, or all of humanity could be lost forever!

* In Perpetuity contains strong language

 

MY REVIEW

In Perpetuity opens slow, which is very unusual for a Jake Bible book. He introduces us to the characters a chapter at a time, builds the location, how the political and military systems work, and gives us a feel for things. Language is harsh, tempers flare, but – for the most part – it feels like a typical recruitment and boot camp sci-fi on a space station. Things are boiling, sure – like a frog in a pot. You can see the cracks in the society.

Things continue to build. Nothing really amazing. Nothing to put you on edge.

Then BAM.

That is the Jake Bible I know and love.

The wait was worth it.

Language, gross body parts, sex, blowing lots of stuff up.