Flash: Reversed Reflections

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The men were still following her, she was sure of it.

Heather adjusted her mirrors after pulling into the rest stop. She watched as the black Tahoe continued down the highway, positive that when she passed the next gas station it would be pulling in behind her again. But for the moment, she was off their radar.

Leaning  back, she took a moment to breathe and center herself, then adjusted the mirrors for real. Cars with intent to follow would have a red haze around them going forward. At least until nightfall, when her sun and nature-based magic failed. That’s when they will attack again, her gut said.

“I guess I could try some of the night magic.” Heather suggested to the two rear-facing seats shown in her inside rear-view mirror. The twins neither approved or disapproved the suggestion.

Not that she would do the night magic her ex-boyfriend taught her. Her demon lover. She hadn’t known how true that appellation had been when Jevil had introduced himself at the club. She thought he had just been a bragging asshole, and she always liked bad boys.

Having a guy gyrate behind her while she was dancing, and somehow whisper in her ear , “I’ll be your demon lover tonight,” made her panties melt five beers in to the night. She hadn’t questioned the magic required to perform a whisper while dancing to ear-shattering club music after sunset.

When she started showing, Jevil had flicked her aside like the butt from a used smoke, and she thought that was that. Lesson learned, sun and darkness don’t mix. Until yesterday when he had shown up at the daycare with two other men who could have passed for his brothers, wanting the kids. The twins had already been strapped in, so she floored her sedan, making one of the men leap out of the way and she had seen wings behind him for a moment before the illusion reformed. Real, honest-to-badness, bat-like wings shimmering like oil in the dim winter sun.

She had spent the night at her house, her haven, behind wards made by her coven before they had cut her from the circle, while the trio battered and pounded the magical walls denying entrance. It was the night before winter solstice, so nearly fifteen hours of her tossing what little magic she had under moonless skies. Every stone and plant in her house was drained or dead by the time the sun rose. The house would not survive another night.

Not that it mattered, because they had tossed gasoline against the side they had breached close enough to touch the physical siding, and then added a match.

Heather barely managed to get the kids into the garage and strapped into their seat in the Honda Civic before flames roared through their living quarters. She pulled out from the flames and smoke while dawn broke the horizon, which she used to power a nuclear blast of Light, capital L intended, to clear her path. She had been driving ever since, exhaustion held off only by magic. She wouldn’t make it through the night.

Stumbling out of the car, she opened the driver-side rear door. Carefully unbuckling her daughter, she took the baby over to a picnic table. Looking around, to see who was about to get an eyeful and finding no one, she kicked off her shoes and dug her toes into the sod. After that she lifted her shirt and unsnapped the nursing bra pad protecting an aching breast. The child latched on as soon as the nipple was in range.

“I know, I know. I am so sorry to have missed your morning feeding. You’ve been so good, Diana.” She had been feeding Apollo when she had smelled the gas; he had not been happy about the interruption, but settled immediately after the car started moving. Both of them had been eerily quiet as she drove in a panic to nowhere. Her coven had removed her when she had shown up with a reverse witch streak, the black lock damning against her blonde hair. Dabbling with Jevil, using sex magic at night and other seductive tricks, left its mark on her body, life, and soul.

“I should have known better.” Heather talked using the rise and fall babies love to hear. “You will know better, won’t you? You are going to be my smart little girl.” The baby sucked steady, leeching liquid from her body she hadn’t replaced since yesterday’s, goddess help her, breakfast. She had worked through lunch at her retail job since two of the staff quit. Well, management must be having a field day with her being a no-show today. She drew more energy from the soil to push back the low-blood-sugar headache and dehydration migraine. The brownish grass turned black as she killed it for her survival, removing every particle of light the living mass had stored for the winter.

The clear blue eyes of the very young stared up at Heather, studying her intently, until, finally, Diana slowed her sucking. Unlatching the nipple, Heather tucked everything back in and slipped on her shoes, not worrying about the mud clinging to her toes, before carrying the drowsy baby to the car. Laying the two-month old back into the seat, Heather started buckling the child in. Kissing her lightly on the forehead, she promised, “I’m going to do everything in my power to protect you and your brother.”

Heather quaked as she considered her words. Everything in her power. She had to do it. Closing the door, she walked around to the other side where Apollo patiently waited for her with his black eyes. As she unbuckled him for the afternoon feeding, Heather commented, “Well, I guess your daddy is going to find out how well he taught me the Empty Magics.”

