Flash: The Tree Grew Tall

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One of the Facebook groups I am on posts a weekly prompt – genre and words – to which one is to write a short opening paragraph as would fit into a Facebook comment area. This week’s challenge was: Genre – Either romance OR horror; “The tree grew tall.”

The tree had been watered by the blood of patriots long ago. Its roots were entangled with buckshot and cannon balls. Fifty years later, when its limbs had regrown strong and round, people decorated it with Strange Fruit. The ropes remained long after the bones had fallen into the leaf mulch below. Yesterday, a family had hid in among its ground cover ferns and blackberries only to be pulled out by immigration agents and beaten before being taken away. The tree had had enough.

(Words 84; first published 7/10/2026)

Book Review: Legends & Lattes

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Legends & Lattes by Travis Baldree

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After a lifetime of bounties and bloodshed, Viv is hanging up her sword for the last time.

The battle-weary orc aims to start fresh, opening the first ever coffee shop in the city of Thune. But old and new rivals stand in the way of success ― not to mention the fact that no one has the faintest idea what coffee actually is.

If Viv wants to put the blade behind her and make her plans a reality, she won’t be able to go it alone.

But the true rewards of the uncharted path are the travelers you meet along the way. And whether drawn together by ancient magic, flaky pastry, or a freshly brewed cup, they may become partners, family, and something deeper than she ever could have dreamed.

“Take a break from epic battles and saving the world. Legends & Lattes is a low-stakes fantasy that delivers exactly what’s advertised: a wholesome, cozy novel that feels like a warm hug. This is my new comfort read.”―Genevieve Gornichec, author of The Witch’s Heart

 

MY REVIEW

After years of High Fantasy, I wasn’t sure what to expect of a cozy fantasy. Could orcs and thieves, magicians and dire-cats produce the same feeling as a cozy mystery? The want to curl into a cup of tea and a blanket and read about a low stakes situation and just vibe with the characters?

Yes, you can do exactly that with Legends and Lattes, although you might want a cup of coffee instead of tea.

Instead of saving the world from an apocalypse, a country from an invading army, or the universe from an eldritch horror incursion, we have a retiring orc adventurer setting up a coffee shop, making permanent friends and business connections, aligning commodity purchases, and figuring out a menu.

For spicy rating … it is as sweet as the cinnamon rolls that the coffee shop serves with a single kiss. (Though the one-bed trope does come into play.)

Be ready for a soft kitty with danger mitts, a chess cryptic player, and a bard from a mason background.

Checked out through a local library; read for a book club.

[BONUS POINTS – Romantic interest (1) always initiated by employee; (2) didn’t kiss until AFTER becoming co-owners. This – THIS! – is how you do employer-employee romances without power disparity.]

Flash: Monster at the Church

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Haze hung over the broken black bones of the building, a noxious smell of wood and paint and gasoline. Tim dropped his bike beside the standing white sign declaring what the Sunday sermon would have been for the Second Baptist Church of Sneads Ferry tomorrow and approached where the congregation members sorted through the debris. Several shot dark, distrustful looks his way.

His light skin stood in direct contrast to most of theirs. The few white members were well known to the majority, having married in and been part of the church community for years. Those faces had streaks of soot.

Anger bubbled in his stomach, churning the breakfast he had eaten after working the morning window at his fast food job. Today, he had a split shift with morning and evening, giving him four hours to discover what Mr. Henderson had meant last night at the club. He had been right, the news covered it. It had cycled several times on the big television set up in the restaurant. Although the youth minister had been wrong about what the top story of the day would be. Judge Everett dying of a heart attack knocked this down to second place. White death always beats Black disaster. Even it if is a singular ninety-year old natural death.

“Timmy, what are you doing here?” Kiara asked. “You are going to get into trouble.”

He looked down at her, getting angrier at the shortness of her curls framing her face, realizing for the first time how much taller than her he was. His hurdler legs kept growing and he was basically all arms and legs at age seventeen. “I decided I don’t care anymore. How can I help?”

Her small laugh hurt his soul. “Got a dumpster on speed dial?”

“Actually…” Vinny had assigned Tim to deal with the vendors as part of his training to become a shift manager. “Let me see.” He pulled his phone from his shoulder bag.

A confused look crossed over Kiara’s face as he talked to someone in a broken mix of high school Spanish and English. Two adults closed on them. One looked like an older version of Kiara, only with full braids and beads clacking as she walked. The other a middle-age man with a belly but wide shoulders and taller than Tim, black and white sprinkled his tight curls.

Tim pulled the phone away from his mouth to ask, “He is willing to deliver and pick it back up for half price, if the dumpster can be picked up tomorrow by four p.m. so he can get it to his customer on Monday. He can get it here within an hour.”

“How much?” Kiara’s mother asked.

Tim recited the price he had been quoted. “Someone official will need to sign the contract when he drops it off.”

The man nodded down at the woman. “We can cover the cost if the church can’t,” he rumbled.

