Book Review (SERIES): Teshovar

With the newest book of the Teshovar series by Jason Dorough out, I thought it time to share about this engrossing fantasy series. Each book jumps higher in word count. The small heist turns to a POV fantasy cityscape and morphs into an empire-spanning rebellion, from the frozen north to the southern swamps, and character-driven through all three volumes released so far. Yes, the series is ongoing, but each book of the series works well as a stand alone.

Teshovar Series by Jason Dorough (in order recommended by the author via a TikTok)

  1. The Gem of Tagath (Novella)
  2. Akithar’s Greatest Trick (Novel)
  3. Lizandra’s Deepest Fear (Novel)

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15-year-old Pria is one of Barween Drach’s favorite enforcers, but she has designs on a bigger life. Pria’s just waiting for the chance to take over all of the city’s gangs herself. When an infamous gem falls into Klubridge’s underworld, Pria’s dreams of conquest might finally be within reach–if she can learn to trust the right allies and keep herself alive.

The Gem of Tagath is a fantasy heist novella set in the world of Teshovar, a realm where an ancient and mysterious despot has outlawed all magic. This book takes place a few months prior to the series’ first full novel, Akithar’s Greatest Trick. Here, you will meet some key characters in the sprawling city of Klubridge’s underworld, learn about the criminal gangs that operate out of view of the Empire’s authorities, and gain background and insights into the upcoming events of the novel.

MY REVIEW for THE GEM OF TAGATH

This Fantasy Heist novella follows a young gang member with the drive to be so much more, specifically the gang leader. But to do that, she needs an edge and she is constantly on the lookout for one in this world of magic that never percolates down to her level of existence.

Until one day it does, maybe. Anyway it is a Gem of an opportunity – and gems always have value, especially ones with names.

What can go wrong? Says every 15 year-old ever. (Not a YA, but can be read by those 13 and up.)

Great characters, standard street-level fantasy world until the heist begins. Since heists are character driven, the “standard” feel is fine because it lets the readers to concentrate on the magic of thievery.

 

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Demon, Scientist, Charlatan, or Sorcerer?

The Great Akithar is the most famous stage magician in a realm where real magic is outlawed. Over the past decade, Akithar and his troupe have built a reputation–and a home–in the dense coastal city of Klubridge. Every night, he thrills audiences with his controversial performances. Backstage, Akithar hides a secret more dangerous than any of his engineered illusions.

Far inland, an ancient and mysterious tyrant dispatches an elite band of mage hunters to crush magical insurrection. When their hunt brings them to Klubridge, they suspect that Akithar’s magic might be more than mere stage trickery. Akithar and his company will have to rely on a cunning heist, desperate improvisation, and the art of deception to save their theater and even their very lives.

MY REVIEW for AKITHAR’S GREATEST TRICK

First book of a series, self-published July 2021, fantasy story. The author provides lots of cool information through his TikTok so I thought I would read his book (paying him back for my enjoyment of his social media platform – always trying to throw money at creators I enjoy), even though I’m not really a fantasy fan and not the best with long works. The story is broken into four parts, which helped with the 500 pages.

The first part of the story is a typical introduction to a fantasy world through the eyes of a child thief. The second part introduces us to the entire cast, giving us lots of adult opinions and views of this complicated world, plus has a fun heist aspect. Then we hit the 50% mark and things REALLY pick up. Lots of action in a richly built world we are well-familiar with by the 50% mark.

Needless to say, the introduction is long, but, at the same time, something is always happening. You don’t even really realize it is an introduction until you hit the action. (Way better at introducing the world through immersion than most fantasy books I read.) The bad guys are typical bad guys, but not all are cookie-cutter, and the Big Bad is really intriguing from the hints playing out in the worldbuilding -the series story arc is promising.

It’s a good fantasy read.

 

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Rebellion, Prophecy, and Betrayal

The survivors of Klubridge flee north to the rebels’ hidden sanctuary. Bards sing of Akithar, the hero who stood against the Empire, but he struggles to keep his own troupe intact in a rebellion divided by prophecy. One side presses for war, and the other deals in secrets and spies. They must find a way to work together when a mysterious new threat brings massive destruction to Teshovar.