(Word 975; First published 1/20/2019)

 

Flash: I Was Never There

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Two man stood at the back of the middle school auditorium, watching a badly performed production of Shakespeare’s Midsummers Night Dream, their clothing tight across the top and loose around the legs in a fashion-style unlike the seated patrons. The larger, younger one whispered sideways. “What are we-“

“Shh,” cut him off, even though no one else could hear them. His companion hung on every word spoken by the barely teenage actresses presently on stage.

***

Striding away from the temporal-porter, Harry tossed aside the harness which had dragged him back. “I can’t believe you did that. All of time and space, and you use your fifth trip on a school play.”

“I get one free ride, and you got your required training trip.” Brandon slipped out of his harness and started packing it away for the crew to recalibrate for the next traveler.

“I thought my training trip would be crazy. Like to Woodstock or the Battle of Hastings. Maybe even a real clock turner with dinosaurs.” Harry spun in anger to face the other man. “All the others in my class have been telling us about the absolutely amazing trips they have been on.” He blew air out of his mouth in disgust. “Me, my presentation is going to be a sixth-grade play from fifty years ago. Even with the audio-vid, nothing is going to have impact. We still have so much surviving video from that time, everything has been documented. I’ll be lucky to get a passing grade.”

“Luck of the draw.” The now-retired traveler closed the container and leaned against it, his shoulders slumped and head bowed.

The younger man tramped back to spit words into the back of his trainer. “Luck of the draw? At least tell me why I just spent one of my five observing that travesty to playwrights everywhere.”

“I was drunk,” came the whispered reply, bouncing off the plasti-steel wall of the chamber behind the storage container.

“What?”

Brandon turned around to stare up at Harry with red-rimmed eyes. “I had been drunk that night and didn’t make the play.”

“So? I would have considered both of those things pluses.”

“That was my daughter playing Helena.”

Brandon left the room with Harry following close behind; they squeezed together in the decontamination chamber, Harry activating the sterilization sequence.

“All of time and space, Mr. Pollard, couldn’t you have chosen something more interesting? Even when stuck in your little nostalgia kick there had to have been something better. Maybe a graduation. They usually had important speakers during that era, and I could have presented a forgotten speech.”

Brandon stared off into the mist and purple lights for several moments before responding. “It is the last thing she did before committing suicide because I was never there.”

Words 465; first published 12/16/2018

Flash: Anything but an Aggie

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“Wow, I can’t believe how nervous I am.” Lucas said looking at his parents on the couch. “Is this how you guys felt every time we had a family meeting?”

His father gave his soft smile, and his mom replied, “Public speaking is always nerve-racking, even with … no let me correct that … especially with family members in the audience. You might like to try a debate class at Baylor; mine really helped me.” She then scooted a little further forward on the cushion and brought her knees firmly together. After twitching her skirt to cover her knees, his mom’s long fingers crossed as her hands met. The clasped hands settled without wrinkling her black linen A-line. She looked up, waiting expectantly for her eldest to continue.

Lucas glanced over to his sister slumped in the recliner, one leg hanging over the armrest. The game on her tablet was making plenty of bubble popping and gun blast sounds from whatever she was playing. One of the two earbuds was out which meant Cindy was paying attention as well.

“All right then. I really don’t know how to say this, so I am going just to say it.” The nineteen year old paused to take a deep breath before blurting out. “I’m gay.”

Lucas didn’t realized he closed his eyes when he took the deep breath until he wanted to see his parent’s reactions. He pried his lids open to see no appreciable change. No dropped mouths, pale faces, or red faces working towards eruption. His dad’s soft smile was still in place and his mom nodded as though waiting for something else to follow.

Expecting a bigger reaction from his two very Baptist parents, he added. “That’s it. Just thought you should know.”

“Thank you for informing us.” His mother said, starting to stand. His father reached for his crossword.

“Umm, you’re not upset?” Lucas asked timidly.

“We decided long ago to only get upset about things we can control. Things we don’t have a choice about,” standing on tiptoe, she gave him a peck on the check, “or our children don’t have a choice about, we can only accept.”

His mom went to finish getting ready for the Sunday evening service.

Somewhat shell-shocked, Lucas turned to Cindy, “You okay with this?”

Cindy put her game on pause. “I figured it out last time we went to Galveston, Bro. Anytime your head swiveled it was for a totally hot guy. After that I just watched you watch guys and then scoped them out myself. You were so much better than me picking them out of crowds.”

Lucas looked at his father who snapped the paper to tighten it for writing. “I thought you were going to announce something ghastly like plans to transfer to A&M.”

“Oh Heavens, he is not switching to A&M, is he?!?” His mother shrieked when walking back in the living room with her dress suit jacket.

“No, Mom, not changing into an Aggie.”

“Good.” Giving them all airkisses with her freshly lipsticked mouth, she made for the front door. “Oh, and sweetheart, don’t think just because you are gay, you get out of giving me grandchildren.”

