Ready for tomorrow’s flash?
Last month I wrote a flash on Team Necro. When I worked through it, the characters and scene were all tell instead of show. I was describing the situation with scene and character descriptions overshadowing the story – even stuffing in some backstory. Basically parsing out the beginnings of a new world and group of people.
I have tried the story again, this time concentrating on the story instead of world creating. Hope you like the new version. These characters have been popping up the last few months with additional stories they want told. This is still more of a scene then a story, but I think it is much better than the first version. Let me know what you think when you read it tomorrow.