Elsewhere, the Empire demands answers for what happened in Klubridge. Politics and pride set the Kites against the Herons in a race to bring the rebels to justice. From the shadows, a reluctant assassin swears vengeance on the order that created her, while a disgraced pirate captain faces his own treacherous past. Ancient secrets and new alliances pave the path to conflict, with both sides teetering between tragedy and victory.

With loyalties fraying, Akithar’s troupe stands on the brink of revelations that will change everything they know about Teshovar. Lizandra said losing Reykas was her greatest fear. What would she sacrifice to keep him safe? What wouldn’t she?

CONTENT WARNINGS AVAILABLE ON THE AUTHOR’S WEBSITE HERE 

MY REVIEW for LIZANDRA’S DEEPEST FEAR

Lizandra’s Deepest Fear is an epic fantasy with rolling landscapes, a large point-of-view cast, magic wonder, and political mayhem. Our heroes have found themselves subsumed into a rebellion against a magic empire; both our heroes and their opposites within the empire must decide what side of humanity they fall on. Love, honor, and possession are questions faced by all.

I have read three books by this author now, and while he has always been really good, this book has leveled up his descriptions of the landscape and people. It is by far his best manuscript, and I rated his previous works very high.

To those who want a more literary work, I noticed this book explores the theme of the Cost of Love. How much are you willing to pay for your love? Is your love about possession or release? Honor and Respect or Caregiving and Caretaking? Emotions or action? How much are you willing to give others for your love or their love for you? How much are you willing to have others provide to you? Does it matter if you care more for them than they do for you? How selfish are you allowed to be with your love as a parent, spouse, or child? Is truth and honesty important in a loving relationship? How long should love last when the other person can no longer be around? How important are the wants of yourself versus the wants of others?

Love has a weight, a mass to it, and the author explores this substance while creating a fictional world for a reader to enjoy. I enjoyed LDF at a surface level as an action-packed epic, but I can see a book club or critique buddies having a ball exploring the deeper themes of the story.

Editing Rant: Romance is a Fantasy

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One of the hardest things about editing is understanding the underlying tropes/messages contained in your genre.

I recently told someone that Romance was a Fantasy – and they said they didn’t realize I was so cynical. But I was saying facts from an editing point of view – Romance is firmly in the Fantasy genre as a subgenre.

  1. The Chosen One trope is strong in this one. Only one person can do.
  2. Happily Ever After (HEA) required.
  3. Two people can make it work no matter what culture throws at them. Color, job, distance, income levels, family upbringing. Unequal social status. Love conquers all.
  4. The sex will always be good. The partners will always make the big O happen for each other. Sexual experiments will be welcomed. Sexual preferences will match.

Romances aren’t about what happens in real life, but what we would like to happen. We want the Magic of True Love to work.

Flash: Wood Dragon

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The dragon emerged slowly from his long rest, nosing out of the borrow he had hidden in so long. Green grass and meadow surrounded him, replacing the village he had burned to the ground before digging his nest, its people a forgotten memory by all but him

… and the archeology team carefully laying out a string square grid to dig up the speculated trade town of Briganemeto, best translated as “the hill claimed as sanctuary by wood”. With small shovels and measuring sticks in hands, the students and professors stared at the legendary creature.

The year of the wood dragon had begun.

(words 103; first published 2/11/2024; created 11/18/2023)

Flash: Painted Sunflowers

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“Alaina, what have you done to your face!” Debbie explained.

“I got it painted.” The young woman turned her face to show off her left cheek. “I got a flower, isn’t it great.”

“No, I mean yes, that is really pretty, but—” Debbie grabbed Alaina’s face and turned it to see the right side of her face, examining the design there in the glow from overhead street lights. “Why did you get a black dragon painted? I know it is the dragon festival and all, but black, and on the face, that is just asking for trouble.”

Yanking her face out of the other’s hands, Alaina said, “What are you talking about? I only got the sunflowers and bee painted.” She reached up and touched the one cheek with the bright yellow oils. Then she lifted to touch the part of her face Debbie had been manhandling. “I didn’t do anything here.”