“Of course not, Mom.” He responded to the closing door.

(word 541; originally published 3/20/2013; republished 11/4/2018)

Writing Exercise: Narrative Hook

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REPRINT FROM OLD BLOG: 9/11/2013

I attended ConCarolinas for four years – 2010, 2011, 2012 and 2013. Before that I attended two ConDFWs (2009 and 2010). During ConCarolinas 2010, I was lucky enough to attend my first writer’s workshop.

I have since gone on to attend two more at the 2012 and 2013 ConCarolinas. I published the results of the 2013 workshop on this blog. I thought you might like to see an earlier attempt.

My first one was hosted by Allen Wold. Sixteen writers participated. The instructions were create a narrative hook, total should be under 100 words, write it in ten minutes “… and go.”

Below is what I read to the critique panel and fellow attendees. . I only typed up what I wrote; no changes were added. And yes, I know that “daisys” is spelled wrong; it was spelled wrong then too.

Welcome (Writer’s Workshop Version)

The vampire smiled at seeing the welcome mat in front of the apartment door. Well, that saved a few steps of trying to get permission to cross the threshold. He glanced over his shoulder enjoying the last misty blue colors of sunset. The Florida haze hung low.

Maybe he should have eaten before coming he thought as his gut clenched, but life when he was mortal, (was it only a week ago?) he forced his body to obey his mind. Then he marshaled his emotions and rang the doorbell.

A grey-haired woman answered the door and he thrust the rapidly wilting daisys into her hand.

“Hi mom, sorry I haven’t called.”

(words 111)

WRITING EXERCISE

Your turn. Create a narrative hook – set your phone for a ten minute alarm. When the alarm goes off, the pen goes down. One hundred words for your hook. …. and go. 

Put your hook into the comments below.

Think about whether you have captured your audience. The object of the narrative hook in get them to read the first three pages. The longer narrative should then have enough bristles to stick with the reader so they read the first chapter, and so on. While the first narrative hook isn’t essential, it can make a difference.

Flash: Not Like That

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“Where do you think you are going, young man?” His mother’s shrill matronly voice cut the air just as Merald cracked the front door.

“Out.” The teen rotated toward the kitchen on the heel of one foot. His mother stalked out of her personal realm, crossing her arms and tapping her foot, waiting. “To a friend’s house.”

“Not like that you’re not.”

“God, Mom.” Merald swallowed as his mother’s eyes glowed red at the oath. “Gosh?” Her nose flare stopped. Known to his friends by the nickname Bubba, Merald returned to full steam, forgetting his life had been in danger just a moment before. “I’m eighteen.”

Joannah shook her graying head. “That only makes it worse. You are not leaving the house with that on a Saturday night. Hand it over.” She put out her hand.

“It’ll only be the guys.” He whined, still stuck, as most high schoolers, between child and adult.

“To start,” the wrinkles on her forehead met as his mother scowled. “But not likely at the end. Promise not to leave the first house until you are ready to come home and not call anyone else to come over?”

Bubba eye’s dropped to the floor to study the hole in the toe of his shoe. “Ummm … yes?”

The older woman’s voice firmed to granite. “Hand it over.”

“Dad,” Bubba cried out as he saw his father start to step out of the living room. The older man ducked back a second, then shrugged and braced the family dragon in the hallway.

“Yes Bubba.”

“Tell mom I am old enough.”

Charles closed his eyes, sighed, and asked. “Old enough for what?”

“To leave with my dick intact.”

His father pinched the bridge of his nose. “Son, we have been over this. It is just better to leave that at home.”

“But all my friends get to go out with theirs.” 

“I’m not the judge of other parents,” the woman interrupted, “but no male in my house walks out the door with a penis in his pants. Men just don’t know how to take care of them and do stupid things just because they are attached.”

The father snorted a short laugh. “She is absolutely right. Once, and females weren’t even involved but beer was, I — Ouch!” Hopping on one foot, Merald’s dad banged around the hallway until coming to rest against a wall. He brought up his injured bare foot studying the top for marks. “Case in point, son, dicks, even in the house, can be dangerous. Damn it, I know better than brag about –“

The red-eyed death stare stopped him midsentence.

“I’ll go back to my crossword.”

Merald’s shoulders dropped as he lost his only possible ally. He unzipped his jeans and yanked off the detachable member and handed it over to his mom’s open hand.

“May I go now?”

“Yes sweetie, curfew is ten minutes past midnight.” Joannah kissed her oldest on the cheek. “Have fun.”

(word 495; first published 12/18/2013; republished new blog format 10/21/2018)