Book Review: The Elements of Style

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You know the authors’ names. You recognize the title. You’ve probably used this book yourself. This is The Elements of Style, the classic style manual, now in a fourth edition. A new Foreword by Roger Angell reminds readers that the advice of Strunk & White is as valuable today as when it was first offered. This book’s unique tone, wit and charm have conveyed the principles of English style to millions of readers. Use the fourth edition of “the little book” to make a big impact with writing.

MY REVIEW

(Review of Second Edition from 1972 – review done January 2020)
I recently ran across a recommendation to read “The Elements of Style” and discovered the book on my shelf; I must have inherited it from my parents.

This classic book, though the initial material is over 100 years old at this point, is still relevant today (with a bit of care as the language continues to evolve). The central point of The Elements of Style, writing brief, specific, powerful, and active, is as relevant today in genre fiction as when this short book was a self-published pamphlet Professor Strunk shared with his classes.

If you don’t want to slog through the Chicago Manual of Style, pick up this short book (74-pages in the version I got). It’s still a gold standard.

Memes: Write Something (Four)

Time to renew the NaNoWriMo memes. These are available to all who want to use them.

(Need more writing memes in your life ?– see my previous memes under Memes: Write Something and Memes: Write Something (Two) and Memes: Write Something (Three))

No Merchandising. Editorial Use Only. No Book Cover Usage
Mandatory Credit: Photo by Moviestore/REX/Shutterstock (9349516i); Letitia Wright; Black Panther – 2018
THE OLD GUARD – Charlize Theron as ÓAndy”
Photo credit: Aimee Spinks/NETFLIX ©2020

Other Cool Blogs: Medium 10/16/2021

A friend, Murray “MJ” Blehart, writes for Medium and posed a question on 10/16/2021, “With Only a Few Readers, Can I Still Call Myself a Writer?“.

This is a question approached from a dozen different angles by writers I know. Some just starting out, some suffering from Imposter Syndrome, some long-term writers through non-standard mediums, etc.

“I just write fan-fic.” — guess what, that is writing. You are a writer.

“I’ve never posted anything. I just write to write.” — Still a writer.

“I’m only self-published and only sold three ebooks outside of what my mom and best friend bought.” — Wow, not only a writer, but a PROFESSIONAL writer. (If you have ever been paid for words you made, that makes you a professional.)

Some people think writing is a straight, broad path everyone shares, but is is more like a trail system in a national park. No single path is the best or most interesting. Some people just want to go a little ways into the woods. Other people take in their survival gear. Some people stick to level ground, other people need climbing equipment. Fan-fic, podcast scripts, blogs, short stories, non-fiction articles, novels, sequential stories, hobby, distraction, income stream, – each is a different path.

Just like a hiker is a hiker, no matter the trail, just so long as they are walking – a writer is a writer so long as they are creating words. A professional writer has been paid at least once; an author has completed a manuscript.

Comparing paths between writers is like comparing trails – they are all beautiful, complicated in their own way, and appropriate for exploration – but saying one is more “right” than another is like comparing a sunset to a cloudless day.

But, central to the question MJ is asking, is how does Readership impact being a Writer. In my opinion, it doesn’t. I write because I enjoy it. Most people do. Reading adds an interaction to the writing and helps me improve my writing – just like taking a trail with another hiker will point out things you have never seen before.

On the other hand, Readership is a business question. I have mentioned before the hats a Professional writer needs to wear. Once writing is chosen to be more than a hobby, and instead an income stream, consideration of Readership (not just readers) comes into play. Switching hats from the word-smith to the word-seller, what is “selling” (bringing in the money) must be considered. Only a few readers means not making enough to “earn a living” or at least covering the cost of writing (my goal). I will write a future blog about finding Income Streams in the Writing Trail System.

Read the original article and write comments below on what you think. Again, the link to the original post is here: https://mjblehart.medium.com/with-only-a-few-readers-can-i-still-call-myself-a-writer-ae754b2db012

Other Cool Blogs: Magical Words 3/3/2011

Product vs. Project
Two major processing methods exist to produce stuff, and the concepts hold equally as well for physical/manufacturing (industrial) as for ethereal/information (technology). 
Product provides mass production the ability to have individuals (or machines) to specialize; the object being produced is moved through the line. At the beginning of the line is all the dissembled items and at the end of the line is the finished delivery product. Production Line never ends, several items are always in process at varying stages. Fixing and streamlining a production line tends to be easy because the same thing is being done all the time; you can see where the holdups and bottlenecks of the process are and management can adjust them until the “slowest” part of the line becomes a different part. Each slowest part gets fixed in turn, until everything is as efficient as possible under the present technology and needs of the production line. The downside is production never ends. Each day is more of the same.
Most chores within a home are products. Making meals three times a day goes from groceries restocking through dishes dried and put away. Sweep, mop, and dust once a week. Mow, weed, and pick up branches. Never-ending tasks, but needed for survival. Just like heartbeats and breathing. A school year is another product task line – the student body moves from kindergarten through senior year.
Projects, on the other hand, are one-off tasks. Once done, they are done. But making them more efficient is nigh impossible, because the bottleneck on one project might not be the bottleneck holding up finishing the project on another. In information technology, most items being produced are projects. 
We are about to go into the “project” time of year for homes. Thanksgiving dinner requires a different group of materials than usually is in the house; Christmas presents need to be bought; Halloween costumes need to be decided on. While we may be using last year’s blueprint as a guide, the costumes and presents must be new, and the T-day dinner is nothing like normal food production and throws the normal meal production line into turmoil for about a week. Within school, there might be special projects to break things up for the teachers and students.
Where does writing fall into this? Well, BIC (butt-in-chair) every day would be product line, as is draft to second draft to cleanup to beta reading to editor to publisher to book. Writing a series might have one book in draft stage while another is with the editor and one about to come out and marketing is needing done.
But at the same time, every story is different. If genres switch up, mysteries have a very different process from romances in the skill and tools needed.
Diana Pharaoh Frances wrote about dealing with the Production vs. Project (though used different terms) issues of writing in “The Truth About Writing Books” in Magical Words (3/3/2011):
Most people are either product or project oriented by nature and/or training. By tapping into the mind-set that works best for you, you can harness a business model that best suits your energy production.
WRITING EXERCISE: Create a business model for your product/project nature.
My attempt
I’m a project person. I like thing done. Some personality types like things undecided and are most comfortable with something always flowing. I’m working toward done. I check in my head how long something is taking, look how far I still have to go, and know about how long I have until finish. Like everyone, I always under guess-tamate, but I’m working toward something.
So for my books, I need a project to finish. Unfortunately, right now I’m completely “ooo, shiny” – moving from one idea to the next with my project windows in hours, not weeks. I need to crack down and create a weeks-type project process. And now – with holiday package season kicking off for the post office and tax season around the corner – that isn’t going to happen. Soon though. 2022 will be the year!