“Oh, don’t lie, let me get this wiped off before anyone sees,” Debbie licked her thumb and set about rubbing the layered design, hoping to smear it to unrecognizability. “You don’t want anyone thinking you are a rider.”

“Debbie, Debbie, ow, that hurts.” Alaina tried pulling back from the determined woman. “I didn’t do anything there. And while the face painter offered some cartoony designs of dragons, she hadn’t offered anything that could be mistaken for a rider tattoo.”

“Just let me…” Debbie rubbed harder, “it’s not budging. What in the nine realms did she use?”

“Stop, stop it.” Alaina grabbed both of Debbie’s hands. “You are scaring me. Debbie!” she shouted, causing several of the other festivalgoers to turn their way, some of them stopping and pointing. “What is happening?”

Debbie slow blinked her green eyes. “It’s real. It’s not moving, it’s real.”

“Rider.” “Black flyer.” “Is that a girl with a dragon tattoo?” whispers started in a circle around them.

“No, I got nothing there.” Alaina assured her.

“By Moxie and Damion, come here.” Debbie pulled Alaina to a nearby storefront glass-plated window by their joined hands. “You just became a rider Alaina.”

“Please, who would choose…” Alaina stared at the reflection in the glass. “Women don’t become riders.”

“They do.” Debbie touched the glass beside Alaina’s cheek. “White or red, sometimes even green.”

“Maybe it is a really dark green?” Alaina leaned in close, but the Illumination from the night street lamps didn’t give much reflection.

Debbie shook her head. “No, it’s black.”

She reached out and touched the glass herself. “A dragon chose me.”

“It’s the Festival of Choice, when the dragons finish their second molting.” Debbie wrapped an arm around her friend. “New riders are always chosen.”

“But kids, or matrons, or trained fighters, or someone else, anyone other than me.” Alaina laid her head on Debbie’s shoulder. “I’ve never been chosen before.”

“You only get chosen once.” Debbie quoted the old saying.

“No one in my family has flown. Not ever. It … I mean …” She wailed, “I got work tomorrow!”

(words 501; first published 1/14/2024)

Book Review: The Wolf and the Woodsman

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The Wolf and the Woodsman by Ava Reid

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In her forest-veiled pagan village, Évike is the only woman without power, making her an outcast clearly abandoned by the gods. The villagers blame her corrupted bloodline—her father was a Yehuli man, one of the much-loathed servants of the fanatical king. When soldiers arrive from the Holy Order of Woodsmen to claim a pagan girl for the king’s blood sacrifice, Évike is betrayed by her fellow villagers and surrendered.

But when monsters attack the Woodsmen and their captive en route, slaughtering everyone but Évike and the cold, one-eyed captain, they have no choice but to rely on each other. Except he’s no ordinary Woodsman—he’s the disgraced prince, Gáspár Bárány, whose father needs pagan magic to consolidate his power. Gáspár fears that his cruelly zealous brother plans to seize the throne and instigate a violent reign that would damn the pagans and the Yehuli alike. As the son of a reviled foreign queen, Gáspár understands what it’s like to be an outcast, and he and Évike make a tenuous pact to stop his brother.

As their mission takes them from the bitter northern tundra to the smog-choked capital, their mutual loathing slowly turns to affection, bound by a shared history of alienation and oppression. However, trust can easily turn to betrayal, and as Évike reconnects with her estranged father and discovers her own hidden magic, she and Gáspár need to decide whose side they’re on, and what they’re willing to give up for a nation that never cared for them at all.

 

MY REVIEW

A vivid new world splicing together fairy tales, legends, history, and mythology from cultures usually not appearing in “typical” American storytelling. Both fantasy and romance, the story centers around Evike and Gaspar – the wolf and the woodsman.

The enemy-to-friends romance is at times naked, ugly, sweet, heartbreaking, fated, and impossible.

The fantasy world captures why the “woods” are dangerous beyond imagination, and the tyranny has shades where “it could be worse” allows acceptance of the unsustainable.

Faith and history clash and mesh depending on the day and person. The impact of refuge relocation and treaty marriages leaves children behind who must live with the strange guilt of those raising them – who both hate their mixed blood and have an obligation to raise it anyway.

A complicated, wonderous world, the Wolf and the Woodsman makes a worthy read.