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Author Spotlight: Elisa Hansen

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Editing can be a long journey, and I started the journey with Elisa Hansen over a year ago when I first read her “The Company of Death” and told my boss at Falstaff Publishing I wanted the book. During that time we did a minor rewrite, a couple other editing passes, brought on new staff at the publisher, and dealt with bottlenecks in getting books out the doors into hands. Also during that time I got to know Elisa Hansen as a person. And she is a pretty awesome person.

On one hand, she is a vlogger about Vampires of all sorts. Check out her youtube channel “The Maven of the Eventide”. Wonderfully camping, she explores books and movies on this long-running vlog (four years and counting). If it has fangs, it is fang-tastic for her channel. (Also includes her announcement about this book.)

On another hand, she is a mother of a soon-to-be expanding family. Her present spawn is adorable in his madness, and I think present-parasite-soon-to-be-outside-body shall be equally entertaining in her ability to tear through the house faster than the progenitors. 

A third hand is devoted to her writing career, with the publication of her second book this week and working on other vlogs.

Want to get to know this awesome lady too? Her website is here. And her patreon is here. If you are into vampires and camp, I highly recommend her vlog. If you just want to dive into an urban fantasy about Death (not humor-oriented), check out her book on Amazon (and other outlets).

Flash: Respect My Profession

“Please, could you?” he begged. His clear baby-blues pulled at her soul.

Victoria eyed Dodd’s muscular arms, the bunched shoulders pleading for rubs, the tight back ripe for touching.

She should not. She needed to stop giving away her services for free. Now she understood the complaints of doctors and lawyers, people always asking them for advice. The complaints of singers and musicians, where family and friends expected free performances at every life event from weddings to birthdays.

Victoria had spent years getting licensed because she wanted to help people. Now she wanted her career to pay her mortgage. Moreover, she wanted her friends to respect her as a professional.

Did she ask Dodd to fix her computer every time he came over? Well, maybe. That last malware infestation had been a bitch.

Sighing, she dug out the special oil blend.

A childish grin danced over Dodd’s lips as he buried his head between his crossed arms. Victoria could do a massage like no one else.

(words 169 – originally appearing at Breathless Press 9/11/2013 for the 6/10/12 Sunday Fun – See the picture that inspired the story! – As I do not know the copyright permissions, I have not copied it here; first published on the website 9/11/2013; republished 1/13/2019)

Editing Rant: Timeline

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Love this story. Wonderful … wait, what just happened? During the morning the person was caught in rush hour, but evening she is surprised when people are working on a Sunday? Oh, and a secondary character just flew home after a long weekend. Early morning has rush hour just about one hour past dawn a nice solid 8:30, but evening rush hour is long past though it is just sunset, and since it is late autumn in the story that makes it about 5:30 pm? Why no rush hour at 5:30 pm?

TIMELINE folks are your friend, and they are not just for thrillers anymore.

Anytime you have a countdown … a letter arrives saying a visitor arrives in four days, a child is kidnapped and given 48 hours to find, or a person comes back after four weeks away … make sure these work. Your readers don’t need to know the countdown to the hour (or minute depending on how tight it is), but you should. And if daylight versus nighttime hours apply keep track of the time of year and how many daylight hours actually exist. Is it the 14-hours of summer or the 9-hours of winter, or equinox of 12 hours for the spring and fall? Are tides 24-hour apart or 12?

Timeline, seasonal, daylight hours. Everyone understands the passage of time and it is one of the fastest things to throw readers out of the story when the fourth dimension is ill-defined.

I can go on and on about this. It is a common issue. Make a timeline, because the rewrite tends to get extensive. I usually just put in comments with “TIMELINE” notes over to the side during the editing phase to make certain everything lines up.

Flash: Old Dragon

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[Old Dragon – flash story]

 

“So, grandpa, what was it like back in the days of dragons and knights?” The young man had superior air about him. Ancient and venerable, history and honor, these no longer had value to him. He wanted to bait me, belittle my accomplishments. He passed me a heavy stick; thick as his wrist. I needed both hands to steady the weight.

 

I admit my days of glory were not yesterday, or even the day before yesterday. I like the comfort of the community hall and earned my keep by keeping the fire burning, feeding it with twigs and sticks the young things brought as gifts for the next story. I fed his branch into the fire, the flare of heat pushed back the cold and arthritic pain.

 

“I first saw a dragon when I was eight, nearly nine. I was gathering wood, being the lowliest and youngest of Sir Egil’s squires. I erroneously thought of myself higher than I was and was complaining the whole time to Windflyer, the warhorse I was tasked with excising that day.”

 

I pressed a cup to my lips wetting them. Under my eyelashes, I watch the boy lean forward unconsciously. Two or three children, tiring of carding wool for the spinners, gathered at my feet. They made slight rustling noises as they settled. I waited patiently, but my hopeful tormentor, eager to prove his early manhood superiority, was as uncomfortable with silence as most his age, gave me power when he asked “So what happened?”

 

“The horse, the smallest, fastest, and steadiest of the three horses my knight kept in the lords’ stables, had been difficult to push into the hills that night. He had been so unlike his normal self, I tethered him as I gathered wood and loaded the sled. A good thing too, otherwise I would have had a long walk that night and things would have been very different around here.”

 

One of my miniature audience could not contain his excitement. “Because he would have run away.”

 

“Aye, Barry. Windflyer would have been safely home before I had taken three steps.”

 

The young man, Talar, leaned against a chair. He was new to our town, a tradesman establishing a laundry using machines we had never seen before.

 

“And I wouldn’t have blamed him…Because the night screamed.” I stabbed a finger towards my stick provider. “Have you heard a wildcat scream in your travels? The bloodcurling sound that travels up and down your spine, somewhere between a human scream and something…else?”

 

“Sure. Are you saying it sounded like that?”

 

“No.” I waited, staring at him until he shifted just a little. I watched his eyes search the room as he tried to process my flat response. He slipped into the chair fully. Just before his next question came, I filled in the silence “The sound is as different from a wildcat as a wildcat’s from a chicken cluck. A wildcat may sound unnatural, but a dragon IS unnatural. The scream tears your spine in half with shivers. Every part of my body insisted I had to run, run away, and no part of my body could move. My ears burned. My eyes watered. My breath stopped.”

 

“Then I saw it. A shimmer of night destroying trees with a leap. It climbed through the air, clawing and scratching. The heavy form pulled from ground to sky by sheer willpower for nothing that huge should fly. I felt empty air hit me like blows as it fled the horrific presence. A black shadow cut a hole in the starry sky, widening it and widening it. Absorbing all light in a path towards the lord’s castle. Blocking all sound but the beating and pounding of wings against helpless air.”

 

(Words 627; first published 1/24/2014; republished 1/6/2019)