“Do it,” she told Tim before turning back to the man. “Nat, let the pastor know and get an area cleared.”

Nat wiped a soot streak on the side of the woman’s face, then kissed the cleaned area before walking off.

When Tim finished the call, giving the address for the delivery, he dropped the phone back into his bag.

“So, this is your White boy,” the woman said to Kiara.

“Mom,” Kiara rolled her eyes. “He isn’t my White boy.”

“You saved him, you got a responsibility.” The woman stated firmly before extending her hand out to Tim. “Beca Dixon.”

“Tim Boyd.” He shook her hand, then waved at the shell which should have been filled with music and laughter tomorrow. “Sorry about this.”

“Did you do it?” Beca asked point blank, her voice hard.

“No, but I know who did.”

“Going to report them to the police?”

He hemmed and hawed a moment. “That would not be effective.”

“Then why are you here?” Kiara shot at him like an accusation.

“To be as effective as I can.”

“Well, you can—” Kiara stopped midword, when her mother put a hand on her shoulder.

“He is still a child, like you, and he is sticking his neck way out just being here.”

Kiara black eyes flicked from her mother to Tim and back to her mother. “Fine.”

“What can I do to help?” Tim asked again.

“Once we got the dumpster,” Beca nodded to the people moving their cars, some of them driving off, likely to get demolition tools, “we will need help loading it up quick.”

“Would the youth group from First Baptist be helpful?”

“Do you think you can get them here?” Beca cocked her head, sending beads clicking.

“In a heartbeat.” He started pawing through his bag to dig out his phone again which was not exactly where it had just dumped it randomly. “Most of us listened to our Sunday School lessons.” Holding his phone triumphally, he paused, “Speaking of lessons, um, Kiara, I…”

“Spit it out,” the teenager snapped.

“That thing, you did, um, I might have done…something…like it last night.”

Kiara blinked twice, then studied his face. “Really?” She drew out the word, half-way between disbelieving and consideration.

Beca snapped her fingers to get their attention. “This can wait.” She pointed to where Nat was walking back with a younger, slimmer man who wore a shroud of authority even while in soot-covered overalls and wearing large muddy gloves and boots. “That isn’t something which should be discussed on these grounds, but we will discuss it as soon as possible. In the meantime, start calling your youth group and see who can came by today.”

(words 944; first published 7/5/2026)

Ordinary Monsters series

One) Monsters in the closet (5/10/2026)
Two) Monsters in the school (5/24/2026)
Three) Monsters in the Restaurant (6/28/2026)
Four) Monsters at the Church (7/5/2026)
Five) Monster in the Club (TBD)

Writing Exercise: The Purchase Funnel


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“Stick Like Glue until Chapter Two” – this is what you need to sell a book now-a-days. Today’s writing assignment is an advanced one, related to the recent Unputdownable posts (see the writing exercise last month Unputdownable (6/4/2026)). If you want to write to sell, either to a publisher or a reader, you need to get the reader’s attention.

Selling books works several different ways. Word of mouth is a favorite. The person already is aware of you; we all have auto-buy authors.

But essential to all of these is the first sale, and the second, and the third. Word of mouth doesn’t happen until a sale happens. Auto-buy doesn’t happen until that first book sale happens.

Most sales are based on the Free-Look-Inside (Amazon) or Pick up the book in the book store and read the first chapter. Somehow the book needs to be Unputdownable from the very start.

The cover provides awareness of the book. The first sentence of the book needs to grab enough interest to get them to read the first paragraph. The first paragraph needs to engage enough to get a reader to scroll through the first page. The first page needs to raise enough desire to get them to read the first chapter. And the first chapter activates the action to buy the book.

As a writer, your job is to craft that first sentence, first paragraph, first page, and first chapter to sell the book. Either to a publisher or a reader (and really, if to a publisher, it will eventually be to a reader). How do you make them buy the book? How do you keep them burning with questions and interest to make that first chapter draw them through to purchase?

WRITING EXERCISE: Concentrating on your first chapter, what techniques can you use to activate the Interest-Desire-Action cycle to a purchase? What have you learned gets people interested quickly? What questions do you need to ask yourself to hone that first chapter? Share your thoughts below.

My Attempt: The first thought that pops into my head is have I started the book in the right place. Am I where things change? Second, have I defined the character enough to interest people? The trade-off of character development and plot-defining action; does my reader know the story AND the character they are signing up to take this ride with. Is the reader invested enough to invest in me?

I guess then the next thing is look at that first sentence – am I describing the grass or the snake in the grass? Look at the first paragraph, what is actually happening with it. First page, first scene, first chapter. I hate the tradeoff between story and first book sale, be there has to be a little. Later, if I get a book sold, I can back off of this front-load work, but the first book is the funnel of sentence to paragraph to page to chapter to sale. If I want to do sales.

Off to get the “Stick like glue until chapter two” in place.