Flash: Energy Alignment

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“Enya,” Cressida ran her hand down the energy super’s back, “have you been visiting your family again?” A tense of muscle answered the question without words. Cressida pressed firmly on the bunched flesh. “We’ve talked about this.”

“It’s the holidays. They are family.”

“They are toxic. Half your chakras are spinning too fast and the rest, too slow.” Cressida drew her hands down either side of Enya’s spine. “You can’t pass your energy if your Chakras are not aligned properly. You will burn up.”

(words 84; first published 11/25/2023)

Flash: Look What I Can Do

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“Momma, look at what I can do.”

It was the fourth time the teen said it, so the woman looked over again watering the plants on the windowsill..

He did a perfect hand stand and held it. She was impressed he could do it with his arm still wrapped from his most recent tattoo. As he curled down, completely under control, he rolled into a split, and then somehow got up from the split in a single jump.

Bouncing, he asked, “What do you think? Should I add that to the routine?”

His mother shook her head. “Why isn’t it in the routine already? Yes, yes. It’s perfect.”

(words 108; first published 11/30/2023)

Book Review: Calling All Angels

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Calling All Angels by John G. Hartness

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From the pages of Quincy Harker, Demon Hunter comes this thrilling new dark fantasy series! They are humanity’s defense against the supernatural. They are the light in the darkness. They are the guardians that walk in the night. They are The Shadow Council.

Joanna Harrison is a freelance editor, working mother, and loving daughter. She is also the great-granddaughter or legendary steel driving man John Henry, and she has taken up his hammer to fight against the monsters that threaten her family and her world. She is Jo Henry, and she packs one hell of a punch.

Jo is fighting like the devil, looking for an angel. She’s on a mission to find the Archangel Michael, give him back his holy sword, and bring his memories back. But first she has to stay alive. Through underground cage fights and demon hunts in the desert, Jo will need all the help she can get to wake up the angel. And when a demon kidnaps her mother and daughter, it’s time to come out swinging.

 

MY REVIEW

A new year, a new four-novella group for Quincy Harker, only this year (year 3) introduces the Shadow Council. First up, Joanna Harrison.

I was not expecting that. I’m so used to Mr. Hartness strong large male bachelor characters, I did not expect a female to be a POV character with a child. Yet it works, very, very well.

Joanna inherited the hammer from her great-great John Henry with a couple twists passing the hammer down the woman line, giving her the last name Harrison, but most of the old members (and some of them are really old) of the Shadow Council call her by the hammer’s lineage – Jo Henry.

Glory lost her wings at the conclusion of last year’s story. Now the council needs to find the archangels to see if they can get her wings back. Jo’s mission is to find the first one.

It won’t be easy. Might break her body. But one thing the Henry steel-drivin’ line doesn’t do is give up.

Well-structured and interesting story. An excellent addition to the Harkerverse.

Writing Exercise: Metaphor and Simile

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Figurative Language brings passion and vision to the written word. Images are created describing a blanket of snow, eyes sparkling like diamonds, and spring days as gentle as a lamb.

Similes compare two unlike items using “like” or “as” to tie them together. Metaphor drops the comparison word.

WRITING EXERCISE: Write a three-to-five sentence paragraph using similes at least three times; write another three-to-five sentence paragraph using metaphor at least three times. Which is stronger? Which do you like more?

My attempt

My new love moved like satin across the bed. Rising up on their knees, they looked like Venus being birthed from the seas. My heart fluttered like a bird caught in a cage.

The whirlwind ran through the house doing last-minute cleanup before the in-laws arrived. My attempts to calm were oil on water with a match set to flame because, the fool, I, had gave the okay to drop by any time today without telling my better half. When the growling started, I backed off and went to clean the toilet. Possible extinction of all fools could be scheduled for the unwary by the whirlwind.

Writing Exercise Series of Figurative Language
Metaphor and Simile (6/22/21)
Synecdoche and Symbolism (7/27/21)
Personification and Oxymoron (8/24/21)
Understatement, Sarcasm, & Litotes (9/28/2021)

Series inspired by: “Figurative Language: Why and How You Should Use it” by Zara Altair. ProWritingAid 6/11/201

Flash: Old Flamer

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Wind chases waves,
Rolling in the bay,
Thundercloud rumble at the play…

What next?” The poet bounced a pretentious old-fashion feather quill against his lips.

“Maybe, cleaning up your dinner plates.”

The white-haired old man startled, turning around at his candle-lit desk. “Girl, what’re you doing here? There’s a storm rolling in.”

“I’m here same as you, to keep the lantern lit.” Abigail reached around him, grabbing up three plates, a bowl, and two glasses.

“Damn it, you live on the mainland with that no-good mother of yours for a reason.” He grumbled, putting a lid on the dip ink. “Ain’t safe being out here. Not since Akar’s Bridge went.”

“If it ain’t safe for me, it ain’t safe you.” She adjusted the stack before heading to the staircase winding around the outside of the lighthouse interior, each floor within a circle supported against the staircase and the walls.

“It’s my job Abby and you know it.” Francis pushed himself up with his cane to follow her.

“Not since they stopped paying you a salary, grandpa, and you know that.” His smart-mouthed granddaughter dipped the last word in sarcasm and deep fried it. The saucy tone echoed up the metal walls.

He heard the clatter of dishes being added to the others in the sink. It’s been a few days since he bothered to handwash.

Ever since the landbridge to the shore got washed away in early 2020 dropping the old Flamer off the grid again, and the government stopped paying him anything but Social Security shortly thereafter claiming the building no longer qualified as a historic landmark, he had to be careful with the diesel to keep the generator going. No electric for his personal needs, only what was needed to keep the beacon lit.

And washing dishes in cold water set off his arthritis.

“Don’t care.” He panted slightly, stepping off the stairs onto the kitchen level. “Our family been keeping this beacon lit, come hell or highwater, for three generations.”

“What am I, chopped liver?“ His granddaughter cocked her hip to the side and placed a fist on it, shaking a finger at him. “It’s five generations and don’t you forget it old man.”

He sighed, closing his worn eyes a moment. “Abby, don’t follow an old man into his foolishness. Your daddy needs be the last of us to die out on this rock.” Crossing the metal disk doubling as a floor, he used his cane to maintain his balance as it wobbled because the incoming storm pounded the outside of the isolated building.

“Fine, then come with me to the mainland, we got a few more minutes to pull it off in the dingy.” The nineteen-year-old kept up her hard stare, so like his Abby, the one she was named after. When he said nothing further. “That’s what I thought.” She turned around and started the water running. “I topped off the generator before climbing up. You go check the lines for kinks while I get the dishes done before the light goes bad.”

“Abby.” Francis paused at the stair’s landing.

She looked over her shoulder. “What?”

“Thank you, but this has to be the last time. Old Flamer is holding on to the rocks with fingernails.”

“Only if it the last time for you grandpa.” She patted the wall over the sink. “I think Old Flamer has one last nor-easter in him, but it’s time to let go after that. Deal?”

Francis looked up and down the steel steps, the rusty walls that had been his home forever. Where he had grown, buried his parents and his son, laughed with his wife, and chased his grandchildren. Not responding, he headed up the wall playing attention to the wires powering the lantern.

(words 627; first published 11/22/2023)